【重點(diǎn)、難點(diǎn)及解決辦法】1.以樂(lè)景寫(xiě)哀,景中寓情,情中顯志。從詞中可以感受到詞人的心情是惆悵的,寫(xiě)的又是寒秋景物,卻毫無(wú)過(guò)去一般舊詩(shī)詞里的那種肅殺、感傷的“悲秋”情調(diào),詞人筆下的秋景是活潑、美好的。原因在于越寫(xiě)山河的壯麗,就越使人感到人民不能主宰大地的可悲,越感到革命的必要。詞人正是在這不一致中突出了強(qiáng)烈的革命精神。當(dāng)然,這里面也含有熱愛(ài)祖國(guó)壯麗河山的感情。2.對(duì)比手法的運(yùn)用。詞中含有多種對(duì)比,使描繪的形象鮮明,如“萬(wàn)山紅遍”與“漫江碧透”主要是顏色的對(duì)比;“鷹擊長(zhǎng)空”與“魚(yú)翔淺底”、“指點(diǎn)江山”與“激揚(yáng)文字”主要是動(dòng)作的對(duì)比;“同學(xué)少年”與“萬(wàn)戶侯”是明比;“萬(wàn)類(lèi)霜天競(jìng)自由”與人民的被壓迫(未在詞中點(diǎn)明)是暗含的對(duì)比。
(1)吾嘗(曾經(jīng))終日而思矣,不如須臾(片刻)之所學(xué)也;吾嘗肢(踮起腳跟)而望矣,不如登高之博見(jiàn)(看得廣)也。(學(xué)、思對(duì)比,強(qiáng)調(diào)了學(xué)習(xí)的作用;跛望與登高對(duì)比,登高的收獲大。兩例證明利用學(xué)習(xí)、利用外物的作用。)(2)登高而招(招手),臂非加長(zhǎng)也,而見(jiàn)者(看的人)遠(yuǎn)(遠(yuǎn)也看得見(jiàn));順風(fēng)而呼(呼喊),聲非加疾(快)也,而聞?wù)?聽(tīng)的人)彰(聽(tīng)得更清楚)。(兩例證明利用自然條件的作用。)(3)假(借助)輿馬者(的人),非利足(快腳)也,而致(達(dá)到)千里;假舟楫者,非能水(善游)也,而絕(橫渡)江河。(兩例證明利用工具的作用。)(4)君子生(性)非異也,善假(利用)于(對(duì))物(外物)也。連用比喻,得出結(jié)論:那些有才德的君子,生來(lái)本性與普通人沒(méi)有什么兩樣(生非異也),只是由于他善于利用學(xué)得的知識(shí)和本領(lǐng),善于利用處界條件彌補(bǔ)自身的不足,不斷提高自己,所以才成為君子的。
《詩(shī)經(jīng)》的重章疊唱及表現(xiàn)手法《詩(shī)經(jīng)》善于運(yùn)用重章疊唱來(lái)表達(dá)思想感情,即重復(fù)的幾章間,意義和字面都只有少量改變,造成一唱三嘆的效果。增強(qiáng)了詩(shī)歌的音樂(lè)性和節(jié)奏感,更充分的抒發(fā)了情懷。《詩(shī)經(jīng)》里大量運(yùn)用了賦、比、興的表現(xiàn)手法,加強(qiáng)了作品的形象性,獲得了良好的藝術(shù)效果。所謂“賦”是“敷陳其事而直言之”。這包括一般陳述和鋪排陳述兩種情況?!氨取笔恰耙员宋锉却宋铩保簿褪潜扔髦?。而“興”則是《詩(shī)經(jīng)》乃至中國(guó)詩(shī)歌中比較獨(dú)特的手法?!芭d”字的本義是“起”?!对?shī)經(jīng)》中的“興”是“先言他物以引起所詠之辭”,也就是借助其他事物為所詠之內(nèi)容作鋪墊。它往往用于一首詩(shī)或一章詩(shī)的開(kāi)頭。大約最原始的“興”,只是一種發(fā)端,同下文并無(wú)意義上的關(guān)系,表現(xiàn)出思緒無(wú)端地飄移聯(lián)想。
三、指導(dǎo)第一段的背誦,點(diǎn)撥理解句意,強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ),注重文言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)教學(xué)。過(guò)程中要讓學(xué)生反復(fù)讀背。背誦線索:時(shí)間——地點(diǎn)——事件——人物——環(huán)境——活動(dòng)——天氣——感覺(jué)。時(shí)間:永和九年,歲在癸丑,暮春之初。地點(diǎn):會(huì)于會(huì)稽山陰之蘭亭。事件:修稧事也。人物:群賢畢至,少長(zhǎng)咸集。環(huán)境:此地有崇山峻嶺,茂林修竹;又有清流激湍,映帶左右。活動(dòng):引以為流觴曲水,列坐其次。雖無(wú)絲竹管弦之盛,一觴一詠,亦足以暢敘幽情。天氣:是日也,天朗氣清,惠風(fēng)和暢。感覺(jué):仰觀宇宙之大,俯察品類(lèi)之盛,所以極視聽(tīng)之娛,信可樂(lè)也。四、學(xué)生自讀背誦5分鐘。五、抽一至二名學(xué)生試背課文,教師可作必要的線索提示。第二課時(shí)一、聽(tīng)名家示范朗誦,學(xué)生小聲跟讀。二、復(fù)習(xí)鞏固第一自然段的閱讀背誦。三、朗讀、解析第二自然段,理解文章“由敘入感”的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)。
This unit is about the Internet, which has a great influence to our humans and our lives. During the Listening & Speaking & Talking and Reading and Thinking section, the influence in examples has been shown. Thus, use the Present Perfect Tense is appropriate. However, in order to show the justice or weaken the doer of the behavior/action, it’s better to use the Present Perfect Passive Voice than the Present Perfect Tense. Besides, having learned to use the Present Perfect Passive Voice, students can beautify their language in their writing. 