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人教版新目標初中英語八年級下冊It’s a nice day, isn’t it教案2篇
"Hello! Welcome to English class! Introduce yourself. Meet your new classmates." That's what the teacher says. What do you say? "Oh no!" It can be difficult talking to new people. But it can be fun, and you can make friends. How do you do it? Make small talk. Small talk is polite conversation. "Wang Nan is a great pingpang player, isn't she?" "I'd love to meet her, wouldn't you?" "It's been raining a lot, hasn't it?" Tag questions are a form of polite speech. To make small talk successfully, you should know how to make them. You should also know what topics to talk about. Try to learn this unit carefully. The next time you're in English class, you'll find out. Making small talk's easy, isn't it? (“你好！歡迎你！請做一下自我介紹。認識一下你的新同學?！蓖ǔＴ谡n上老師會這樣說。你會說什么呢？“噢，不！”與陌生人談話太困難了。但是這也很有意思，并且你還能交到朋友。你該怎么做呢？閑聊。閑聊指得是禮貌的對話?！巴蹰且粋€很棒的乒乓球運動員，不是嗎？”“我希望自己能認識她，你呢？“今年的雨水很多，不是嗎？”反意疑問句是一種禮貌用語。為了使得談話成功，你應(yīng)該知道怎樣去進行閑聊。你還應(yīng)該知道與不同的人該談?wù)撌裁礃拥脑掝}。認真的學習這個單元吧，下次在英語課上，你會發(fā)現(xiàn)與大家展開談話是一件很容易的事情，不信我們來試試。)
人教版新目標初中英語八年級下冊He said I was hard-working教案2篇
This activity introduces some new vocabulary and provide oral practice using the target language.Task 1 . Ask four students to stand in front of the class, and the teacher asks them the following questions as a reporter.1.What are you going to do when you grow up?2.What are you going to do next week?3.What are going to do after school?The students will give different answers, then ask a good student to report what they said.I am going to e a doctor.What did she say?----------She said she was going to be a doctor.I am going to have a party on Friday night.What did he say?-------He said he was going to have a party on Friday night.I am going to do my homework.What did she say ?------ She said she was going to do her homework.I am going home after school.What did she say?-----She said she was going home after school.Say In this unit we are going to learn to use words like to report what someone said.Task 2. Read the instructions. Then ask a student to read the four questions. And write the words on the Bb. Explain what soap opera is.Task 3. Ask the students to Look at the pictures, point out the TV screens in the picture. Ask one girl to read what Marcia said.What did Marcia say? She said She said she was having a surprise party for Lana on Friday night. Repeat the other pictures in the same way.Activity3. Listen and number the pictures in activity 1a.
人教版新目標初中英語八年級下冊How long have you been collecting shells教案2篇
Step Ⅱ Show the new words on the screen and teach the new words. Read the new words to students and ask them to repeat.Step Ⅲ 3aThis activity introduces new vocabulary and provides reading practice using the target language.In this activity first look at the four pictures.T: What can you see in the pictures?Ss: Four snow globes.T: Right. There are four snow globes in the pictures. And what are they?Ss: They are a monster, two polar bears, two penguins and a birthday cake.Write these words on the blackboard: snow globe; monster; polar bear; penguin and birthday cake. Read them to the class and ask students to repeat each one. Make sure students understand each word.Use a computer to show the E-mail message on the screen and read the message to students.Get students to read the e-mail on their own, and then draw lines connecting each snow globe and its description.Correct the answers.AnswersA line should connect each snow globe picture with the words that describe it in the letter.Step Ⅳ 3bThis activity provides writing practice using the target language.First review Activity 2a on Page 47.Then ask students to complete the message according to Activity 2a.Some partial sentences are given to students. Write about one person's collection.When students work, walk around the room checking the progress and offering help as needed.When they finish, ask some students to read their messages to the class.
