單元整體說明(一)單元教材分析本單元的核心話題是描述動(dòng)物和表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好,以及句式why do you like…? Because…。這也是本單元的教學(xué)重點(diǎn)。通過本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生應(yīng)能較流利地運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯和句型描述動(dòng)物,表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好。(二)單元知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)1.詞匯動(dòng)物名稱 tiger, elephant, koala, dolphin, etc.詞匯描述性形容詞: smart, cute, ugly, clever, shy, etc.國(guó)家名: Australia, South Africa2.句型Why do you like koala hears? Because they are cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(三)單元整體目標(biāo)1.Master the vocabulary2.Master and use: Why do you like koalas? Because they am cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(四)單元教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)一覽(五)單元學(xué)情分析學(xué)生此前已經(jīng)學(xué)過由why, where, what 引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問句句型,具有了學(xué)習(xí)本單元知識(shí)的認(rèn)知前提。形形色色的動(dòng)物能激發(fā)學(xué)生的好奇心,產(chǎn)生了解它們的欲望,這有利于本單元知識(shí)的教學(xué)和學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣的培養(yǎng)。
說明:在幫Li Lei提建議的同時(shí),教育學(xué)生如何學(xué)好英語。第三課時(shí)教學(xué)目標(biāo)1. 語言目標(biāo):a) 詞匯: Original, in style, haircut, the same as.b) 語言結(jié)構(gòu):My friend wears the same clothes and has the same haircut as I do.2. 能力目標(biāo):大多數(shù)學(xué)生能夠談?wù)撟约合矚g哪種服裝,提高查找信息的能力。3. 情感目標(biāo):學(xué)會(huì)如何與朋友相處,要有自己對(duì)時(shí)尚的看法。教學(xué)重點(diǎn)掌握一些重要詞匯。教學(xué)難點(diǎn)學(xué)會(huì)談?wù)搯栴},并能提出書面建議?!艚虒W(xué)突破首先針對(duì)Erin的問題,提出個(gè)人的建議,模仿2c部分的對(duì)話展開雙人交際Pair-work;聽老師誦讀3a部分的信件,并找出LEFT OUT的問題所在;學(xué)生完成3b部分的內(nèi)容,給Left Out提出書面的建議;學(xué)以口頭形式提出自己目前存在的某個(gè)問題,講給大家聽,讓同學(xué)們給自己提出一個(gè)建議,并作筆錄;學(xué)生兩、三個(gè)人分成一組,隨意性地進(jìn)行口語交際,談?wù)揚(yáng)14的第4部分的某個(gè)問題,相互交換意見。
區(qū)分賓語從句、定于從句和狀語從句賓語從句和狀語從句,都叫做主從復(fù)合句。賓語從句主要是中考必考的,是初中階段必掌握的從句,賓語從句主要是掌握三要素,所謂賓語從句,就是賓語在主從復(fù)合句當(dāng)中充當(dāng)賓語的一個(gè)句子,叫做賓語從句。主句的謂語動(dòng)詞是及物動(dòng)詞,后面如果是詞或者是短語的話,是簡(jiǎn)單句,如果是句子的話,肯定是賓語從句。I know that he good at English.就是賓語從句,三要素,一要素是要注意連詞,連詞一共學(xué)了三類連詞,一類連詞是that口語當(dāng)中可以省略,就像剛才說的那一句,I hear he is good at English.還有疑問代詞、疑問副詞,how where when,疑問代詞、疑問副詞。還有一類連詞weather是否的意思,不是狀語從句當(dāng)中的如果,這一定要和如果區(qū)分開,這是是否。I don't know if he interested at English。賓語從句要注意if是連詞。第二要素是語序,要用陳述舉語序。比如說你家有幾口人,我們都說How many people are there in you family?但是這是簡(jiǎn)單句,一旦說成賓語從句,你可以告訴我你家有幾口人嗎?Could you tell me how many people there are in you family ?
