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人教版高中語文必修1《園丁贊歌：記敘要選好角度》說課稿
在學習語文經(jīng)驗交流會上，季老師舉著我的《采花釀蜜集》，對大家說：“人日積月累辛勤采擷，終于釀出了知識的瓊漿。大家都應(yīng)這樣，爭做知識的富戶啊！”老師有點激動，低低地爬在鼻梁上的眼鏡突然滑了下來，正好落在那集子上。大家笑了，季老師也笑了。就這樣，我的寫作有了進步，好幾篇作文登上了班級《學作園地》。從此，我愛上了語文，更深深地愛上了季老師。高中升學考前那個星期天的夜晚，季老師舊病復(fù)發(fā)，累倒了。半夜，老師們把他送進了公社衛(wèi)生院。第二天，同學們都悄悄去衛(wèi)生院看望。我去的時候，季老師正在掛滴流。可是，下午季老師又出現(xiàn)在講臺上，他臉色憔悴，聲音沙啞……我手捧《采花釀蜜集》走近季老師，思緒的溪水從遠方流了回來?！凹纠蠋煛?，我把本子捧給老師，深情地叫了聲。季老師接過本子，仔細翻閱著，臉上露出了笑容，像是聞到了郁郁芳香的蜜汁似的?！斑M步不小呀！”季老師說著，又在本子扉頁上題了
人教版高中語文必修3《杜甫詩三首 秋興八首》說課稿2篇
師：“兩開”是什么意思??？注解里是怎么說的？第二次開，也就說他在這個地方已經(jīng)待了兩年了，這里是他回家的路途中，是不是？路途中他停留了兩年時間。好的，你先請坐。你覺得殘菊不能兩開，在理解上好像存在一些誤差。趙勇：因為菊花古往今來代表著對家鄉(xiāng)的思念。師：菊花代表對家鄉(xiāng)的思念？（下面學生齊笑）這種說法牽強了些，菊花在古代象征著高潔，梅蘭竹菊是四君子嘛。趙勇：寫這首詩時，他已經(jīng)打算回故鄉(xiāng)了，所以不應(yīng)該寫“殘菊”，寫“殘菊”的話……師：事實上，他回不了故鄉(xiāng)。好的，請坐。再想想，“殘菊”意味著什么？破敗?！皡簿铡蹦?？茂盛。那這里說“兩開他日淚”，“兩開”是什么意思？開了兩了次了，這說明他在這里已經(jīng)待了兩年了。那“他日淚”又是什么意思？趙勇：應(yīng)該是他看到這里的菊花開得這么茂盛，就想到了故鄉(xiāng)的菊花也是開的茂盛的時候。如果是“殘菊”的話，那故鄉(xiāng)的菊也會開得很殘敗。（下面學生齊笑）
人教版高中語文必修3《杜甫詩三首 詠懷古跡》說課稿2篇
第三，說教學重點和難點。根據(jù)課程標準的具體要求、學生實際和社會實際以及教材的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)和教學體系，我認為本課的重難點是以下幾個方面。教學重點：1．理解王昭君的形象2．深入理解杜甫在詩中的情感教學難點：理解寓意，把握主旨。第四，說教法與學法。教法：根據(jù)課文特點和學生實際情況，以誦讀法（示范朗讀、學生齊讀）、問題探究法、點撥法、討論分析法進行教學。首先激發(fā)學生學習本文的興趣；然后引導(dǎo)學生反復(fù)吟哦誦讀，在讀的過程中質(zhì)疑、思考、品析、鑒賞；最后在教師適當?shù)狞c撥下，在集體的熱烈討論中，理解作者的感情，得到新的認識。（解說：使學生在教師的主導(dǎo)下圍繞中心議題發(fā)表各自的意見，相互交流，相互啟發(fā)，相互爭議，激發(fā)他們主動去獲取知識，培養(yǎng)健康情感。）
人教版高中語文必修1《黃河九曲：寫事要有點波瀾》說課稿