人教版新目標初中英語八年級下冊What were you doing when the UFO arrived教案2篇
(一).知識方面: 1.培養(yǎng)學生能運用過去進行時來描述、談?wù)撨^去某個時間正在發(fā)生的事情或動作的意識和能力，能就過去某個時間正在發(fā)生的動作做出正確的描述。 2.培養(yǎng)學生的想象力和角色扮演的合作能力。 3.培養(yǎng)學生講述過去發(fā)生的事情經(jīng)過的能力。能正確運用一般過去時來講述故事。 (二).技能方面: 1.本單元的語言目標是Talk about past events and tell a story（談?wù)撨^去的時間和講述一個故事），圍繞這一目標，要涉及句型： What were you doing when the UFO arrived? ----I was sitting in the barber’s chair. The barber was cutting my hair. 因此必須學習standing、studying、cleaning、sleeping、cooking、making、eating、cutting、等表示地點的詞，以便為上述句型提供語言材料。2.學習過去進行時的有關(guān)知識。Was/were+現(xiàn)在分詞，是該時態(tài)的表達式。 3.在學習過程中，要區(qū)分The boy was walking down the street when the UFO landed.和While the boy was walking down the street, the UFO landed.這兩種由when和while引導的狀語從句的句型結(jié)構(gòu)。注意它們的不同。
人教版新目標初中英語九年級上冊Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes教案2篇
Step 1 Greeting Greet the class and check the homeworkStep 2 A duty report The S on duty gives a report on the rules in his home and lead in 3a “Sun Fei’s and Wu Yu’s rules” Step 3 ReadingSs read the conversation and write the two girls’ rules in the chart. Check the answers.Get Ss to read after the tape and then read aloud by themselves. Then, T explains the language points.Step 4 Pairwork 3bRole play. Use the information in chart to practice with the conversation in 3a covered. They can look at the sample conversation in the right box.Step 5 Task 2 “Who’s the best reporter?”Make a survey by asking any 5 students the questions in the chart in activity 4. Then give out a report about it. See who is the best reporter? And the best reporter will get a nice ball-pen.Step 6 Summary and homework:Write out the report in your exercise-books.Period ThreeStep 1 Greeting and a duty reportThe S gives a duty report talking about his experience of being late for school. Lead in the question “Do you ever get to school late? How often do you get to school late? Always, usually, sometimes, or never?Step 2 1a Get Ss to finish writing.Step 3 Pairwork 1b Get Ss to talk about their answers with their partners using the sample conversation in the box on the right.Step 4 Listening practice2a Lead-in: What will happen if you get to school late? What about Peter? Let’s listen to a conversation between Peter and his father. Get Ss to finish 2a (As usual, for the first time, Ss only listen.) Check the answers.