"Hello! Welcome to English class! Introduce yourself. Meet your new classmates." That's what the teacher says. What do you say? "Oh no!" It can be difficult talking to new people. But it can be fun, and you can make friends. How do you do it? Make small talk. Small talk is polite conversation. "Wang Nan is a great pingpang player, isn't she?" "I'd love to meet her, wouldn't you?" "It's been raining a lot, hasn't it?" Tag questions are a form of polite speech. To make small talk successfully, you should know how to make them. You should also know what topics to talk about. Try to learn this unit carefully. The next time you're in English class, you'll find out. Making small talk's easy, isn't it? (“你好!歡迎你!請(qǐng)做一下自我介紹。認(rèn)識(shí)一下你的新同學(xué)。”通常在課上老師會(huì)這樣說。你會(huì)說什么呢?“噢,不!”與陌生人談話太困難了。但是這也很有意思,并且你還能交到朋友。你該怎么做呢?閑聊。閑聊指得是禮貌的對(duì)話?!巴蹰且粋€(gè)很棒的乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員,不是嗎?”“我希望自己能認(rèn)識(shí)她,你呢?“今年的雨水很多,不是嗎?”反意疑問句是一種禮貌用語。為了使得談話成功,你應(yīng)該知道怎樣去進(jìn)行閑聊。你還應(yīng)該知道與不同的人該談?wù)撌裁礃拥脑掝}。認(rèn)真的學(xué)習(xí)這個(gè)單元吧,下次在英語課上,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)與大家展開談話是一件很容易的事情,不信我們來試試。)
This activity introduces some new vocabulary and provide oral practice using the target language.Task 1 . Ask four students to stand in front of the class, and the teacher asks them the following questions as a reporter.1.What are you going to do when you grow up?2.What are you going to do next week?3.What are going to do after school?The students will give different answers, then ask a good student to report what they said.I am going to e a doctor.What did she say?----------She said she was going to be a doctor.I am going to have a party on Friday night.What did he say?-------He said he was going to have a party on Friday night.I am going to do my homework.What did she say ?------ She said she was going to do her homework.I am going home after school.What did she say?-----She said she was going home after school.Say In this unit we are going to learn to use words like to report what someone said.Task 2. Read the instructions. Then ask a student to read the four questions. And write the words on the Bb. Explain what soap opera is.Task 3. Ask the students to Look at the pictures, point out the TV screens in the picture. Ask one girl to read what Marcia said.What did Marcia say? She said She said she was having a surprise party for Lana on Friday night. Repeat the other pictures in the same way.Activity3. Listen and number the pictures in activity 1a.
Step Ⅱ Show the new words on the screen and teach the new words. Read the new words to students and ask them to repeat.Step Ⅲ 3aThis activity introduces new vocabulary and provides reading practice using the target language.In this activity first look at the four pictures.T: What can you see in the pictures?Ss: Four snow globes.T: Right. There are four snow globes in the pictures. And what are they?Ss: They are a monster, two polar bears, two penguins and a birthday cake.Write these words on the blackboard: snow globe; monster; polar bear; penguin and birthday cake. Read them to the class and ask students to repeat each one. Make sure students understand each word.Use a computer to show the E-mail message on the screen and read the message to students.Get students to read the e-mail on their own, and then draw lines connecting each snow globe and its description.Correct the answers.AnswersA line should connect each snow globe picture with the words that describe it in the letter.Step Ⅳ 3bThis activity provides writing practice using the target language.First review Activity 2a on Page 47.Then ask students to complete the message according to Activity 2a.Some partial sentences are given to students. Write about one person's collection.When students work, walk around the room checking the progress and offering help as needed.When they finish, ask some students to read their messages to the class.
