第一環(huán)節(jié):情境引入內(nèi)容:(一) 情境1實(shí)物投影,并呈現(xiàn)問(wèn)題:在一望無(wú)際的呼倫貝爾大草原上,一頭老牛和一匹小馬馱著包裹吃力地行走著,老牛喘著氣吃力地說(shuō):“累死我了”,小馬說(shuō):“你還累,這么大的個(gè),才比我多馱2個(gè).”老牛氣不過(guò)地說(shuō):“哼,我從你背上拿來(lái)一個(gè),我的包裹就是你的2倍!”,小馬天真而不信地說(shuō):“真的?!”同學(xué)們,你們能否用數(shù)學(xué)知識(shí)幫助小馬解決問(wèn)題呢?請(qǐng)每個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)小組討論(討論2分鐘,然后發(fā)言).教師注意引導(dǎo)學(xué)生設(shè)兩個(gè)未知數(shù),從而得出二元一次方程.這個(gè)問(wèn)題由于涉及到老牛和小馬的馱包裹的兩個(gè)未知數(shù),我們?cè)O(shè)老牛馱x個(gè)包裹,小馬馱y個(gè)包裹,老牛的包裹數(shù)比小馬多2個(gè),由此得方程 ,若老牛從小馬背上拿來(lái)1個(gè)包裹,這時(shí)老牛的包裹是小馬的2倍, 得方程: .
1.這節(jié)課以實(shí)驗(yàn)為依據(jù),采用控制變量的方法進(jìn)行研究。這一方法今后在電學(xué)、熱學(xué)的研究中還要用到。我們根據(jù)已掌握的知識(shí)設(shè)計(jì)實(shí)驗(yàn)、探索規(guī)律是物體研究的重要方法。2.定義力的單位“牛頓”使得k=1,得到牛頓第二定律的簡(jiǎn)單形式F=ma。使用簡(jiǎn)捷的數(shù)學(xué)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)物理規(guī)律是物理學(xué)的特征之一,但應(yīng)知道它所對(duì)應(yīng)的文字內(nèi)容和意義。3.牛頓第二定律概括了運(yùn)動(dòng)和力的關(guān)系。物體所受合外力恒定,其加速度恒定;合外力為零,加速度為零。即合外力決定了加速度,而加速度影響著物體的運(yùn)動(dòng)情況。因此,牛頓第二定律是把前兩章力和物體的運(yùn)動(dòng)構(gòu)成一個(gè)整體,其中的紐帶就是加速度。四、評(píng)價(jià)方案及說(shuō)明1、對(duì)科學(xué)知識(shí)與技能的評(píng)價(jià)要注重科學(xué)內(nèi)容的理解與應(yīng)用,而不是單純記憶。技能的評(píng)價(jià)目標(biāo)包括觀察技能、實(shí)驗(yàn)技能等方面。對(duì)科學(xué)的技能的評(píng)價(jià)要盡量融合在科學(xué)探究過(guò)程的情景中。對(duì)科學(xué)知識(shí)的評(píng)價(jià)主要從兩方面,一是根據(jù)學(xué)生診斷性練習(xí);二是通過(guò)學(xué)生作業(yè)反映學(xué)生掌握情況。
[補(bǔ)充]:鄭州是特大城市,我們對(duì)燈火通明的夜晚都有深刻的體會(huì),我們都體會(huì)過(guò)光給他們帶來(lái)的好處,而對(duì)過(guò)多過(guò)亮的光帶來(lái)的危害則很少認(rèn)真地思考過(guò),且光污染給都市人們和其他生物和環(huán)境帶來(lái)的不利影響也越來(lái)越大,所以,我在這兒給同學(xué)們補(bǔ)充光污染,目的是提醒他們要增強(qiáng)環(huán)保意識(shí),要理解城市在建設(shè)過(guò)程中要減少城市各類(lèi)活動(dòng)對(duì)環(huán)境的污染;另外,隨著城市的不斷發(fā)展,還可能會(huì)產(chǎn)生新 的污染物。還培養(yǎng)了學(xué)生用發(fā)展的眼光來(lái)看世界。[思考]:如何降低城市化對(duì)地理環(huán)境產(chǎn)生的影響?[答]:發(fā)展生態(tài)城市,使人工環(huán)境和自然環(huán)境和諧統(tǒng)一起來(lái)。一方面在城市建設(shè)中,要發(fā)展低污染的節(jié)能建筑和綠色交通,減少城市各類(lèi)活動(dòng)對(duì)環(huán)境的污染;另一方面使城市景觀盡可能地與山、河、湖、海、植被等自然景觀保持協(xié)調(diào),建立一種良性循環(huán)。
學(xué)生借助對(duì)對(duì)聯(lián)的賞析,回味杜甫窮年漂泊的一生,體會(huì)杜甫作為一個(gè)深受儒家思想影響的讀書(shū)人,忠君念闕,心系蒼生的偉大情懷。(這一設(shè)計(jì)理念源于孟子所云:“誦其文,讀其詩(shī),不知其人,可乎?是以論其世也。”知人論世是鑒賞詩(shī)歌的第一步 )(二)研讀課文1、初讀,朗讀吟誦,感知韻律美。要求學(xué)生讀準(zhǔn)字音,讀懂句意,體會(huì)律詩(shī)的節(jié)奏、押韻的順暢之美。2、再讀,披詞入情,感受感情美。讓學(xué)生用一個(gè)字概括這首詩(shī)的情感內(nèi)容。(此教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)是從新課標(biāo)要求的文學(xué)作品應(yīng)先整體感知,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生歸納推理的邏輯思維能力出發(fā)進(jìn)行的設(shè)計(jì)。)其答案是一個(gè)“悲”字,由此輻射出兩個(gè)問(wèn)題:詩(shī)人因何而“悲”?如何寫(xiě)“悲”?(此問(wèn)題設(shè)計(jì)順勢(shì)而出,目的在于培養(yǎng)學(xué)生探究問(wèn)題的能力。)