1. Learn the structure of the Present Perfect Passive Voice and its functions. 2. Learn to change the sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice into the sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice. 3. Learn to write sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice flexibly according to the context. 1. Learn the structure of the Present Perfect Passive Voice and its functions. 2. Learn to change the sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice into the sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice. 3. Learn to write sentences with the Present Perfect Passive Voice flexibly according to the context. Step 1 Observe the following sentences, then change the sentences into passive voice.He has been selected to take part in the sports meeting.(肯定句)他已被挑選出來(lái)參加運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。The ink has not been removed from his overcoat.(否定句)墨跡還沒(méi)有從他外套上去掉。
Paragraph 3. Jan decided to start an IT club to teach old people how to use computers and the Internet. Paragraph 4. Jan has started taking online classes to learn more about how to use the Internet to make society better. Paragraph 5. Jan’s life has been greatly improved by the Internet. Step 5: Critical thinking:(1)How do you arrange your time spent on study and the Internet? Is it reasonable? I usually surf the Internet using my mobile phone for only an hour after class, and it is reasonable for me.(2)What are your online activities? Are they safe? I chat with my friends, read news and play games. I never give away my private information so I think they are safe.Step 4: summary Much has been written about the wonders of the World Wide Web. There are countless articles (1)______(tell) us how the Internet has made our lives more convenient. But the Internet has done a lot (2)_____(much) for people than simply make life more convenient. People’s lives (3) _________________(change) by online communities and social networks so far. Take Jan for example, who developed a serious illness that made her (4)_____(stick) at home with only her computer to keep (5)___(she) company. She joined an online group (6)______ she could share problems, support and advice with others. She considered the ability to remove the distance between people as one of the greatest (7)_______(benefit). She was so inspired (8)____ she started an IT club in which many people have been helped. She has started to learn more about how to use the Internet to make society better. Her next goal is to start a charity website to raise money (9)___ children in poor countries. Jan’s life has been (10)______(great) improved by the Internet. Step 5 Homework:Review what we have learned and find out the key language points in the text.