本單元主要圍繞著有關(guān)瀕臨滅絕的動(dòng)物這一話題,學(xué)習(xí)了應(yīng)該怎樣保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境,以及就某一問題展開辯論。目標(biāo)提示語言目標(biāo)能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí),就某一問題展開辯論。認(rèn)知目標(biāo)1、復(fù)習(xí)一些語法:現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、用used to 表示一般過去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般過去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。2、學(xué)會(huì)表達(dá)同意和不同意。3、學(xué)會(huì)以下基本句型:We’re trying to save the manatees.Manatees eat about 100 pounds of food a day.There used to be a lot of manatees.In 1972,it was discovered that they were endangered.Some of the swamps have become polluted.情感目標(biāo)了解一些瀕臨滅絕的動(dòng)物的生活習(xí)性和瀕臨滅絕的原因,教育學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。教學(xué)提示充分利用多媒體等教學(xué)設(shè)備,創(chuàng)設(shè)與本課話題相關(guān)的情境,如各種不同種類的動(dòng)物、動(dòng)物園以及有關(guān)環(huán)境的畫畫等等。圍繞著本單元的教學(xué)目標(biāo),設(shè)計(jì)一些貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際的教學(xué)任務(wù),如讓學(xué)生談?wù)撟约鹤钕矚g的動(dòng)物,如何拯救瀕危動(dòng)物,如何保護(hù)環(huán)境等等。讓學(xué)生根據(jù)所學(xué)知識(shí),就動(dòng)物園是否對(duì)動(dòng)物有利以及其他的話題進(jìn)行辯論。
Teaching Goal:1. General aims:Talk about recent past events2. Particular aims:A. Language Focus.Talk about recent past events and think of the past events.B. Language goalsHow was….?It was …What did …do over the weekend?C. Language structures:(1). How was your weekend? I was great. Pay attention to no form.(2). What did you do over the weekend? I played soccer. We went to the beach.D. Useful words and phrases:Words: was, did, went, beach, over, project, test, wasn’t, false, number, geography, spend, week, most, mixture, their, had, little, cook, read, saw, change, everyone, sit, sat, no, anythingPhrases: did one’s homework, played soccer, cleaned my room, went to the beach, played tennis, went to the movies, on Saturday morning, over the weekend, cook … for, what about, do some reading, have a party, talk show, go shoppingE. Grammar language:Present simple past tenseRegular and irregular verbsF. Learning strategies:Tour and holidaysG. Interdiscipinary:H. Emotion and manner:Teaching time: 5 periodsTeaching procedures:Period One教學(xué)步驟、時(shí)間 教師活動(dòng) 學(xué)生活動(dòng) 媒體應(yīng)用Step 1Free talk 3’ Ask some questions like:Who’s on duty today?What’s the weather like? Answer and talk about something.