人教版新目標初中英語九年級上冊How do you study for a test教案2篇
內(nèi)容提示本單元主要內(nèi)容是學會利用verb十by／with gerund表示方式方法來討論學習英語的策略，認識自己在學習方面的長處和不足。初步了解現(xiàn)在完成時的結(jié)構(gòu)和用法?，F(xiàn)在完成時由助動詞have／has+動詞的過去分詞構(gòu)成，主要表示過去發(fā)生的某一動作對現(xiàn)在仍有影響或造成的后果，常與already，yet，just，ever，never等副詞連用。教學目標一、學習目標（Language Goal） 1. Talk about how to study . 學會討論各種學習方法和策略。2. Find out your suitable learning methods. 找出適合自己的學習方法。 二、語言結(jié)構(gòu)（Language Structures） 1. Verb + by with gerund by＋動名詞短語 表示“通過…途徑，方法” 2. How questions have引導的特殊疑問句 三、目標語言（Target Language） 1. How do you study for tests ? 你是怎樣準備考試的？Well , I study by working with my classmates. 哦，我和同學們一起學習。2. Have you ever studied with a group ? 你曾經(jīng)參加過學習小組嗎？Yes , I have . I’ve learned a lot that way . 是的，參加過。通過這種方式我學了許多。
人教版新目標初中英語九年級上冊Where would you like to visit教案2篇
The First PeriodⅠ．Teaching Aims and DemandsKnowledge Objects（1） Key Vocabularytiring, educational, fascinating, thrilling, peaceful, exotic, trek, jungle, take it easy, explore, historic, site（2） Target LanguageWhere would you like to go on vacation?I’d like to trek through the jungle, because I like exciting vacations．2． Ability Objects（1）Train students to talk about places they would like to visit with the target language．（2）Train students to describe vacations with different adjectives．（3）Train students' listening skill．3． Moral Object,It′s more interesting to go on vacating somewhere instead of staying at home．Ⅱ． Teaching Key Points1． Key Vocabularytiring, educational, fascinating, thrilling, peaceful, exotic, trek, jungle, take it easy, explore, historic, site2． Target LanguageTalk about different places with the target language．Ⅲ． Teaching Difficult Points1． Describe vacations with different adjectives．2． Talk about different places with the target language．Ⅳ． Teaching Methods1． Teaching by illumination2． Teaching by doing chain drills3． Teaching by pairworkⅤ． Teaching Aids1． A tape recorder2． Some pictures of different places with famous views
人教版新目標初中英語九年級下冊We’re trying to save the manatees教案2篇
