全班齊讀第五段內(nèi)容。請一位同學(xué)分析,接著讓這位同學(xué)按他分析的讀一遍。3、4兩自然段的平緩之后,第5段作者的情感再次抬升。為了滿足這種情感的張揚,作一口氣連用了四個排比句式“現(xiàn)在是……時候”,一方面這是情感發(fā)泄的需要,另一方面這種排山倒海的語勢也加強了內(nèi)容的表達,極強地突出了現(xiàn)實為自由、平等而戰(zhàn)的重要性。四、學(xué)會演講我們剛才細讀了課文,但讀和講是有區(qū)別的。所謂演講,是一門語言藝術(shù),它的主要形式是“講”,即運用有聲語言并追求言辭的表現(xiàn)力和聲音的感染力;同時還要輔之以“演”,即運用面部表情、手勢動作、身體姿態(tài)乃至一切可以理解的態(tài)勢語言,使講話“藝術(shù)化”起來,從而產(chǎn)生一種非凡的藝術(shù)魅力。那么,接下來就假設(shè)一下假如你是馬丁·路德·金,你會怎樣去講這篇演講辭。
四、品味詩歌藝術(shù)1、詩人是如何表現(xiàn)其品質(zhì)的?運用了什么修辭手法?產(chǎn)生了怎樣的表達效果?明確:詩句“扈江離與辟芷兮,紉秋蘭以為佩”很好地體現(xiàn)了詩人光輝俊潔的人格。用“江離”“辟芷”“秋蘭”三種香草來裝飾自己,比喻自己,極其生動形象地表現(xiàn)了詩人自己美好的精神世界,使詩歌充滿了浪漫主義氣息。2、《離騷》中作者常以“香草”、“美物”來比喻自己、賢士和君王,并表達政治理想,這是《離騷》的一大藝術(shù)特色,這種方法叫做“移情法”,即不直接說出自己想說的話,而是把它寄寓于某一物上,也就是“移情于物”,這種方法在古典詩詞中廣泛運用,在政治不清明的時代,借用“移情”,可言難言之語,抒難抒之情。請找出相關(guān)的詩句,說說詩人是怎樣運用這些比喻來表達政治理想的。
教學(xué)設(shè)想:本節(jié)課的主題是“生命之綠,璞玉心靈”,用圈點批注法解讀愛綠的感情,讓學(xué)生在批注中明確“綠”的象征意義,而不只是結(jié)論的傳遞。同時借助于閱讀、感受和理解把握作者對綠的認識是不斷升華的,由一般對生命希望之綠的喜愛,到與綠交往后被它的不畏強暴,永遠向陽的精神所折服,最后在特定的時代背景下綠在作者的心目中已經(jīng)成了我們民族不屈精神的象征。讓學(xué)生評中求解,評中悟情,評中明理,評中品味。教學(xué)進程:一、導(dǎo)語上節(jié)課我們學(xué)習了朱自清的《綠》,初步了解了讀書動筆的基本方法,這節(jié)課我們繼續(xù)用圈點批注的方法來學(xué)習陸蠡的散文《囚綠記》。二、釋題師:看標題,囚綠之“綠”在文中具體指什么?(一株常春藤)“囚”就是囚禁的意思,那題目就是記述囚禁綠色常春藤的經(jīng)過。三、圈點、把握情節(jié)作者為什么要囚綠呢?文中除了寫“囚綠”之外,還寫了哪些有關(guān)綠的意念和行動?帶著這樣的質(zhì)疑用自己喜歡的方式朗讀課文,請同學(xué)們?nèi)c出疑難字詞,或結(jié)合書下注釋,或同學(xué)合作解決,解決不了的,可提出來我們共同解決。標注段落節(jié)次。勾畫出表現(xiàn)作者對綠意念和行動的句子。
二、整體感知1.導(dǎo)入新課同學(xué)們《細胞生命的禮贊》是一個醫(yī)學(xué)家、生物學(xué)家關(guān)于生命、人生、社會乃至宇宙的思考。思想博大而深邃,信息龐雜而新奇,批評文明,嘲弄愚見,開闊眼界、激發(fā)思索。而其文筆又少見的優(yōu)美、清新、幽默、含蓄,無愧當今科學(xué)散文中的大家手筆。無怪乎自1974年出版后,立即引起美國讀書界和評論界的巨大反響和熱烈歡呼,獲得當年美國國家圖書獎,此后18年來由好幾家出版社印了二十多版,至今暢行不衰!年過花甲的劉易斯·托馬斯的名字因這一本小書而家喻戶曉,有口皆碑,以至于在他接連拋出后兩本書時,書商都不用再作廣告,只喊聲"《細胞生命的禮贊》一書作者劉易斯·托馬斯的新著"就夠了。今天我們就來學(xué)習選自這部書的精彩章節(jié)《作為生物的社會》(板書課題)。