讓同學(xué)們回答下列問題1. Do you like weekend? (Let some students answer)It takes them three minutes to talk about the question.2. Why do you like weekend? (let the students answer) Most of the students like the weekend此時(shí)教師用漢語問:“在周末期間問你干了什么?這句話用英語這么回答?Let the students guess.At last the teacher give them right answer3. What did you do over the weekend?(板書、學(xué)習(xí))
(一).知識(shí)方面: 1.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生能運(yùn)用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)來描述、談?wù)撨^去某個(gè)時(shí)間正在發(fā)生的事情或動(dòng)作的意識(shí)和能力,能就過去某個(gè)時(shí)間正在發(fā)生的動(dòng)作做出正確的描述。 2.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的想象力和角色扮演的合作能力。 3.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生講述過去發(fā)生的事情經(jīng)過的能力。能正確運(yùn)用一般過去時(shí)來講述故事。 (二).技能方面: 1.本單元的語言目標(biāo)是Talk about past events and tell a story(談?wù)撨^去的時(shí)間和講述一個(gè)故事),圍繞這一目標(biāo),要涉及句型: What were you doing when the UFO arrived? ----I was sitting in the barber’s chair. The barber was cutting my hair. 因此必須學(xué)習(xí)standing、studying、cleaning、sleeping、cooking、making、eating、cutting、等表示地點(diǎn)的詞,以便為上述句型提供語言材料。2.學(xué)習(xí)過去進(jìn)行時(shí)的有關(guān)知識(shí)。Was/were+現(xiàn)在分詞,是該時(shí)態(tài)的表達(dá)式。 3.在學(xué)習(xí)過程中,要區(qū)分The boy was walking down the street when the UFO landed.和While the boy was walking down the street, the UFO landed.這兩種由when和while引導(dǎo)的狀語從句的句型結(jié)構(gòu)。注意它們的不同。
由扶到放,學(xué)習(xí)課文 1.指導(dǎo)學(xué)習(xí)一至三段。 ?。?)指名讀第一段。學(xué)習(xí)生字"彎、直",通過做動(dòng)作理解詞義?! 。?)練習(xí)朗讀第一段,可邊讀邊做動(dòng)作?! 。?)教師引讀第二段:小燕子從他頭上飛過。小白兔大聲喊--(學(xué)生讀)?! 。?)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生看第一幅掛圖:小燕子飛得很低,小白兔奇怪地向燕子為什么飛得這么低。學(xué)生練習(xí)朗讀小白兔喊叫的句子,提醒學(xué)生注意提示語"大聲喊"和句尾問號(hào)?! 。?)先指名讀第三段,然后逐句以問引讀: ① 教師指第一句問:燕子邊飛邊說-- ?、诳諝庠趺礃幽?-(學(xué)生接讀第二句)蟲子的翅膀可比鳥的翅膀小多了,薄多了,就像透明的紗一樣,沾上了小水珠,就像人背上了鉛球一樣沉重,自然就飛不高了。再讀第二句?! 、勰切⊙嘧语w不高是什么原因呢?學(xué)生讀最后一句,教師板書:捉蟲子,學(xué)習(xí)生字"捉",練習(xí)朗讀句子。
(一)、導(dǎo)入 師:今天,我們來學(xué)習(xí)課文《全神貫注》。誰回憶一下我們學(xué)習(xí)略讀課文的方法?! ∩?、自讀課文,掃清字、詞障礙。 2、再讀課文,理清文章脈絡(luò)。 3、按照閱讀提示研讀課文?! ?、小組交流、討論?! ?、大組匯報(bào) ?。ǘ?、按照學(xué)習(xí)方法,進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)?! 。ㄈⅲㄒ孕〗M為單位)匯報(bào)學(xué)習(xí)情況?! ?、小組1:讀課文,并講解不理解的詞義?! √嵝岩鬃x錯(cuò)的字音和易寫錯(cuò)的生字。