2. Sort out detailed information about Michael Jordan.(1) Understand the transitional sentence.Q: Which part is about Michael Jordan as a master? Which part is about the example he set?(2) Have the Ss Focus on why Michael Jordan is a master and what good examples Michael Jordan set when they’re reading. And think about these questions as below:Q1: How does the author describe his impressive skills?Q2: How do you understand “time seemed to stand still”?Q3: What does “graceful” mean?Q4. Which sentence do you think best describes his mental strength?Q5. Which words is important in the sentence in describing his mental strength? Why?Q6: How do you understand “unique”?Q7: What can we learn from Michael Jordan?Step 5 Discussing and recommendingRecommend their own living legends of sports.Work in groups to choose your own living legend of sports and give the reasons of your choice. Step 6 HomeworkReview the stories of Lang Ping and Michael Jordan, and try to retell them.
Then have them write a short paragraph to describe and explain their changes. After that, get the Ss to exchange their drafts with their partners and use the checklist to give feedback on their drafts, and finally revise it.Step 5 Summary of how to write a wellness book1.健康書(shū)的審題步驟:第一步:明確要求該寫(xiě)作屬于經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享,故要用第一人稱來(lái)寫(xiě);時(shí)態(tài)以一股現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。第二步:確定段落該類(lèi)文章可以從以下三個(gè)方面人手:Para.1首先表明寫(xiě)作的目的Para.2自己的做法及心得體會(huì)Para.3表示期望及感謝第三步:提煉要點(diǎn)2.健康書(shū)常見(jiàn)句式:1) It is an honor for me to share my favorite sport with you,2) It makes me feel relaxed playing with my friends.3) It makes me rid myself of stress while playing with my friends.4) Moreover, it provides me a valuable chance to communicate with others.5) I we eat too little or too much, or if we choose the wrong food, we may become sick.6) We can do something to change the poor situation.Step 6Homework假如你的老師讓你在班級(jí)Wellness Bok上分享自己的親身經(jīng)歷及心得,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的文章1. 你喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是什么?2. 你最喜歡的原因是什么?3. 你參加鍛煉的體會(huì)。
This teaching period mainly deals with grammar “The Present Perfect Passive Voice.” To begin with, teachers should lead students to revise what they have learned about the Present Perfect Passive Voice. And then, teachers move on to stress more special cases concerning this grammar。This period carries considerable significance to the cultivation of students’ writing competence and lays a solid foundation for the basic appreciation of language beauty. The teacher is expected to enable students to master this period thoroughly and consolidate the knowledge by doing some exercises. 1. Guide students to review the basic usages of the Present Perfect Passive Voice2. Lead students to learn to use some special cases concerning the Present Perfect Passive Voice flexibly.2. Enable students to use the basic phrases structures flexibly.3. Strengthen students’ great interest in grammar learning.1. Help students to appreciate the function of the Present Perfect Passive Voice in a sentence2. Instruct students to write essays using the proper the Present Perfect Passive Voice.觀察下列句子特點(diǎn),總結(jié)共同點(diǎn)。1.(教材P28)Much has been written about the wonders of the World Wide Web.2.(教材P28)But the Internet has done much more for people than simply make life more convenient.3.(教材P28)Many people have been helped by the club.4.(教材P28)She no longer feels lonely, and her company has become quite successful.5.(教材P32)Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet?
From the pictures in the text and the title--- choose the best app, we can know that this part is about how to save money by using apps.Step 2 While-listening1. Laura and Xiao Bo are talking about apps. Listen to their conversation and find out what apps they want.Xiao Bo is looking for a(n) exercise app to help him get in shape.Laura would like an app for getting rich and another that will make her grades better.2. Listen again. Are the sentences true T or false F?1). Both of Xiao Bo's apps keep track of the steps he takes._____2). Xiao Bo's second app can help him make a fitness plan._____3). Laura needs an app that will help her get discounts.______4). Laura needs an app that will add money to her bank account._______F T F T3. Listen once more and tick the sentence you hear. Underline the words used to express predictions, guesses, and beliefs.Predictions, Guesses, and Beliefs________It might help me walk more.________My guess is that it wouldn't work.________I imagine this app would help me get fit faster________I suppose that would be good.________I guess you could save a little with this app.________I suppose there would be some problems, too.________I believe this app could help me get thinner.