三.分析第三部分:1.夫妻贈(zèng)詩(shī)表現(xiàn)了二人怎樣的心情?提示:崔鶯鶯告誡張生切勿忘記她;張生則發(fā)誓永無(wú)別戀。這充分展示了二人深厚的情誼。2.怎樣理解[耍孩兒]中的典故?提示:“紅淚”借王嘉《拾遺記》的典故,司馬青衫借白居易《琵琶行》的典故,表現(xiàn)主人公因離別而生的傷心之情?!安畡陲w去燕西歸”則用牛郎織女的典故表現(xiàn)兩人纏綿難舍的心情。3.[五煞]表明了主人公怎樣的心情?提示:對(duì)張生的生活的關(guān)心,千叮萬(wàn)囑,真情自現(xiàn)。4.[二煞]中所用是幾個(gè)典故?這些典故的作用是什么?提示:三個(gè)典故,見(jiàn)課本。其作用是表明崔鶯鶯對(duì)張生的擔(dān)心。四.分析第四部分:1.[一煞]中再寫(xiě)環(huán)境,其作用是否與先前所寫(xiě)相同?提示:稍有不同,這里是表現(xiàn)崔鶯鶯目送張生遠(yuǎn)去時(shí)那種凄愴悲苦的眷戀之情。以所見(jiàn)之物,寫(xiě)內(nèi)心深藏之情。2.[收尾]中寫(xiě)‘殘照’其含義是什么?提示:以“殘照”表現(xiàn)內(nèi)心的悵惘失意之情。
二、課堂教學(xué):1、學(xué)生簡(jiǎn)介背景:教師掌握:漢武帝開(kāi)始對(duì)匈奴進(jìn)行長(zhǎng)期的討伐戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng),其中取得了三次具有決定意義的勝利,時(shí)間為公元前127年、前121年、前119年。匈奴的威勢(shì)大大削弱之后,表示愿意與漢講和,但雙方矛盾還是根深蒂固。所以,到公元前100年,蘇武出使匈奴時(shí),卻被扣留,并迫使他投降?!短K武傳》集中敘寫(xiě)了蘇武出使匈奴被扣留期間的事跡,熱烈頌揚(yáng)了他在敵人面前富貴不能淫,貧賤不能移,威武不能屈,饑寒壓不倒,私情無(wú)所動(dòng)的浩然正氣,充分肯定了他堅(jiān)毅忠貞,大義凜然,視死如歸的民族氣節(jié)。2、作者介紹:班固(32——92年),字孟堅(jiān),扶風(fēng)安陵(今陜西咸陽(yáng)市東)人。東漢著名的史學(xué)家。《后漢書(shū)·班固傳》稱(chēng)他“年九歲,能屬文,誦詩(shī)賦。及長(zhǎng),遂博貫載籍,九流百家之言,無(wú)不窮究。所學(xué)無(wú)常師,不為章句,舉大義而已”。其父班彪曾續(xù)司馬遷《史記》作《史記后傳》,未成而故。
一、作者簡(jiǎn)介:威廉·莎士比亞(1564~1616),英國(guó)文藝復(fù)興時(shí)期偉大的戲劇家和詩(shī)人。(人文主義:歐洲文藝復(fù)興時(shí)期新興資產(chǎn)階級(jí)反封建的社會(huì)思潮。資產(chǎn)階級(jí)人道主義的最初形式。它肯定人性和人的價(jià)值,要求享受人世的歡樂(lè),要求人的個(gè)性解放和自由平等,推崇人的感性經(jīng)驗(yàn)和理性思維。)一生共寫(xiě)有37部戲劇,154首14行詩(shī),兩首長(zhǎng)詩(shī)和許多其他詩(shī)歌。主要代表作有早期的歷史劇、喜劇———《亨利四世》、《仲夏夜之夢(mèng)》、《威尼斯商人》和《羅密歐與朱麗葉》等;中期的悲劇———《哈姆萊特》、《奧瑟羅》、《李爾王》和《麥克白》等;后期的傳奇劇———《暴風(fēng)雨》等。二、莎士比亞創(chuàng)作《哈姆萊特》的社會(huì)背景:莎士比亞是歐洲文藝復(fù)興時(shí)期英國(guó)偉大的戲劇家和詩(shī)人。他生活在歐洲歷史上封建制度日趨沒(méi)落、資本主義興起的交替時(shí)代。哈姆萊特是丹麥古代的王子。莎士比亞故意以超越時(shí)代的誤差將哈姆萊特搬到伊麗莎白統(tǒng)治未年的英國(guó)現(xiàn)實(shí)中來(lái)。
【教材分析】This teaching period mainly deals with the grammar: the restrictive relative clauses.This period carries considerable significance to the cultivation of students’ writing competence and lays a solid foundation for the basic appreciation of language beauty. The teacher is expected to enable students to master this period thoroughly and consolidate the knowledge by doing some exercise of good quality.【教學(xué)目標(biāo)與核心素養(yǎng)】1. Get students to have a good understanding of the basic usages of the restrictive relative clauses.2. Enable students to use the restrictive relative clauses flexibly.3. Develop students’ speaking and cooperating abilities.4. Strengthen students’ great interest in grammar learning.【教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)】How to enable students to have a good understanding of the restrictive relative clauses, especially the uses of the relative words such as which, that, who, whom.【教學(xué)過(guò)程】Step1: 語(yǔ)法知識(shí)呈現(xiàn)定語(yǔ)從句(一)—關(guān)系代詞的用法在復(fù)合句中, 修飾名詞或代詞的從句叫定語(yǔ)從句。定語(yǔ)從句通常由關(guān)系代詞或關(guān)系副詞引導(dǎo),說(shuō)明事物的具體信息,從句位于被修飾詞之后。被定語(yǔ)從句修飾的詞叫先行詞,引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句的詞叫關(guān)系詞,關(guān)系詞指代先行詞,并在定語(yǔ)從句中充當(dāng)成分。關(guān)系詞有兩種:關(guān)系代詞who, whom ,whose, that, which, as和關(guān)系副詞when, where, why。