1.想想課文講了一件什么事?“魚游到了紙上”的意思是什么?(“我”去玉泉觀魚,認(rèn)識(shí)了一位殘疾青年,他每個(gè)星期天都來這里畫金魚?!棒~游到了紙上”意思是說這位青年畫的金魚十分形象生動(dòng),像活的那樣在紙上游動(dòng)。學(xué)生可以從整體感知課文內(nèi)容,只要大致說出課文講了一件什么事就行了。)2.你是怎么知道這位青年是聾啞人?找出課文中的有關(guān)語句。(“從來不說一句話”“沒有任何反應(yīng)”,和他胸前佩戴的“福利工廠”的廠徽,可以看出他是一位聾啞青年。如果是會(huì)說話的人,不可能從來不說一句話;如果是聽得見的人,那么在眾人的贊嘆、議論聲中,不可能“沒有任何反應(yīng)”;“福利工廠”一般是專為殘疾人開辦的工廠。)
讀課文,感悟 1、 齊讀第一自然段?! ?、 你知道了什么時(shí)間什么人去干什么? 3、 植物園怎么樣?同學(xué)們參觀認(rèn)真嗎?你怎么知道的? 4、 指名讀第一自然段,創(chuàng)設(shè)情境比比誰讀得更棒。注意“可”要讀出抑揚(yáng)感?! ?、 接下來的3、4、5、6自然段朗讀,師讀旁白,學(xué)生只要讀說的一句話,但要結(jié)合敘述加進(jìn)動(dòng)作、表情等等。 6、 小組內(nèi)練習(xí),師巡視指導(dǎo)?! ?、 各自讀第7自然段,說說如果當(dāng)時(shí)是自己在場(chǎng)會(huì)怎樣想,怎樣做?! ?、 齊讀第8自然段,師提示“會(huì)心的微笑”處要讀得緩慢、高興?! ?、 討論“會(huì)心的微笑”是什么意思,適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展。 10、 自薦讀,比比誰讀得更生動(dòng)(從語音、語氣、表情等方面評(píng)價(jià))?! ?1、 各自讀課文,要求: 完整、仔細(xì),覺得有意思的地方多讀讀。努力讀出自己的最佳樣子。
教學(xué)思路: 這是一篇多幅圖的看圖學(xué)文。在整個(gè)教學(xué)過程中,“指導(dǎo)觀察,圖文對(duì)照”是教學(xué)的基本方法。教學(xué)中應(yīng)以觀察訓(xùn)練為主線,重視思維能力的培養(yǎng),幫助學(xué)生理解詞語和課文內(nèi)容。 教學(xué)開始,讓學(xué)生初步看圖,大致了解圖意。再借助拼音邊讀課文邊看圖,初步了解課文內(nèi)容,并把說明圖意的句子做上記號(hào)。在此基礎(chǔ)上圖文對(duì)照,理解詞句,進(jìn)行講讀。 第一自然段,通過“口渴”“到處找水”,讓學(xué)生體會(huì)烏鴉急于喝水的焦急心情?! ≈v讀第二自然段,讓學(xué)生通過看圖、讀文后思考:烏鴉為什么喝不著水?在要求學(xué)生對(duì)第一幅圖畫面的觀察后,理解“水不多”“瓶口又小”是烏鴉喝不到水的原因。引導(dǎo)學(xué)生了解“怎么辦呢?”是烏鴉自己?jiǎn)栕约?,表明它要想出解決問題的辦法。 講讀第三自然段時(shí),引導(dǎo)學(xué)生再看第一幅圖,從而理解烏鴉的辦法不是憑空想出來的,而是一邊觀察周圍事物,一邊想辦法。從而解決本課的教學(xué)重點(diǎn)問題。
1、檢查讀。教師以開火車的形式讓學(xué)生按自然段讀課文,看誰讀得既正確又流利?! ?、指正讀。把你喜歡的小動(dòng)物的話找出來讀一讀,教師隨機(jī)指導(dǎo)?! ?、想象讀。先聽范讀錄音,然后指名讀文,邊讀邊想象當(dāng)時(shí)的情景?! ?、分角色讀。教師指導(dǎo)學(xué)生研究討論每個(gè)角色的語氣怎樣讀,并嘗試給這些角色設(shè)計(jì)表情動(dòng)作?! ∪纾核徆霉茫ㄆ婀值膯枺骸靶∥浵仯阍趺戳?” 小螞蟻(揉肉眼睛,傷心的)說:“我不小心掉進(jìn)池塘,上不了岸啦!” (讓學(xué)生嘗試添加提示語,是一個(gè)大膽的嘗試。讓學(xué)生根據(jù)生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)和對(duì)課文的理解,給“人物”設(shè)計(jì)表情動(dòng)作,添加不同的語氣詞,使課文變成了童話劇。由于是自己創(chuàng)造的成果,學(xué)生會(huì)讀得有情有趣,有滋有味。但這種能力的培養(yǎng)不是一朝一夕的,教師要有意識(shí)的加以引導(dǎo)。)