Listening and Speaking introduces the topic of “ask about online habits”. Many middle school students have been surfing the Internet for many years, but what they do with the Internet and how much time they spend every day may not be very clear to themselves, nor to other students. This section allows students to investigate their peers' Internet use, which is conducive to their mutual understanding and understanding of the Internet. It can also help them reflect on their own online behavior, learn from other people's good online habits, and get rid of their bad online behavior.The listening text of this section is an investigation interview. The investigators interview specific groups with the same questions to obtain information, so as to understand their views, practices or attitudes on this issue. There are two specific questions: “how much time do you spend online every day? What do you usually do online?”. The answers of the three respondents provide rich and different information, and achieve the purpose of the investigators. The oral discourse structure of survey interviews generally includes greeting and explaining the purpose of the interview, presenting the interview questions and the respondents' answers. Listening and Talking introduces the theme of “choosing the right application ". Listening text is a conversation between Laura and Xiao Bo. In this part of listening, “oink”; “piggy bank” may cause the students' hearing comprehension limitation. Oink refers to sound word and pig's sound. So, add some oink to my piggy bank is often used to describe "making a little money".1. Guide students to understand the content of listening texts in terms of listening for definitions.2. Cultivate students' ability to define words and understand an investigation interview.
Q5:What's Jan's next goal?Her next goal is to start a charity website to raise money for children in poor countries.Q6:What can we learn from her experiences?We learn that when we go through tough times, we can find help and support from other people online. We learn that we can feel less lonelyStep 5: While reading---rethinkingQ1: What is Jan’s attitude to the Internet ?Thankful/Grateful, because it has changed her and her life.Q2: What writing skills is used in the article ?Examples(Jan’s example, the 59-year-old man’s and the 61-year-old woman’s example)Q3: Can you get the main idea of the article ?The Internet has changed Jan’s life/Jan’s life has been changed by the Internet.Step 6 Post reading---Retell the storyMuch has been written about the wonders of the World Wide Web. There are countless articles (1)telling(tell) us how the Internet has made our lives more convenient. But the Internet has done a lot (2)more(much) for people than simply make life more convenient. People’s lives (3) have been changed(change) by online communities and social networks so far. Take Jan for example, who developed a serious illness that made her (4)stuck(stick) at home with only her computer to keep (5)her(she) company. She joined an online group (6)where she could share problems, support and advice with others. She considered the ability to remove the distance between people as one of the greatest (7)benefits(benefit). She was so inspired (8)that she started an IT club in which many people have been helped. She has started to learn more about how to use the Internet to make society better. Her next goal is to start a charity website to raise money (9)for children in poor countries. Jan’s life has been (10)greatly(great) improved by the Internet.
8. However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked. 然而, 你越有禮貌, 你被攻擊的可能性就越小。 Step 8 Writing---the articleHow to stay safe in the online chat roomToday I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times--- how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences in the online chat room ? I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: keep out of what makes you uneasy. Don’t post comments or click on anything. Second, protect your privacy. Don’t give out too much private information like your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers, etc. Third, be polite. If you are polite to others on the Internet, you won’t be attacked in normal situation. Finally, don’t believe in others easily and never meet someone you met online alone. It is very dangerous.Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe? Post your comments below!Step 9 Pair workExchange drafts with a partner. Use this checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft.1. Does the writer tell the reader what he/she know about the topic ?2. Are the tips and suggestions well organised ?3. Has the writer defined the new words ?4. Does the author include examples, comparison, or explanations ?5. Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions ?6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes.Step 6 HomeworkPut up your revised draft in the classroom or read it to your class.