【教學(xué)目標】1.熟讀全文,掌握文中出現(xiàn)的重要的實詞、虛詞、古漢語句式;2.鑒賞本文融情于事的表達和形象精粹的語言;3.深入體會文章凄切婉轉(zhuǎn)的陳情技巧?!窘虒W(xué)重點】重要的古漢語語詞知識【教學(xué)難點】理解作者當時的處境和李密祖孫間真摯深厚的感情【教學(xué)方法】作為教讀課,選擇串講的方式,突出朗讀,以期能做到既落實知識,又能體會文章之美。課時安排為兩課時。要重點做好預(yù)習工作?!窘虒W(xué)步驟】一、以蘇軾的評論導(dǎo)入讀《出師表》不下淚者,其人必不忠;讀《陳情表》不下淚者,其人必不孝;讀《祭十二郎文》不下淚者,其人必不友二、預(yù)習檢測1、下列紅色字注音完全正確的一項()A、臣以險釁(xìn)夙遭閔(mǐn)兇終鮮(xiǎn)兄弟常在床蓐(rù)B、猥(wěi)以微賤責臣逋(bǔ)慢猶蒙衿(jīn)育寵命優(yōu)渥(wò)C、豈敢盤桓(huán)有所希冀(yì)日?。╞ó)西山除臣洗(xiǎn)馬D、逮(dǎi)奉圣朝過蒙拔擢(zhuó)門衰祚(zuò)薄更(gēng)相為命分析:B責臣逋(bū)慢,C有所希冀(jì),D逮(dài)奉圣朝。
【教學(xué)目標】1.理解作者反抗黑暗,辭官歸田,不與當時黑暗的上層社會同流合污而熱愛田園生活的積極精神,學(xué)習其高潔的理想志趣和堅定的人生追求。2.掌握“胡、奚、曷、焉、何”五個疑問代詞,歸納“行、引、乘、策”等四個詞的一詞多義,了解“以、而、之、兮、來”等文言虛詞的用法。3.背誦全文?!窘虒W(xué)重點】1.了解作者辭官歸田的原因,深刻體味詩人鄙棄官場,熱愛田園的無限欣喜之情。2.背誦全文?!窘虒W(xué)難點】1.理解記述中滲透出的或喜或哀,或決絕或猶疑的復(fù)雜感情。2.歸納實詞、虛詞的用法,掌握省略句、倒裝句兩種句式。【教具準備】投影儀投影膠片【課時安排】2課時【教學(xué)過程】第一課時[教學(xué)要點]了解陶淵明及其作品。讀課文,利用注釋、工具書,初步把握文章,朗讀課文,找出押韻的字,由押韻歸納各層大意,幫助學(xué)生理清背誦思路,背誦全文。[教學(xué)步驟]一、導(dǎo)語《桃花源記》是我們在初中接觸過的陶淵明的作品。師生一同背誦?!短一ㄔ从洝分杏崎e自得的田園生活正是作者精神追求的形象反映。今天我們學(xué)習的《歸去來兮辭》正是作者決別官場,同上層社會分道揚鑣的宣言書。
六、到此為止,我們了解到,作者對“笑”鯤鵬和別人的蜩與學(xué)鳩、斥鴳、宋榮子都一一作了否定。那么請大家討論一下,1、作者對鯤鵬和“知效一官,行比一鄉(xiāng),德合一君,而征一國者”是不是肯定呢?明確:也都作了否定。否定后者好理解,關(guān)鍵是否定前者不好理解,因為“鯤鵬展翅”早已作為積極的意象被人們廣泛引用。但在本文中,作者在講述這一寓言故事時,突出的不是鯤鵬本身,而是風力,“故九萬里,風斯在下矣,而后乃今培風;背負青天,而莫之夭閼者,而后乃今將圖南”。對風力作用的突出,實際上就是對鯤鵬的否定。作者寫了“笑”的雙方,對“笑”的一方蜩與學(xué)鳩、斥鴳、宋榮子都作了否定,對被“笑”的一方鯤鵬和“知效一官,行比一鄉(xiāng),德合一君,而征一國者”也都作了否定,并且對順便提及的野馬、塵埃、芥、大舟、朝菌、蟪蛄、冥靈、大椿、彭祖、列子等事物或者人物也都作了否定。這種全盤否定的態(tài)度,如果我們借用本文中的一個形象的詞語,可以說是:笑!是的,本文也可以說是:莊子“笑”萬物!