【教材分析】高考聽(tīng)力材料的選用非常重視語(yǔ)言真實(shí)性和交際性的原則,語(yǔ)言材料一般來(lái)源于實(shí)際生活,對(duì)話(huà)的內(nèi)容大都取材于日常生活,即衣、食、住、行、工作、學(xué)習(xí)、天氣、生活環(huán)境等話(huà)題,可分為校園、公共場(chǎng)所、家庭等方面,如: shopping, finding the way, doing one’s homework, seeing a doctor, making a phone call, weather report, asking for different kinds of information等。新教材的特點(diǎn)就是利用生活中真實(shí)文本,只是降低難度,讓學(xué)生注重語(yǔ)言的應(yīng)用,將是我們高考把握方向的重要因素?!窘虒W(xué)目標(biāo)與核心素養(yǎng)】學(xué)習(xí)能力目標(biāo):在聽(tīng)力當(dāng)中,學(xué)生應(yīng)該有效規(guī)劃學(xué)習(xí)方法,選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)牟呗耘c方法。這節(jié)課的訓(xùn)練目標(biāo)是讓學(xué)生有正確的預(yù)測(cè)和抓住問(wèn)題的關(guān)鍵信息,從而用心去聽(tīng)來(lái)找尋關(guān)鍵信息。根據(jù)生活中實(shí)際情況和高考常見(jiàn)語(yǔ)境,我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)提前預(yù)測(cè)和抓住題干中的w很重要,即what, where, when, why等等。
5. Read to get detailed information about Paragraph 5.Q1. What shows the revival of Tangshan?Q2. How can Tangshan revive itself and get up on its feet again?Q3. In times of disasters, how can we go through it?T: In times of disasters, we should unify, show the wisdom and stay positive.Step 4 Activity 4 Highlighting the theme and reflecting1. Make a summary of the text.2. Further understand the titleQ: After our learning, why do you think the earth didn’t sleep on that night?T: An earthquake happened. The people in the earthquake suffered a lot, and the people outside Tangshan were concerned about the people there a lot.3. Reflect through discussion on what can be learnt after reading.T: Disasters are powerful. Unpreparedness can be deadly. Life is weak, but if people work together to help each other, disasters can be defeated.There is no love from disaster, but we have love in the human heart.Step 5 Assignment How does the writer convey that the earthquake was deadly, and that people were helpless during the earthquake? Try to find some attractive and impressive expressions and note them down.
Step 5 Practice一、完成下列句子。1. Judy and I _______________(把車(chē)停下來(lái)(park))in an underground car Park near Trafalgar Square, where we could ______________________(讓我們的車(chē)充電(charge)).2. When we finally reached the service desk to ask for audio guides, we heard it ___________ that there were no audio guides____________(留下,剩下).3. We__________________________(發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對(duì)...很驚訝)the large number of visitors and the amount of noise at the entrance of the National Gallery.4. Judy ____________________(眼神專(zhuān)注于) Van Gogh’s Sunflowers. It was hard to approach the painting as there were so many people around.5. She ____________________(把這幅畫(huà)的復(fù)制品裝箱(box)) to ensure that it was delivered safely.答案:1.had our car parked get our car battery charged 2. announced left 3. found ourselves very surprised 4. had her eyes fixed on 5. had a copy of the painting boxed二、用過(guò)去分詞對(duì)下列句子進(jìn)行改寫(xiě)。