⑦identity theft 身份盜竊⑧chat room 聊天室⑨draft your blog post 起草博客帖子⑩post embarrassing photos 張貼尷尬照片 【話題句式】 1. How do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet? 你如何在網(wǎng)上保持安全, 避免在網(wǎng)上的不良經(jīng)歷? 2. I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two. 我不是專(zhuān)家, 但作為一個(gè)博主, 我已經(jīng)學(xué)了好幾年了。 3. If you see or read something that makes you feel uncomfortable, leave the site immediately. 如果你看到或讀到一些讓你覺(jué)得不舒服的東西, 立即離開(kāi)這個(gè)網(wǎng)站。4. Don’t give out your address or phone number. 別告訴別人你的地址或電話號(hào)碼。 5. Identity theft is a common and serious problem. 身份盜竊是一個(gè)常見(jiàn)而嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題。6. Being online is no excuse for being rude, and you don’t want to become a target for a troll or cyberbully. 上網(wǎng)并不是無(wú)禮的借口, 你也不想成為發(fā)挑釁帖子的人或網(wǎng)絡(luò)惡霸的目標(biāo)。 7. Trolls often use several false names so that they can stay on a site. 發(fā)挑釁帖子的人經(jīng)常使用幾個(gè)假名, 這樣他們就可以留在一個(gè)網(wǎng)站上。8. However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked. 然而, 你越有禮貌, 你被攻擊的可能性就越小。
方法點(diǎn)撥教師:有的同學(xué)敘述事實(shí)論據(jù)時(shí),不突出重點(diǎn)和精華,不注意取舍,水分太多,有許多的敘述描寫(xiě),有時(shí)還有詳細(xì)的故事情節(jié),文章幾乎成了記敘文,使文章的論點(diǎn)無(wú)法得到充分的證明,這是寫(xiě)議論文的大忌。那么:議論文中的記敘有哪些特點(diǎn)?同學(xué)各抒己見(jiàn)。投影顯示:1.議論中的記敘不是單純的寫(xiě)人記事,記敘文字是為議論服務(wù)的,其目的是為作者所闡明的道理提供事實(shí)依據(jù)。所以,在記敘時(shí)要求簡(jiǎn)潔、概括,舍棄其中的細(xì)節(jié),僅僅交代清楚事件或者人物的概貌即可,一般不在各種描寫(xiě)手段上下功夫,只要把能證明觀點(diǎn)的那個(gè)部分、側(cè)面交代清楚就行了。2.議論文中的記敘性文字不得超過(guò)總字?jǐn)?shù)的1/3,否則視為文體不當(dāng)。能力提升一、教師:了解了議論文中的記敘的特點(diǎn),接下來(lái)我們看看今天的話題:“愛(ài)的奉獻(xiàn)”,你想從哪個(gè)角度立論?有哪些素材?
【教學(xué)過(guò)程】一、介紹作者沈從文先生(1902~1988),現(xiàn)代作家、歷史文物研究學(xué)者。原名沈岳煥,筆名小兵、懋琳、休蕓蕓等。湖南鳳凰(今屬湘西土家族苗族自治州)人。1926年出版第一本創(chuàng)作集《鴨子》,有7O余種作品集,被人稱為多產(chǎn)作家。主要代表作有:短篇小說(shuō)《丈夫》、《貴生》、《三三》,長(zhǎng)篇小說(shuō)《邊城》、《長(zhǎng)河》,以反映湘西下層人民生活的作品最具特色。他的創(chuàng)作表現(xiàn)手法不拘一格,文體不拘常例,故事不拘常格,嘗試各種體式和結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行創(chuàng)作,成為現(xiàn)代文學(xué)史上不可多得的“文體作家”。