1、變換角度,多向思維(多向思維要求思維能針對問題,從不同角度,用多種方法去思考問題。對于作文而言,就是要使學(xué)生學(xué)會對同一問題,同一素材,同一題目,同一體裁的不同進行區(qū)分。)請學(xué)生從這則材料中分析出幾個角度,準備課堂交流:19世紀法國著名科幻小說家儒勒?凡爾納,一生寫了104部科幻小說。當初他的第一部科幻小說《氣球上的星期五》接連被15家出版社退回。他當時既痛苦又氣憤,打算將稿子付之一炬。他妻子奪過書稿,給他以鼓勵。于是他嘗試著走進第16家出版社。經(jīng)理赫哲爾閱讀后,當即表示同意出版,還與儒勒?凡爾納簽訂了為期20年的寫作出版合同。這則材料敘述時沒有一定的中心,屬于開發(fā)性材料,分析材料中人物、人物關(guān)系、故事的不同側(cè)面,可以從不同角度得出結(jié)論:
評價分析法,就是引述事例后,對所引述的事例作適當?shù)脑u價,從而使自己的觀點得到印證。例如,在論“節(jié)儉”時,引用了“曾國藩以儉戒子,其子曾紀澤終成出色的外交家;方志敏居官不貪,一生清貧,千古留名”的事實后,接著進行分析:是的,“儉者心常富”,節(jié)儉能培養(yǎng)人同困難作斗爭的勇氣和意志,而這正是一個人立業(yè)最重要的素質(zhì)。從這個意義上說,有人說饑餓是人生的佐料,吃苦是一種資本也不無道理,而自覺和戒奢尚儉則更是促人修身養(yǎng)性,磨煉意志的有效途徑。這里,作者緊扣論點,對論據(jù)進行了評價性分析,這種評價分析使作者的觀點得到強化。(四)因果分析法因果分析法,就是抓住論據(jù)所述的事實,并據(jù)此推求形成原因的一種分析方法。事出必有其因。我們可以依據(jù)事物發(fā)展變化的因果關(guān)系,由事物發(fā)展變化的結(jié)果,推導(dǎo)出產(chǎn)生這種結(jié)果的原因,從而揭示出一定的生活規(guī)律,使事例有力地證明觀點。
The price is the same as(the price was)before the war.價格與戰(zhàn)前相同。(4)定語從句中的“關(guān)系代詞+助動詞be”可以省略。The ticket(that/which was)booked by his sister has been sent to him.他妹妹訂的那張票已送到了他那里。Step 5 PracticeActivity 3(1) Guide students to complete the four activities in the Using Structures part of exercise book, in which activities 1 and 2 focus on ellipsis in dialogue answers, activity 3 focus on signs and headlines, two typical situations where ellipsis is used, and activity 4 focus on ellipsis in diary, an informal style.(2) Combine the examples in the above activities, ask students to summarize the omitted situations in groups, and make their own summary into a poster, and post it on the class wall after class to share with the class.(This step should give full play to the subjectivity of students, and teachers should encourage students to conclude different ellipsis phenomena according to their own understanding, they can conclude according to the different parts omitted in the sentence.)Step 6 Homework1. Understand and master the usages of ellipsis;2. Finish the other exercises in Using structures of Workbook.1、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習,學(xué)生是否理解和掌握省略的用法;2、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習,學(xué)生能否根據(jù)上下文語境或情景恢復(fù)句子中省略的成分,體會使用省略的效果;3、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習,學(xué)生能否獨立完成練習冊和導(dǎo)學(xué)案中的相關(guān)練習。
(2)Consolidate key vocabulary.Ask the students to complete the exercises of activity 6 by themselves. Then ask them to check the answers with their partners.(The first language:Damage of the 1906 San Francisco earthquake and fire.A second language: Yunnan - one of the most diverse provinces in China).Step 5 Language points1. The teacher asks the students to read the text carefully, find out the more words and long and difficult sentences in the text and draw lines, understand the use of vocabulary, and analyze the structure of long and difficult sentences.2. The teacher explains and summarizes the usage of core vocabulary and asks the students to take notes.3. The teacher analyzes and explains the long and difficult sentences that the students don't understand, so that the students can understand them better.Step 6 Homework1. Read the text again, in-depth understanding of the text;2. Master the use of core vocabulary and understand the long and difficult sentences.3. Complete relevant exercises in the guide plan.1、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習,學(xué)生是否理解和掌握閱讀文本中的新詞匯的意義與用法;2、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習,學(xué)生能否結(jié)合文本特點了解文章的結(jié)構(gòu)和作者的寫作邏輯;3、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習,學(xué)生能否了解舊金山的城市風貌、文化特色,以及加利福尼亞州的歷史,體會多元文化對美國的影響。