1. Loch Ness was surrounded by beautiful natural landscape, which made it look amazing.2. Carl and his friend stayed with a generous family who offered them bread with butter and honey that was homemade.3. The family’s ancestors once attended to soldiers who were wounded in the First World War.4. The young people were attracted by the legend of Loch Ness. They watched over the lake with their cameras and binoculars, which were positioned on the hill.答案:1. Loch Ness surrounded by beautiful natural landscape looks amazing.2. Carl and his friends stayed with a generous family who offered them homemade bread with butter and honey.3. The family’s ancestors once attended to wounded soldiers in the First World War.4. The young people attracted by the legend of Loch Ness watched over the lake with their cameras and binoculars positioned on the hill.
This unit is about history and traditions. From the opening page, we can know that this unit will introduce the history and traditions around the world. As Marcus Garvey says “A people without the knowledge of their past history, origin and culture is like a tree without roots”, it is important for students to realize the importance and value of knowing the history and traditions and their further meanings. And this part ( listening and speaking ) is divided into two parts: Part A---share views on historic sites, Part B ---talk about a visit to a historic tourist destination. By talking with a foreigner, the speakers introduce the historic attractions and their cultures. Part A is that William, a British student, who was going to visit the Confucius Temple and a Chinese student, Xiao Kong, who was going to the Confucius Temple to meet with the members of the research group, went together and exchanged their views on the Confucius Temple, Confucius, Confucius' descendants and Confucius' educational thoughts. Part B is a conversation between Xiao Yan, a youth hostel receptionist and Paul, a backpacker about the feelings and experience after visiting the Chinese famous tourist attraction Pingyao.1. Guide students to understand the content of listening texts in terms of the whole and key details; 2. Cultivate students' ability to guess the meaning of words in listening; discuss with their peers how to talk about historic spots and great person.3. Instruct students to use functional sentences of showing one’s excitement, surprise and disappointment.1. Guide students to understand the content of listening texts in terms of the whole and key details; 2. Cultivate students' ability to discuss with their peers the related topics.3. Enable students to use the functional items of showing one’s excitement, surprise and disappointment.