在文學(xué)態(tài)度上,沈從文先生一直堅(jiān)持自由主義立場(chǎng),堅(jiān)持文學(xué)要超越政治和商業(yè)的影響。1948年沈從文先生受到了左翼文化界猛烈批判,郭沫若斥責(zé)沈從文先生:“一直是有意識(shí)的作為反動(dòng)派而活動(dòng)著”。下半生從事文物、工藝美術(shù)圖案及物質(zhì)文化史的研究工作。1978年調(diào)中國(guó)社會(huì)科學(xué)院歷史研究所任研究員,致力于中國(guó)古代服飾及其他史學(xué)領(lǐng)域的研究。于1980年應(yīng)邀赴美國(guó)講學(xué),并進(jìn)入諾貝爾文學(xué)獎(jiǎng)的終審名單。
(三)作家介紹,寫(xiě)作背景大家說(shuō)“雨巷”這首詩(shī)寫(xiě)得美不美?(美)剛才我也說(shuō)了,這首詩(shī)是中國(guó)朦朧詩(shī)的百年經(jīng)典。那么對(duì)于這么出名的詩(shī),有誰(shuí)能夠向我們介紹一下它的作者跟寫(xiě)作背景呢?(明確:戴望舒,原名戴朝實(shí)又名戴夢(mèng)鷗,1905年出生于杭州。1929年4月出版第一本詩(shī)集《我底記憶》,他的成名作《雨巷》即收入此集中。1933年8月出版了《望舒草》1948年出版了《災(zāi)難歲月》一生留下了詩(shī)篇92首。《雨巷》是戴望舒的成名作和前期的代表作,他曾因此而贏得了“雨巷詩(shī)人”的雅號(hào)。這首詩(shī)寫(xiě)于1927年夏天。當(dāng)時(shí)全國(guó)處于白色恐怖之匯總,戴望舒因曾參加進(jìn)步活動(dòng)而不得不避居于松江的友人家中,在孤寂中咀嚼著大革命失敗后的幻滅與痛苦,心匯總充滿了迷惘的情緒和朦朧的希望。)(適當(dāng)板書(shū))
從《詩(shī)經(jīng)》的現(xiàn)實(shí)主義到屈原的浪漫主義,是中國(guó)詩(shī)歌發(fā)展的一個(gè)里程碑。屈原的騷體詩(shī),依詩(shī)取興,引類(lèi)譬喻,繼承發(fā)展了《詩(shī)經(jīng)》的比興傳統(tǒng)?!对?shī)經(jīng)》的比興較為單純,而《楚辭》的比興具有象征的特質(zhì),往往成為一個(gè)形象的系統(tǒng)?!峨x騷》中香草美人的比興就是范例。楚地本是澤鄉(xiāng)山國(guó),其間頗有疊波曠宇、崇山秀嶺,這些江山的光怪之氣足以搖蕩心靈、催發(fā)麗辭偉句。但騷體詩(shī)已沖破《詩(shī)經(jīng)》四言詩(shī)的固定格式,句式加長(zhǎng)而靈活,篇章放大而嚴(yán)密,詩(shī)采絢麗而貼切,是《詩(shī)經(jīng)》之后的一次詩(shī)體大解放。有人說(shuō),中國(guó)歷代詩(shī)“莫不同祖風(fēng)騷”,足見(jiàn)其對(duì)后代詩(shī)歌的影響。先秦時(shí)代,《詩(shī)經(jīng)》與《楚辭》雙峰并峙,是中國(guó)詩(shī)史上現(xiàn)實(shí)主義與浪漫主義的兩座巍然屹立的坐標(biāo)。
竇娥的三樁誓愿明明是幻想,卻偏偏寫(xiě)成現(xiàn)實(shí),明明是不合理的偏偏寫(xiě)成合理的,這說(shuō)明了什么?明確:這說(shuō)明在當(dāng)時(shí)的歷史條件下,除了乞求天地鬼神申訴冤屈以外,沒(méi)有別的辦法,作者采用這種浪漫主義的表現(xiàn)手法,一是表明社會(huì)的腐敗黑暗,二是刻畫(huà)竇娥強(qiáng)烈的反抗精神,三是表達(dá)人民要懲治邪惡的愿望?!吧贰本褪墙Y(jié)尾的曲牌,為什么關(guān)漢卿要把“煞”分成[二煞][一煞][煞尾]三個(gè)曲牌呢?明確:說(shuō)明蓄積在竇娥胸中的怒火再也無(wú)法控制,猶如地下巖漿,沖向決口。也說(shuō)明劇作家意猶未盡,他要把竇娥的無(wú)辜受害,要把人們對(duì)竇娥的同情,要把人們對(duì)統(tǒng)治者的憤恨表現(xiàn)得痛痛快快,淋漓盡致。于是在結(jié)尾處一波三折,把高潮推向頂峰?!陡]娥冤》中有兩句唱詞,兩個(gè)牌文本不同,試分析其優(yōu)劣?!豆琶译s劇》本:地也,你不分好歹難為地;天也,我今日負(fù)屈銜冤哀告天。