該板塊的活動主題是“介紹一個有顯著文化特征的地方”( Describe a place with distinctive cultural identity)。該板塊通過介紹中國城繼續(xù)聚焦中國文化。本單元主題圖呈現(xiàn)的是舊金山中國城的典型景象, Reading and Thinking部分也提到中國城,為該板塊作鋪墊。介紹中國城的目的主要是體現(xiàn)中國文化與美國多元文化的關(guān)系,它是美國多元文化的重要組成部分。中國城也是海外華人的精神家園和傳播中國文化的重要窗口,外國人在中國城能近距離體驗中國文化。1. Read the text to understand the cultural characteristics of Chinatown in San Francisco and the relationship between Chinese culture and American multiculturalism;2. Through reading, learn to comb the main information of the article, understand the author's writing purpose and writing characteristics;3. Learn to give a comprehensive, accurate, and organized description of the city or town you live in;Learn to revise and evaluate your writing.Importance:1. Guide the students to read the introduction of Chinatown in San Francisco and grasp its writing characteristics;2. Guide students to introduce their city or town in a comprehensive, accurate and organized way;3. Learn to comb the main information of the article, understand the author's writing purpose, and master the core vocabulary.
Activity 81.Grasp the main idea of the listening.Listen to the tape and answer the following questions:Who are the two speakers in the listening? What is their relationship?What is the main idea of the first part of the listening? How about the second part?2.Complete the passage.Ask the students to quickly review the summaries of the two listening materials in activity 2. Then play the recording for the second time.Ask them to complete the passage and fill in the blanks.3.Play the recording again and ask the students to use the structure diagram to comb the information structure in the listening.(While listening, take notes. Capture key information quickly and accurately.)Step 8 Talking Activity 91.Focus on the listening text.Listen to the students and listen to the tape. Let them understand the attitudes of Wu Yue and Justin in the conversation.How does Wu Yue feel about Chinese minority cultures?What does Justin think of the Miao and Dong cultures?How do you know that?2.learn functional items that express concerns.Ask students to focus on the expressions listed in activity. 3.And try to analyze the meaning they convey, including praise (Super!).Agree (Exactly!)"(You're kidding.!)Tell me more about it. Tell me more about it.For example, "Yeah Sure." "Definitely!" "Certainly!" "No kidding!" "No wonder!" and so on.4.Ask the students to have conversations in small groups, acting as Jsim and his friends.Justin shares his travels in Guizhou with friends and his thoughts;Justin's friends should give appropriate feedback, express their interest in relevant information, and ask for information when necessary.In order to enrich the dialogue, teachers can expand and supplement the introduction of Miao, dong, Lusheng and Dong Dage.After the group practice, the teacher can choose several groups of students to show, and let the rest of the students listen carefully, after listening to the best performance of the group, and give at least two reasons.
