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人教部編版語文九年級下冊寫作修改潤色教案
一個人的靈魂總是會在他的眼睛和語言里得到表露。靈魂高尚者，眼光明亮，語言高雅。反過來，我們也可以通過個人的眼睛和語言而窺視到他的靈魂，眼神淫邪，語言污穢，他的靈魂必定卑鄙骯臟。修改指導：這段論述用正反雙向說理的方法闡明了一個人的靈魂、眼睛、語言三者之間的關系，條理清楚，語言簡明，從思維和闡述上來看，應該說是準確嚴密的。但是，我們可以將語言潤色，使原文變得更好。修改示例：靈魂儲藏在人的心中，閃動在人的眼里，表露在人的嘴上。眼睛足以傳情。它毫不掩飾地展現(xiàn)出你的學識、品性和情操：也許你貌不驚人，眼小如豆，但它卻可以流露出華美的氣質;也許你美目流盼，但卻可能有一個蜷曲衰敗的靈魂在其中沉睡。師：精妙地運用動詞，恰到好處地使用比喻、對比等修辭手法，巧妙地使用假設句式，使文章在闡釋事理的同時也不乏生動形象?！驹O計意圖】把握了習作的要求后，給學生幾個片段嘗試修改。學生先從“言”和“意”等方面來進行修改，教師再具體示范指導，為綜合修改全文做準備。
人教部編版語文九年級下冊寫作布局謀篇教案
在我們身邊，隨處可見的小事物中也蘊含著許許多多的道理。一個孩子手里拿著橘子，問了媽媽兩個問題：“為什么吃橘子要剝皮呢？”“橘子里的果肉為什么是一瓣兒一瓣兒的呢？”這僅是兩個平淡無奇的小問題，但孩子和媽媽的一問一答里卻蘊藏了做人的大道理。吃橘子要剝皮，那是橘子在告訴你，你想要得到的東西，不是伸手就能得到，而是要付出勞動的。世界上沒有可以白吃的午餐，任何東西都要靠自己的雙手來獲得，就算已經遍體鱗傷，也要堅持下去，因為用自己的汗水換取的果實才是最有意義的。即使那果實不是最大的，也不是最甜的，但它卻是最美味的，因為在這美味里面有你的毅力和努力。那些衣來伸手、飯來張口的人，是永遠體會不到勞動的快樂和自豪的。不會勞動的人，也就是不會生活的人，也不可能在這個社會上立足。因此我們絕對不可以成為一個不勞而獲的人，除非你愿意就此墮落。
2022年廣西貴港市中考英語真題（原卷版）
Melatonin(褪黑素) is produced by the body to control when you get sleepy and whenyou wake up. As night falls, the levels of melatonin rise, telling the bodythat it’s time for bed. And the levels naturally fall as daylight comes near,getting you ready to greet the day.
2022年江蘇省連云港市中考英語真題（原卷版）
There was an old oak tree in the garden. Holly’sfather wanted to cut it down and build a new office there. Holly felt sad anddidn’t agree. She moved into the old tree house which was her favourite place in the world.One day, it rained all night.
2022年遼寧省沈陽市中考英語真題（原卷版）
For a long time, I guarded the garden of peaceand quiet. When the children followed me into the garden, I would expect themto be out of sight (視野). And I would hand out tasks.
2022年甘肅省白銀市中考英語真題（原卷版）
Chinese taikonauts Zhai Zhigang, Wang Yaping andYe Guangfu carried out the Shenzhou-13 spaceflight mission (任務) that started on Oct. 15,2021. This mission lasts 6 months, which was also a national record.
2022年江蘇省連云港市中考英語真題（解析版）
Zu Ti was a great man of Jin Dynasty. He was ____16____ for his hard work andgreat achievements. But when he was a child, he was a naughty (頑皮的)boy who showed little ____17____ inreading. As he grew up, Zu Ti ____18____ hedidn’t have enough knowledge.
2022年湖南省邵陽市中考英語真題 （解析版）
An unexpected thing happened in the ____11____ of my eleventh year. Thehome I had ____12____inwas burned to the ground in the middle of the night. ____13____ , mymom, dad, grandma, brothers and I escaped(幸免于難).