本單元主要圍繞著有關(guān)瀕臨滅絕的動物這一話題，學習了應(yīng)該怎樣保護我們的環(huán)境，以及就某一問題展開辯論。目標提示語言目標能夠運用所學知識，就某一問題展開辯論。認知目標1、復(fù)習一些語法：現(xiàn)在進行時、一般現(xiàn)在時、用used to 表示一般過去時、現(xiàn)在完成時、一般過去時的被動語態(tài)。2、學會表達同意和不同意。3、學會以下基本句型：We’re trying to save the manatees.Manatees eat about 100 pounds of food a day.There used to be a lot of manatees.In 1972,it was discovered that they were endangered.Some of the swamps have become polluted.情感目標了解一些瀕臨滅絕的動物的生活習性和瀕臨滅絕的原因，教育學生應(yīng)該如何保護環(huán)境。教學提示充分利用多媒體等教學設(shè)備，創(chuàng)設(shè)與本課話題相關(guān)的情境，如各種不同種類的動物、動物園以及有關(guān)環(huán)境的畫畫等等。圍繞著本單元的教學目標，設(shè)計一些貼近學生實際的教學任務(wù)，如讓學生談?wù)撟约鹤钕矚g的動物，如何拯救瀕危動物，如何保護環(huán)境等等。讓學生根據(jù)所學知識，就動物園是否對動物有利以及其他的話題進行辯論。
師說教案
孔夫子被稱為圣人，但他還是不恥下問，他曾以郯子、萇弘等人為師，他的學問絕對不比他們差，只是想學到其他他不會的知識罷了。他說：“三人行，必有我?guī)熝??！泵耖g俗語說：“三個臭皮匠，頂個諸葛亮?！钡拇_是這樣，不管是誰，都會有不懂的地方，例如，小學生做的數(shù)學智力題，有些連博士生都做不出來，就算你是大學中文系畢業(yè)的，也不會熟悉到字典里的每個字。人們的學問遠遠不如圣人，可他們也不肯向老師學習。這樣的話，人又會有什么進步呢？老師無處不在，卻往往被忽略，甚至恥笑。巫醫(yī)、樂師和那些工匠們，經(jīng)?；ハ鄬W習。而那些士大夫們，自己沒有學問，一聽到有人稱“老師”稱“弟子”等等，就許多人聚在一塊兒譏笑人家，還說：“他和他年齡差不多，道德學問也差不多啊，以地位低的人為師，就可羞恥，以官職高的人為師，就近乎諂媚！”聽起來好像老師的標準都是他們定的！老師，可以是各個方面的傳授者，卻有人以向那些人學習為恥！
部編版語文九年級下冊《蒲柳人家》教案
一、導入新課同學們，在古典小說《水滸傳》中，那些俠肝義膽、疾惡如仇的英雄人物總是那樣令人印象深刻。比如“及時雨”宋江、“黑旋風”李逵、“一丈青”扈三娘……今天，我們學習的劉紹棠的《蒲柳人家》中也有一位綽號叫“一丈青”的大娘，她又是怎樣一個人物呢？就讓我們一起走近劉紹棠，走近他筆下栩栩如生的人物形象。二、教學新課目標導學一：感知內(nèi)容，梳理故事情節(jié)快速瀏覽課文，根據(jù)相關(guān)情節(jié)，自擬標題。明確：第一節(jié)：(1)何滿子被拴葡萄架；(2)一丈青迷信繡肚兜；(3)一丈青大鬧運河灘；(4)一丈青妙手救病人；(5)一丈青百般疼孫子。第二節(jié)：(1)何大學問威震古北口；(2)何大學問仗義熱腸；(3)何大學問請師教孫子；(4)何大學問怒拴何滿子。目標導學二：分析人物形象，把握人物性格特征1．小說中的主要人物有哪些？他們分別具有怎樣的形象特點？
人教部編版語文九年級下冊短文兩篇教案
一、新課導入同學們，你們一定讀過不少關(guān)于讀書的名言吧，比如“讀書忌死讀，死讀鉆牛角”“讀一本好書，就是和許多高尚的人談話”“讀書要有感受，要有審美感，對他人的金玉良言，要能融會貫通，并使之付諸實現(xiàn)”等。 這些名言，都體現(xiàn)了名人對于讀書的看法。今天，我們要一起學習著名作家培根的《談讀書》，看看他對讀書有哪些獨到的見解，能給我們帶來什么啟示。（板書課題）【設(shè)計意圖】從關(guān)于讀書的名人名言切入，拓展學生對于名人讀書心得的了解，激發(fā)學生探究的興趣。二、概括文章內(nèi)容，梳理文章層次1.自由閱讀課文，看看作者圍繞著“讀書”，提出了哪些觀點？讀的時候，把文中相關(guān)的句子勾畫出來。（1）讀書足以怡情，足以傅彩，足以長才。（2）讀書時不可存心詰難作者，不可盡信書上所言，亦不可只為尋章摘句，而應(yīng)推敲細思。（3）書有可淺嘗者，有可吞食者，少數(shù)則須咀嚼消化。（4）讀書使人充實，討論使人機智，作文使人準確。（5）讀史使人明智，讀詩使人靈秀，數(shù)學使人周密，科學使人深刻，倫理學使人莊重，邏輯修辭之學使人善辯：凡有所學，皆成性格。
人教部編版語文八年級上冊短文二篇教案
陶弘景隱居茅山時期，仍然關(guān)心社會的發(fā)展，希望社會穩(wěn)定，天下百姓都能安居樂業(yè)。梁武帝很感激陶弘景給予的有力支持，親提御毫，寫了一封情真意切的御詔，文曰：“山中何所有？卿何戀而不返？”盼望陶弘景出山輔政，重列朝班。然而陶弘景下定了不出山的決心，他先寫了一首詩，后畫了一幅畫作為回答。詩為《詔問山中何所有賦詩以答》：“山中何所有，嶺上多白云。只可自怡悅，不堪持贈君。”畫的內(nèi)容是：兩頭牛，一頭散放水草之間，自由自在；一頭套著金籠頭，被人用牛繩牽著，用牛鞭驅(qū)趕。梁武帝看了詩和畫，領(lǐng)會了他的用意，就不再強迫他出來做官了。但是“國家每有吉兇征討大事，無不前以咨詢”，故當時人稱陶弘景為“山中宰相”。林語堂《蘇東坡傳》中這樣評價蘇軾
人教部編版語文八年級上冊散文二篇教案