交談時雙方的空間距離也有一定講究。和朋友談話、和陌生人談話、和異性談話、招呼長者和上級,都需要有一個合適的距離。如果上級故意“縮減”與下級人員通常談話時的距離,那是表示對下級的關(guān)切。說話的時候需要一面想,一面說,為了控制說話的主動權(quán),免得被別人插人、打斷,人們可以使用“唔”“啊”之類的音節(jié),表示“話還沒有說完,你別著急”之類的意思。空白也表示意思,在說唱藝術(shù)中,什么時候停頓,停多久,都有講究,以便使交際更有成效。這就是說,空間和時間的因素也在交際中得到了適當?shù)倪\用。所以,各種伴隨動作也是交際的工具。它們一般都是在語言的基礎(chǔ)上產(chǎn)生的。即使像“察顏觀色”這一類特定的交際方式,也必須有語言的交際為基礎(chǔ),預(yù)先有了一定的了解,對方才能領(lǐng)會??傊?,在上述的種種交際工具當中,身勢等伴隨動作是非語言的交際工具;旗語之類是建立在語言、文字基礎(chǔ)之上的輔助性交際工具;文字是建立在語言基礎(chǔ)之上的一種最重要的輔助交際工具;
一、教材1、新教材對高中語文閱讀教學(xué)的要求高中語文新大綱中明確規(guī)定,高中語文教學(xué)要讓學(xué)生“掌握語文學(xué)習的基本方法,養(yǎng)成自學(xué)語文的習慣”,“為繼續(xù)學(xué)習和終身發(fā)展打好基礎(chǔ)”,提出了“以閱讀教學(xué)為龍頭帶動整個語文教育是一個標本兼治的通途”,以多種渠道培養(yǎng)良好的閱讀習慣,以閱讀帶動聽說寫能力的全面提高。2、教材分析這篇文章是從美國著名的心理學(xué)家、社會學(xué)家弗羅姆《愛的藝術(shù)》中節(jié)選出來的,《愛的藝術(shù)》這本書闡釋了愛并不是一種與人的成熟程度無關(guān)的感情,而是一個能力的問題,是一門通過訓(xùn)練自己的紀律、集中和耐心學(xué)到手的一門藝術(shù)。在這篇文章中,他從兒童成長的過程的角度闡述了父母之愛與孩童情感與心智成熟的關(guān)系,從心理學(xué)的角度闡述了愛作為一種改變社會的力量的心理基礎(chǔ)。全文10個小節(jié),闡述了一個嬰兒成長為一個“成熟的人”其心理結(jié)構(gòu)逐步變化的過程,并在最后指出,真正成熟的人應(yīng)該能夠綜合母愛與父愛,唯其如此,才能夠使自己真正成為一個健康而成熟的靈魂。
讀《環(huán)境污染組圖》思考:造成交通擁擠的原因是什么?有什么危害?(原因:汽車的增加、汽車數(shù)量與道路狀況的比值越來越大造成的。危害:交通阻塞,導(dǎo)致時間和能源的嚴重浪費,影響城市環(huán)境質(zhì)量。)3.增加就業(yè)困難,失業(yè)人數(shù)增多思考:產(chǎn)生這個問題的原因是什么?(隨著城市化發(fā)展,城市科學(xué)技術(shù)提高,機器化大生產(chǎn)使勞動者數(shù)量要求降低,城市人口本來就未充分就業(yè),再加上鄉(xiāng)村人口大量涌入,導(dǎo)致失業(yè)人數(shù)增多。)二、解決辦法:(以上海市為例,講解解決的辦法。)1.改善城市環(huán)境:治理河流、控制大氣污染物、大力加強綠化建設(shè)為改善城市環(huán)境,上海市全面展開對大氣、河流、噪聲等多方面的治理工作。如蘇州河的治理、降低城市污染物濃度、加強綠化建設(shè),截止1990年,市區(qū)綠化覆蓋率達到20.3%。
Listening and Speaking introduces the topic of “talking about how to become an astronaut”. This period is aimed to inform students some details about the requirements of being an astronaut. Students can be motivated and inspired by the astronauts. Teachers ought to encourage students to learn from them and let them aim high and dream big.Listening and Talking introduces the theme of "talk about life in space". This part also informs students more details about life in space and can inspire students to be curious about this job. 1. Guide students to listen for numbers concerning dates, years and ages etc2. Cultivate students' ability to talk about how to become an astronaut and life in space ; 3. Instruct students to use functional sentences of the dialogue such as “ first of all, I am not sure, so what might be .. I guess.. I wonder…I am curious…)appropriately.1. Guide students to understand the content of listening texts in terms of the whole and key details; 2. Cultivate students' ability to guess the meaning of words in listening; discuss with their peers how to become a qualified astronaut and describe the life in space.Part 1: Listening and SpeakingStep 1: Lead inPredictionThe teacher can ask students to predict what the listening text is about by looking at the pictures.About how to become an astronaut./the requirements of an astronautStep 2: Then, play the radio which is about an interview a. And after finishing listening for the first time, the students need to solve the following tasks.