2022年貴州省銅仁市中考英語真題（原卷版）
Bill doesn’t like doingfamily housework at all. He likes to play with his friends in the park.Bill asks his four friends about their housework.Bill: What do you have to do at home, Dan?
2022年湖南省郴州市中考英語真題（原卷版）
A passenger told an air hostess（空姐）thathe needed a cup of water to take his medicine when the plane just took off. Shetold him that she would bring him the ___11___ in ten minutes.
2022年湖南省長沙市中考英語真題（解析版）
I lost mysmartphone at West Park on Loomis Road on Monday morning, Oct. 27. The photosin it haven’t been uploaded（上傳）to the Cloud. They are very important to me.Please call me at 730-8607.
2022年湖南省永州市中考英語真題（解析版）
Parents and children often face the challengesof money. Common topics include setting pocket money, learning to save, anddeciding to buy expensive things. The goal of most parents is to teach theirkids how to deal with money wisely. The goal of most kids is getting money tospend. How can families achieve these goals?
2022年廣西北部灣經濟區(qū)中考英語真題（原卷版）
Ibelieved that I was right and he was wrong, and Tony believed that I was wrongand he was right. Our teacher, a kind and smart lady, decided to teach us alesson. She brought us to the front of the class and placed him on one side ofher desk and me on the other. In the middle of her desk was a large and roundobject. I could clearly see that it was black. The teacher asked us what colorthe object was. “White,” Tony answered. I couldn’t believe he said the object waswhite! “Clearly, it was black!” Another argument started between Tony and me,this time about the color of the object.
2022年廣東省廣州市中考英語真題（解析版）
When youand your friends turn to each other to talk about problems or troubles, yougive each other advice and help. One important thing of our growth is to makedecisions to help our friends and learn to support each other. This requires usto learn what it means to help friends and how to help them in right ways.
2022年山東省濟寧市中考英語真題（原卷版）
Each ofthem has their own experience- two people with synesthesia may both “feel”music, but they almost never feel the music in the same way. For example, onemay feel the music of the violin lightly brushing his face; the other may feelit on her ankle (腳踝). And one’s experience of synesthesia is alwaysthe same. If they see the number 5 in the color blue, then 5 is blue every timethey see it.
2022年內蒙古赤峰市中考英語真題（原卷版）
We allknow that rice, wheat and corn are staples, but do you know there is anotherkind of staple food—potatoes? Potatoes have many advantages. Theyare a good source of vitamin C and potassium(鉀). A potato’s vitamin C isas rich as 10 apples. What’s more,potatoes are low in calories(卡路里)-onlythree fourths of the same amount of wheat and corn, according to People’s Daily. Potatoes are easy togrow. It can be grown in both the north and the south during winter, spring andautumn. The plant is also able to bear drought(干旱). Some areas of China arefacing water shortages, so the potato is safe to grow.
2022年內蒙古赤峰市中考英語真題（解析版）
Chopsticksoriginated from(起源于) China.Though simple and little, they are agreat invention in the history of humans. There are many legends aboutChopsticks, Da Yu and Chopsticks is one of them.It issaid that during Yao and Shun times, Shun ordered Yu to control the flood. Oneday, Yu took a boat to an island, he was so hungry that he used an earth pot tocook meat. After the meat was well-done in boiled water, he didn’t want towaste time to wait for it to cool, so he took two branches to pick up the meatfrom the soup. After, to save time, he always took small branches to take outfood from the hot pot. For a long time, he was skilled at picking up food withsmall sticks. In this way, the first types of chopsticks were born.
2022年黑龍江省龍東地區(qū)中考英語真題（解析版）
Choose the best choice fromA to F to finish the dialogue. You have one more answer. Each choice should beused only once.A: Hello, I’m a schoolnewspaper reporter. May I ask you some questions?B: ____46____
2022年黑龍江省龍東地區(qū)中考英語真題（原卷版）
B: It’s about theexperiments three astronauts are doing on the space station.A: That’s great. I’minterested in space, so I want to be an astronaut like them.
2022年黑龍江省綏化市中考英語真題（解析版）
There are many kinds ___21___art forms in China. ___22___ you often see any of them in your life?They help us understand and enjoy the traditional Chinese culture. When theSpring Festival comes, some people often ___23___ the red paper intodifferent art works with scissors.