師：既然活得這么痛苦，為什么羅素說是“值得”的？預(yù)設(shè) （1）羅素胸懷廣闊，勇于擔當，要為解除天下百姓的苦難而活著，因此付出辛苦是值得的；（2）羅素不以苦為苦，而以苦為樂，因此痛苦的生活是值得的；（3）苦中伴隨著樂，例如愛情會帶來歡愉，同時征服了苦難也會產(chǎn)生勝利的喜悅，因此苦樂相伴的體驗是值得的；（4）雖然羅素最終沒能減輕人類的不幸，甚至自己也深受其害，但畢竟努力過，奮斗過，這一切都是值得的。2.思維拓展師：像羅素一樣心憂天下的人還有很多，你想到了誰？課件出示：屈原：長太息以掩涕兮，哀民生之多艱。杜甫：安得廣廈千萬間，大庇天下寒士俱歡顏！范仲淹：先天下之憂而憂，后天下之樂而樂。阿諾德：“同情，使軟弱的人覺得這個世界溫柔，使堅強的人覺得這個世界高尚。”……師小結(jié)：羅素追求愛情、知識、同情心，作為中學生的我們更應(yīng)該有自己的追求。我們的追求要有利于社會的發(fā)展，要符合社會的進步要求，這樣，我們的追求才會更有意義。【設(shè)計意圖】設(shè)計此環(huán)節(jié)，一是為了深化對本文的理解，二是讓學生思維拓展延伸，聯(lián)想更多與羅素類似同情人類苦難的人，培養(yǎng)學生正確的人生觀，用榜樣去影響學生?！景鍟O(shè)計】
人教版新課標PEP小學英語三年級上冊Recycle 2教案
3 趣味操練 (Practice)（1）請學生拿出他們事先準備的材料，指導學生按步驟進行搖搖樂的制作，每句話中的第一個動作都是教師要強調(diào)的部分，一定要配合手勢，幫助學生理解和記憶。教師可適當給學生充分的時間，讓學生用顏色筆將搖搖樂畫得更漂亮些，有條件的話，可以用相機將學生的作品拍下來，有機會可以展覽。（2）讓學生跟著錄音一起唱歌曲 Happy New Year，可以在唱歌時打節(jié)拍或邊唱邊舞。4 課堂評價 (Assessment) 做活動手冊本單元4、5 部分的練習。本次評價要與課本上的4—6單元評價相結(jié)合，讓學生自己動手填寫評價表，評價自己。5 擴展性活動(Add-activities)新年的時候?qū)⒏枨?Happy New Year唱給爺爺奶奶，爸爸媽媽聽，祝賀他們新年快樂！板書設(shè)計：Recycle 2Let’s make 部分的制作流程圖Happy New Year! （一月一日的日歷）
人教版新課標PEP小學英語四年級上冊Recycle2教案
二 呈現(xiàn)新課 （Presentation） 1、pass the word 兩個小組聽音樂同時向后傳詞卡，一組傳成員，一組傳職業(yè)。音樂停后，拿成員的學生問另一人，如：“What’s your father? My father is a doctor.” 2、group work 兩人一小組，互問答，學生根據(jù)對方的回答擺詞卡。 根據(jù)卡片，用句子描述一下自己的家庭成員和職業(yè)。(仿照歌謠中的句型) 3、Listen and match 聽一聽Chant，請孩子們根據(jù)錄音擺一擺卡片。一個學生在黑板上擺。 4、觀看課件，邊看邊跟讀?？磿吙催呏笗械娜宋?。 5、聽錄音，邊聽邊打節(jié)奏。男女生接龍說歌謠。各小組接龍說歌謠。請幾個學生接龍說歌謠。6、各小組說一說，演一演歌謠。各小組展示歌謠。 7、教師出示一個制作好的圣誕禮物，說：“Do you like it?”“Today let’s make a gift ,ok?”教師邊說邊示范制作過程。學生認真聽，理解。
人教版新課標PEP小學英語四年級下冊Recycle 2教案
第一課時教學設(shè)計教學內(nèi)容：Read and act教學目標：1.通過游戲及籌備野炊的過程，在實際情景中復(fù)習有關(guān)天氣、蔬菜、水果、食物的單詞以及句型：What’s the weather like in…..?How much is/ are …?What do you have ? I have … .I want … .2.能聽懂、會說句型：Tomorrow will be … .Let’s go shopping. What do you want to bring? Let’s have a picnic tomorrow.教學重點：能聽、說、認讀句型：I want … .I have….教學難點：在實際情景中靈活運用Read and act 中的主要句型。教學準備：1.教師準備錄音機、磁帶和一張大購物單。2.教師準備有關(guān)蔬菜、食物、水果和天氣的圖卡和詞卡。3.學生以小組為單位準備一份購物單。教學過程：一、Preparation1.Sing the song :The Coat in the Window.(P66 Unit5 Let’s sing)2.復(fù)習有關(guān)蔬菜、食物和水果的單詞。（蔬菜指的是第六單元中學過的；水果主要復(fù)習本課時涉及到的幾種常見的即可。）在復(fù)習的過程中教師可先出示詞卡，讓學生認讀，并讓學生試著說出意思，然后教師出示圖卡進行確認。同時教師在黑板上寫出shop的字樣，把復(fù)習過的蔬菜和水果的圖卡依次貼到黑板上。
人教版新課標PEP小學英語五年級上冊Recycle2教案