The themes of this part are “Talk about how to become an astronaut” and “Talk about life in space”. As Neil Armstrong said “Mystery creates wonder and wonder is the basis of man’s desire to understand. Space is difficult for human to reach, therefore, humans are full of wonders about it. However, if wanting to achieve the dream of reaching the Moon, some of our human should work hard to be an astronaut at first. Part A(Talk about how to become an astronaut) is a radio interview in a radio studio, where the host asked the Chinese astronauts about his story how to become an astronaut. Yang Liwei told his dreamed to be an astronaut since childhood. Then he worked hard to get into college at 22. The next 10 years, he gradually became an experienced pilot. At the same time, to be an astronaut, he had to study hard English, science and astronomy and trained hard to keep in good physical and mental health and to practise using space equipment. Part B (Talk about life in space) is also an interview with the astronaut Brown, who is back on the earth. The host Max asked about his space life, such as his emotion about going back the earth, the eating, shower, brushing, hobbies and his work. Part A and Part B are interviews. So expressing curiosity about the guests’ past life is a communicative skill, which students should be guided to learn.1. Students can get detailed information about how Yang Liwei became an astronaut and Max’s space life.2. Students learn to proper listening strategy to get detailed information---listening for numbers and taking notes.3. Students can learn related sentences or phrases to express their curiosity like “ I wish to know...” “I’d love to know...”4. Students can learn more about the space and astronauts, even be interested in working hard to be an astronaut
The theme of the section is “Describe space facts and efforts to explore space”. Infinitives are one of non-finite verbs, as the subjects, objects, predicative, attributes and adverbials. This unit is about space exploration, which is a significant scientific activity, so every scientific activity has strong planning. Therefore, using the infinitives to show its purpose, explanations or restrictions is the best choice.1. Learn the structure, functions and features of infinitives.2. Learn to summarize some rules about infinitives to show purpose and modify.3. Learn to use infinitives in oral and writing English. 1. Learn the structure, functions and features of infinitives.2. Learn to summarize some rules about infinitives to show purpose and modify.3. Learn to use use infinitives in oral and writing English.Step 1 Lead in---Pair workLook at the following sentences and focus on the italicized infinitives. In pairs, discuss their functions. 1. I trained for a long time to fly airplanes as a fighter pilot..(作目的狀語)2. As we all know, an astronaut needs to be healthy and calm in order to work in space..(作目的狀語)3. First of all, you must be intelligent enough to get a related college degree..(作目的狀語)4. Some scientist were determined to help humans realise their dream to explore space..(作定語)5. On 12 April 1961, Yuri Gagarin became the first person in the world to go into space..(作定語)Summary:1. 不定式的結(jié)構(gòu):to+do原形。2. 分析上面的句子,我們知道在描述太空探索時,動詞不定式不僅可以用來表目的,還可以用來作定語,表修飾。
⑦在我看來, 探索太空是值得的。As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore the space.Step 10 Writing---draftRecently, students in our class have had heated a discussion on whether space is worth exploring. Students hold different ideas about it.30% of us think space exploration is not worthwhile. They think space is too far away from us and our daily life and is a waste of money. And the money spent on space exploration can be used to solve the earth’s problems such as starvation and pollution.On the other hand,70% think space is worth exploring because we have benefited a lot from it,such as using satellites for communication and weather forecast. What’s more,with further space research,we may solve the population problem by moving to other planets one day. Also,space research will enable us to find new sources to solve the problem of energy shortages on the earth.As far as I am concerned, it is worthwhile to explore the space. Not only can it promote the development of society but also enrich our life. Step 11 Pair workExchange drafts with a partner. Use this checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft.1.Does the writer explain why he/she changed/wanted to change?2.Does the writer tell how the changes have improved or will improve his/her life?3.Is the text well-organised?4.Does the writer use words and expressions to show similarities and differences?5.Are there any grammar or spelling errors?6.Does the writer use correct punctuation?