學(xué)習(xí)課文第一段?! 。?)指名讀,其他同學(xué)邊聽邊想:這段主要講的是誰?講了他什么事?引導(dǎo)學(xué)生感知這段的主要內(nèi)容?! 。?)讀第1句話,回答曹操是什么時(shí)候的人?理解“古時(shí)候”指三國(guó)時(shí)期,離現(xiàn)在大約有一千七百多年。 ?。?)讀第2、3句,回答:人家送給他一頭大象,他心情怎樣?是怎樣做的?(他很高興,所以就帶著官員和兒子去看象) (4)指導(dǎo)朗讀。學(xué)習(xí)第二段 (1)指名讀第2段,思考并回答:象是什么樣子?官員們?cè)趺醋龅?(使學(xué)生了解本段主要寫了象又高又大,官員們邊看邊議論象的重量)?! 。?)讀第1句,看圖回答:從哪地方看出象又高又大? 理解“身子像堵墻,腿像四根柱子”的意思,具體認(rèn)識(shí)象的高大?! 。?)再讀課文,從中體會(huì)象很大?! 。?)讀第2句話,舉例說說“議論”的意思,再回答:從官員們議論的話里你知道了什么?(象很重,官員們很想知道象有多重)?! ≡僮x這句話,讀出官員們疑問語氣?! 。?)朗讀第2段。
感悟理解,感情朗讀 1.生再讀課文后指名分自然段接讀課文?! ?.你們知道文中的小男孩分別為四季畫了哪四個(gè)不同顏色的太陽(yáng)嗎?用“──”在文中劃出?! ?.指名發(fā)言,指導(dǎo)練讀“綠綠的太陽(yáng)”“金黃的太陽(yáng)”“紅紅的太陽(yáng)”“彩色的太陽(yáng)” 師貼板畫:“綠綠的太陽(yáng)”“金黃的太陽(yáng)”“紅紅的太陽(yáng)”“彩色的太陽(yáng)” 4.你最喜歡哪個(gè)季節(jié)的太陽(yáng)呢? 同桌互讀描寫你最喜歡的那個(gè)季節(jié)的太陽(yáng)的自然段 5.指名朗讀,感悟理解 春天──多彩的太陽(yáng) 1.指名讀 2.指名再讀,喜歡的齊讀 3.你們看到的春天的色彩都有哪些? 4.師生合作讀 夏天──綠綠的太陽(yáng) 1.指名讀 2.出示課件:高山、田野、街道、校園到處一片清涼?! ≈笇?dǎo)朗讀該句 3.男女生比讀
(二)提問:夜校的學(xué)習(xí)條件怎樣?雨來在夜校里受到什么教育?默讀第二段。指導(dǎo)朗讀:“我們是中國(guó)人,我們愛自己的祖國(guó)?!薄拔覀儭恰袊?guó)人,我們——愛——自己的——祖國(guó)。”討論段意和小標(biāo)題。(段意:雨來上夜校,受到愛國(guó)主義教育。)(小標(biāo)題:“雨來上夜校?!保ㄈW(xué)習(xí)第三段。默讀課文,提問:這段主要說了幾層意思?學(xué)生默讀課文,小組交流,展示如下:(兩層意思:第一層從“有一天”至“只從街上傳來一兩聲狗叫”,主要寫鬼子開始掃蕩了;第二層從“第二天”至這段結(jié)束,主要寫雨來為掩護(hù)交通員李大叔,被鬼子捆綁起來了。)指導(dǎo)朗讀第二層。重點(diǎn)朗讀:“他抬頭一看,是李大叔?!薄斑祝∵@是什么時(shí)候挖的洞呢?”“把缸搬回原地方。你就快到別的院里去,對(duì)誰也不許說?!庇懻摱我夂托?biāo)題。段意:(雨來為掩護(hù)交通員李大叔,被鬼子捆綁起來了。)(小標(biāo)題:“雨來掩護(hù)李大叔”。)
我們?cè)诤呑咧诓桓叩纳缴献咧?。四周的風(fēng)物秀雋異常。滿盈盈的湖水一直溢拍到腳邊,卻又溫柔地退回去了,像慈母撫拍著將睡未睡的嬰兒似的,它輕輕地?fù)崤闹丁K锏乃榇善逦梢?。小小的魚兒,還有頑健的小蝦兒,都在眼前游來蹦去。登上了山巔,可望見更遠(yuǎn)的太湖?!嵳耔I《石湖》(生根據(jù)師展示的原文,參考、揣摩名家筆下抒情方式的運(yùn)用,體會(huì)抒情描寫中以情動(dòng)人的魅力)2.寫一段話,抒發(fā)某種情感,如幸福、喜悅、痛苦、憂傷、渴望等。200字左右。提示:(1)可以描寫場(chǎng)面、事物,也可以敘述故事;(2)情感的抒發(fā)要有內(nèi)容,有憑借;(3)根據(jù)內(nèi)容特點(diǎn)和表達(dá)需要,選擇合適的抒情方式。(生自由習(xí)作后,小組內(nèi)互評(píng)、修改)師小結(jié):情貴在真,要注意抒發(fā)自己的真情實(shí)感。朱光潛曾說過:“作者自己如果沒有感動(dòng),就絕對(duì)不能使讀者感動(dòng)?!痹趯懽髦?,情感的抒發(fā)要自然,要水到渠成。
4.組織材料師:一篇游記作品,既要有“靈魂”“血肉”,還得有“筋骨”——材料安排。請(qǐng)大家運(yùn)用我們上節(jié)課學(xué)習(xí)的方法來組織材料。方法:(1)按照自己的游蹤或獨(dú)特體驗(yàn),安排寫作順序。(2)能突出參觀場(chǎng)所特征的要詳寫,其余的略寫或不寫。(3)豐富文章內(nèi)容:適當(dāng)加入敘事,引入一些典故、傳說、史料、評(píng)價(jià)或詩(shī)文名句。示例:(1)寫作順序:以作者的參觀路線為線索。(2)詳略安排:詳寫魯迅先生北京故居的工作室兼臥室,以突出魯迅簡(jiǎn)樸、惜時(shí)的品質(zhì)和忘我工作的精神品質(zhì);詳寫陳列大廳是為了贊揚(yáng)先生的民族精神。其余的略寫。(3)引入內(nèi)容:引用古詩(shī)句“望崦嵫而勿迫,恐鵜之先鳴”,表現(xiàn)先生惜時(shí)的品質(zhì)。(生交流,師點(diǎn)評(píng))預(yù)設(shè) (1)寫作順序:一樓的青銅器—二樓的陶器—三樓的古代畫作。