一、明確目標(biāo)1.注意小傳的寫(xiě)作特色,如小傳的“小”以及是怎樣小中見(jiàn)大的。2.引導(dǎo)學(xué)生進(jìn)行綜合把握和比較閱讀以更好地理解課文內(nèi)容,看看在寫(xiě)法上各自有什么不同。3.一詞多義的準(zhǔn)確知識(shí)運(yùn)用二、整體感知1.解題李商隱的《李賀小傳》有別于一般傳記文的客觀直敘,是一篇性情之文;同時(shí)也和作者的詩(shī)歌風(fēng)格相異,寫(xiě)得樸實(shí)自然而又不乏意趣。2.本文所體現(xiàn)的“小傳”的特點(diǎn)本文最大的特點(diǎn)在于:小傳雖小,但小中有大、以小見(jiàn)大。其“小”在于:作者并沒(méi)有全面勾勒詩(shī)人李賀的一生,對(duì)他的生平經(jīng)歷也記敘不多,而是選取了他生活中的若干小片段進(jìn)行插敘,以小片段撐起傳記的主干。此外,在篇幅上,全文寥寥數(shù)百字,語(yǔ)言極為精練。而其“大”又體現(xiàn)在:極小極短的篇幅卻具有很大的容量,集敘事、議論和曲折的抒情于一體。內(nèi)容渾厚,意味深長(zhǎng)。
(2)個(gè)性化的對(duì)話(huà)描寫(xiě)。在三個(gè)事件的描述中,大段對(duì)話(huà)占了很大篇幅,有的情節(jié)干脆由對(duì)話(huà)來(lái)表達(dá),許多對(duì)話(huà)形象地表現(xiàn)了人物的思想和性格,使我們?nèi)缏勂渎?,如?jiàn)其人。先說(shuō)藺相如,他在秦廷上的慷慨陳詞,有時(shí)語(yǔ)氣平和,謙恭有禮,使對(duì)方放松警惕;有時(shí)直言斥責(zé),有理有據(jù),雄辯折人;有時(shí)堅(jiān)決表態(tài),分析利害,暗示對(duì)方;有時(shí)怒不可遏,咄咄逼人??傊~鋒犀利,剛?cè)峒媸州p重恰當(dāng),充分表現(xiàn)了他是一個(gè)熱愛(ài)祖國(guó)、不畏強(qiáng)暴、有智有勇,長(zhǎng)于辭令的外交家。再說(shuō)廉頗,在將相交歡事件中,他先前說(shuō)的這一番話(huà),表現(xiàn)了他的自高自大和心胸狹窄,非常符合武將廉頗的性格特點(diǎn),后來(lái)寫(xiě)他知過(guò)改過(guò),負(fù)荊請(qǐng)罪時(shí)說(shuō):“鄙賤之人,不知將軍寬之至此也!”語(yǔ)言不多,坦誠(chéng)直率,可敬可愛(ài)。(解說(shuō):對(duì)話(huà)描寫(xiě)的分析,宜以學(xué)生為主,教師必要時(shí)適當(dāng)點(diǎn)撥。)
采用明段意分段法:先逐段概括段意,然后用合并同類(lèi)項(xiàng)法把相關(guān)聯(lián)緊縮密的自然段合在一起。全文五個(gè)自然段中,二、三、四自然段講的都是張衡取得的科學(xué)成就,自然應(yīng)合為一大段。這樣,就理清了文章的結(jié)構(gòu)。全文可分為三個(gè)部分:(1)寫(xiě)張衡的品格和文才①(2)寫(xiě)張衡在科學(xué)技術(shù)上取得的成就(②③④)(3)寫(xiě)張衡的政治才干(⑤)第二部分是文章的重點(diǎn),又可分為兩層:一是仕途情況,以及制作渾天儀和著《靈憲》、《算圖論》的情況;一是專(zhuān)門(mén)介紹候風(fēng)地支儀。顯然,后者又是第二部分的重點(diǎn)。作者這樣處理文章的詳略安排。無(wú)疑是非常正確的,因?yàn)閺埡庖簧卸喾矫娴牟拍芎统删?,而他在科技方面的才能和?chuàng)造發(fā)明最為突出,理應(yīng)成為本文記敘的重點(diǎn)。四、小結(jié)1.了解全文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu),掌握明段意分段法。2.了解文章的詳略安排。五、作業(yè)
③于是,大自然出現(xiàn)了驚人的奇跡,不毛的石縫間叢生出倔強(qiáng)的生命。④或者就只是一簇一簇?zé)o名的野草,春綠秋黃。歲歲枯榮。它們只有三兩片長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的細(xì)瘦的薄葉,那細(xì)微的葉脈,告知你生存該是多么艱難;更有的。它們就在一簇一簇瘦葉下自己生長(zhǎng)出根須,只為了少向母體吮吸一點(diǎn)乳汁,便自去尋找那不易被覺(jué)察到的石縫。這就是生命,如果這是一種本能,那么它正說(shuō)明生命的本能是多么尊貴,生命有權(quán)自認(rèn)為輝煌壯麗,生機(jī)竟是這樣地不可扼制。⑤或者就是一團(tuán)一團(tuán)小小的山花,大多又都是那苦苦的蒲公英。它們不似田野上的同宗長(zhǎng)得那樣茁壯,它們的莖顯得堅(jiān)韌而蒼老。它們的葉因枯萎而失卻光澤。它們已經(jīng)不能再去為人們作佐餐的鮮嫩的野菜,卻默默地為攀登山路的人準(zhǔn)備了一個(gè)可靠的抓手。生命就這樣地被環(huán)境規(guī)定著,又被環(huán)境改變著,適者生存的規(guī)律盡管無(wú)情。但一切適者就是戰(zhàn)勝環(huán)境的強(qiáng)者。生命現(xiàn)象告訴你,生命就是拼搏。