教學目標與要求：１、 通過活動和復(fù)習句型，介紹及動作短語等。２、 學唱歌曲。教學重、難點：重點為復(fù)習鞏固介詞及存在句型。難點為正確區(qū)分內(nèi)容相近的圖片。課前準備：詞卡、錄音機、錄音帶、圖片教學過程：１、 熱身（１） 放歌曲錄音，學生跟唱。（２） 師生進行日常會話。２、 預(yù)習做“按我說的做”游戲。３、 新授（１） 看圖片，問：Where is the …? Ss: It’s in /on/over…（２） 做“猜一猜”游戲。（３） 兩人一組完成Pair work,連一連，說一說。（４） 聽錄音，完成練習。錄音原文如下：There are mountains behind her village. There is a river near her house. There is a new air-conditioner in her bedroom. She cleans her bedroom every day.There is a lake near his village. There are many trees in front of his house. There is a big trash bin in his kitchen. He can cook tasty meals.There is a forest near his village. There is a road beside his house. There is a man under a tree. He often waters the flowers.There are many Paths in her village. There are new curtains on the window of her house. There are many new skirts in her closet. She washes the clothes every weekend.鞏固延伸：做“幸運摸獎”游戲
人教版新課標PEP小學英語六年級上冊Recycle2教案
2．預(yù)習(Preview) 看字母，說職業(yè) 教師出示職業(yè)名稱單詞的首字母，讓學生說出整個單詞。如：w-writer；d-driver／doctor，a-accountant/actor/actress；T-TV reporter等o 3．新課呈現(xiàn)(Presentation) (1)從看字母說職業(yè)名稱引出TV reporter，教師拿出一些名人照片說：“Now you’re a TV reporter．You’re going to interview a famous person．You don’t know who he／she is ．But you know he／she is someone in the pictures．”給學生五次提問的機會，讓他們根據(jù)教師的回答找出正確的人物。以下問題供參考： What does he／she do? What’s h is hobby ? Is he strong／thin／tall? Where does he／she live? (2)心有靈犀 請兩名學生(sl和s2)上來，每人拿著紙和筆分別站在教室的兩邊。教師提問：“What does s1’s father do?”站在臺上的兩名學生分別把答案寫在各自的紙上。如果兩人的答案完全相同，兩人就算獲勝。教師繼續(xù)問問題“What does …’s…do?”全體學生一起寫出答案，誰寫的答案正確就可以得一分。 Listen and match (1)教師說：“Do you want to know more about Liu Yun?’’學生回答后教師說：“Please listen and find out．’’教師放本部分錄音，學生認真聽。
人教版新課標PEP小學英語三年級上冊Hello！教案4篇
（3）通過游戲Simon says 來練習以show, open, close, put, carry 所引導的祈使句。教師發(fā)指令學生做動作。但只有聽到老師帶有Simon says的指令時，才能做出相應(yīng)的動作，否則就是失敗。失敗的同學退出游戲。（4）聽Let's chant的錄音，學生邊聽邊做，逐漸過渡成邊聽邊說邊做，最后獨立說做，并進行比賽。4. 課堂評價(Assessment)做活動手冊本單元第5部分練習。學生根據(jù)錄音，圈出所聽到的文具。具體方法和步驟參考如下：（1）學生看圖，用英語說出圖中每樣文具物品。（2）教師講解題目的意思并指導做的方法。（3）學生聽錄音做練習。（4）再放錄音，在教師的指導下讓學生一句一句地跟讀并互相核對答案，并說出所圈的文具，再通過給花朵涂色進行自我評價。5. 擴展性活動(Extensive activities)選詞游戲。將學生分為六組，每組各派一個選手，教師說單詞，選手快步跑到講臺前，找到所說單詞，并舉起大聲讀出，正確為勝。
人教部編版語文九年級下冊寫作修改潤色教案
一個人的靈魂總是會在他的眼睛和語言里得到表露。靈魂高尚者，眼光明亮，語言高雅。反過來，我們也可以通過個人的眼睛和語言而窺視到他的靈魂，眼神淫邪，語言污穢，他的靈魂必定卑鄙骯臟。修改指導：這段論述用正反雙向說理的方法闡明了一個人的靈魂、眼睛、語言三者之間的關(guān)系，條理清楚，語言簡明，從思維和闡述上來看，應(yīng)該說是準確嚴密的。但是，我們可以將語言潤色，使原文變得更好。修改示例：靈魂儲藏在人的心中，閃動在人的眼里，表露在人的嘴上。眼睛足以傳情。它毫不掩飾地展現(xiàn)出你的學識、品性和情操：也許你貌不驚人，眼小如豆，但它卻可以流露出華美的氣質(zhì);也許你美目流盼，但卻可能有一個蜷曲衰敗的靈魂在其中沉睡。師：精妙地運用動詞，恰到好處地使用比喻、對比等修辭手法，巧妙地使用假設(shè)句式，使文章在闡釋事理的同時也不乏生動形象。【設(shè)計意圖】把握了習作的要求后，給學生幾個片段嘗試修改。學生先從“言”和“意”等方面來進行修改，教師再具體示范指導，為綜合修改全文做準備。