2.【提問(wèn)】《醉花陰》反映的是早年丈夫趙明誠(chéng)游宦在外,作者一個(gè)人留在家中的生活狀況和內(nèi)心感受。對(duì)于這樣的“閨怨”題材,應(yīng)當(dāng)怎樣評(píng)價(jià)呢?【明確】作者作為一個(gè)封建時(shí)代的婦女,能夠坦率地表達(dá)出自己對(duì)于丈夫深深的思戀之情,描寫(xiě)了閨中生活的孤獨(dú)寂寞,這在當(dāng)時(shí)乃是一種很大膽的行為。所以,有人批評(píng)說(shuō):李清照作詞是“無(wú)顧忌”地“肆意落筆”。其實(shí),感情的充沛、真摯,敢于正面地展露自己的行為和內(nèi)心世界,正是她創(chuàng)作成功的重要原因之一,也正是她的詞最值得珍視的地方。3.【提問(wèn)】古人常常愛(ài)用花比喻人之美貌,如“芙蓉如面柳如眉”,“人面桃花相映紅”等,而李清照卻說(shuō)“人比黃花瘦”,這樣的比喻有什么豐富的內(nèi)涵?【明確】黃色的菊花不止外形上雅淡、清秀,與作者因相思而消瘦的體態(tài)相近,而且在菊花品格的傳統(tǒng)象征意義上,也酷似作者清高、淡泊的精神,這樣的比喻正比較恰切地反映了當(dāng)時(shí)作者由于離開(kāi)丈夫而孤獨(dú)、愁?lèi)灥纳顮顟B(tài)和內(nèi)心情感。
(一)上片:描寫(xiě)杭州的自然風(fēng)光和都市的繁華“東南形勝,三吳都會(huì),錢(qián)塘自古繁華”,“東南形勝”,是從地理?xiàng)l件、自然條件著筆寫(xiě)的。杭州地處東南,地理位置很重要,風(fēng)景很優(yōu)美,故曰:“形勝”?!叭齾嵌紩?huì)”,是從社會(huì)條件著筆寫(xiě)的。它是三吳地區(qū)的重要都市,那里人眾薈萃,財(cái)貨聚集,故曰:“都會(huì)”。“錢(qián)塘自古繁華”,這一句是對(duì)前兩句的總結(jié),因?yàn)楹贾菥哂羞@些特殊條件,所以“自古繁華”。下面就對(duì)“形勝”、“都會(huì)”和“自古繁華”進(jìn)行鋪敘。“煙柳畫(huà)橋,風(fēng)簾翠幕,參差十萬(wàn)人家”是對(duì)“三吳都會(huì)”的展開(kāi)描寫(xiě)?!霸茦?shù)繞堤沙。怒濤卷霜雪,天塹無(wú)涯”是對(duì)“東南形勝”的展開(kāi)描寫(xiě)。這里選擇了錢(qián)塘江岸和江潮兩種景物來(lái)寫(xiě)。“市列珠璣,戶(hù)盈羅綺,競(jìng)豪奢”是對(duì)“錢(qián)塘自古繁華”的展開(kāi)描寫(xiě)。描寫(xiě)了兩個(gè)方面:一是商業(yè)貿(mào)易情況——“市列珠璣”,只用市場(chǎng)上的珍寶,代表了商業(yè)的豐富、商業(yè)的繁榮;二是衣著情況——“戶(hù)盈羅綺”,家家披羅著錦?!案?jìng)豪奢”,又總括杭州的種種繁華景象。
①標(biāo)題——標(biāo)題應(yīng)當(dāng)簡(jiǎn)潔明了。②導(dǎo)語(yǔ)——導(dǎo)語(yǔ)是消息開(kāi)頭的第一段或第一句話(huà),簡(jiǎn)明扼要地揭示出消息的核心內(nèi)容。③主體——主體是消息的主要部分,要用充足的事實(shí)表現(xiàn)主題,對(duì)導(dǎo)語(yǔ)的內(nèi)容作進(jìn)一步的展開(kāi)和闡述。④結(jié)束語(yǔ)——通常是對(duì)全文內(nèi)容進(jìn)行概括性的總結(jié)。3. 新聞報(bào)道增分句子(1)陳述事實(shí)常用的句型:①A terrible storm hit/struck ... , killing ..②It was a cool autumn night when the earthquake happened. A large number of buildings fell down and roads were destroyed, leaving a great many people homeless.地震發(fā)生在一個(gè)涼爽的秋夜。大量的建筑物倒塌,道路被毀,許多人無(wú)家可歸。③With the help of the rescue team, people who were the trapped in the flood were saved.在救援隊(duì)的幫助下,困在洪水中的人們得救了。(2)陳述觀點(diǎn)常用的句型:①Clearly/Obviously/In my opinion/It seemed that people were shocked.顯然/在我看來(lái)/似乎人們震驚了。②The whole city was in ruins after the earthquake.地震后整個(gè)城市成了一片廢墟。(3)揭示原因常用的句型:Because of/As a result of/Thanks to the help of the army, people who got injured were sent to the hospital immediately.
Features of languages1.Finally, in the 20th century, the southern part of Ireland broke away from the UK, which resulted in the full name we have today: the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland.該句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。該句主句為:the southern part of Ireland broke away from the UK;which resulted in the full name we have today為which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句代指前面整句話(huà)的內(nèi)容,we have today為定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞name。譯文:最后,在20世紀(jì),愛(ài)爾蘭南部脫離英國(guó),這導(dǎo)致了我們今天有的英國(guó)的全名:大不列顛及北愛(ài)爾蘭聯(lián)合王國(guó)。2.Almost everywhere you go in the UK, you will be surrounded by evidence of four different groups of people who took over at different times throughout history.該句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。該句主句為:you will be surrounded by evidence of four different groups of people;其中Almost everywhere you go in the UK為讓步狀語(yǔ)從句; who took over at different times throughout history為定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞people。譯文:幾乎無(wú)論你走到英國(guó)的任何地方,你都會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)歷史上有四種不同的人在不同的時(shí)期統(tǒng)治過(guò)英國(guó)。3.The capital city London is a great place to start, as it is an ancient port city that has a history dating all the way back to Roman times.該句是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。該句主句為:The capital city London is a great place to start; as it is an ancient port city that has a history dating all the way back to Roman times.為原因狀語(yǔ)從句;dating all the way back to Roman times為現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)修飾history。