二、說學生本屆高一學生經(jīng)過了三年初中課改，在心理上，他們渴望表現(xiàn)的欲望和自主探究的欲望比較強烈，對有興趣的知識表現(xiàn)出高度地熱情，并具有一定的團結(jié)協(xié)作能力，但還是應(yīng)該正視一個并不樂觀的現(xiàn)實——在寫作方面，學生知識還停留在簡單的記敘及表達方式綜合運用上，至于巧妙構(gòu)思、謀篇布局很是空白。即便已經(jīng)經(jīng)過高中一個學期的學習，但還是有大部分學生依然基礎(chǔ)較為薄弱，甚至出現(xiàn)不知從何下筆的現(xiàn)象。三、說教法與學法“老師搭臺，學生唱戲”１、教法：本課將安排兩課時（一課時學習一課時練筆），采用 PPT 多媒體課件教學，嘗試用角色扮演法、圖片展示法和多媒體教學等方法，教學中應(yīng)該重視學生的參與性和探究性。２、學法：學生應(yīng)該充分利用多角度創(chuàng)設(shè)的學習情境來激發(fā)自身學習的興趣和熱情，分組討論，小組互助等形式讓學生積極自主參與、進行問題探究學習。理論依據(jù)：建構(gòu)主義理論“學生是學習的中心”的闡釋，教師應(yīng)該做學生主動建構(gòu)意義的幫助者、促進者。
人教版新課標高中物理必修2能量守恒定律與能源說課稿3篇
（3）內(nèi)陸和中西部城鎮(zhèn)主要以煤和火電為主；廣大農(nóng)村和邊遠地區(qū)大多正從使用農(nóng)作物秸稈等生物能源。（4）人均能源資源不足。我國是世界第三大能源生產(chǎn)國和第二大能源消費國，而我國能源短缺，特別是油氣資源短缺已成為制約我國經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的重要因素。相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)——煤炭、石油和天然氣的人均資源占有量只有95t，世界平均值為209t，約是世界人均值的1/2；我國人均石油可采儲量3t，世界平均值為28t，約為世界平均值的1/10。我國人均能源消費量不足1.2噸標準煤，居世界89位，不足世界人均能源消費水平的一半，僅占發(fā)達國家的1/5～1/10。其中人均消費650kg標準煤，是世界平均額的95%；人均消費石油相當145kg標準煤，為世界平均數(shù)的16.8%；人均消費天然氣相當17.7kg標準煤，為世界平均數(shù)的3.9%；人均消費電力501.5kWh，為世界平均水平的25%。（5）是能源消費結(jié)構(gòu)不合理，突出存在著一低兩高：即電能消費比例低，非商品生物能源消費量高，一次性商品能源消費中原煤消費比重高。原煤消費達到75%，遠高于26.2%的世界平均水平。
人教版新課標高中物理必修2驗證機械能守恒定律說課稿
一、 教材分析與學情分析教材分析人民教育出版社普通高中課程標準實驗教科書必修2第七章第九節(jié)。本節(jié)內(nèi)容安排在學習機械能守恒定律之后的目的，是為了使學生在理論上對機械能守恒定律有所了解的基礎(chǔ)上，通過實驗測量及對實驗數(shù)據(jù)的分析處理，對機械能守恒定律及條件有深刻的認識。學情分析知識層面：學生已經(jīng)掌握了動能、重力勢能等概念以及動能定理、機械能守恒定律等定理、定律；知道功是能量轉(zhuǎn)換的量度以及機械能守恒的條件。能力層面：學生已具備一定的實驗操作技能，會用打點計時器以及直尺等實驗儀器。具備一定的數(shù)據(jù)處理能力。二、教學目標與重點、難點教學目標知識與技能：1、會用打點計時器打下的紙帶計算物體運動的速度。2、掌握驗證機械能守恒定律的實驗原理。
人教版新課標高中物理必修2追尋守恒量—能量說課稿2篇
［小結(jié)］師：下面同學們概括總結(jié)本節(jié)所學的內(nèi)容。請一個同學到黑板上總結(jié)，其他同學在筆記本上總結(jié)，然后請同學評價黑板上的小結(jié)內(nèi)容。 （學生認真總結(jié)概括本節(jié)內(nèi)容，并把自己這節(jié)課的體會寫下來、比較黑板上的小結(jié)和自己的小結(jié)，看誰的更好，好在什么地方。） 生：本節(jié)課我們通過伽利略理想斜面實驗，分析得出了能量以及動能和勢能的概念，從能量的相互轉(zhuǎn)化角度認識到，在動能和勢能的相互轉(zhuǎn)化過程中，能的總量保持不變，即能量是守恒的。通過這節(jié)課的學習，使我們建立起了守恒的思想。 點評：總結(jié)課堂內(nèi)容，培養(yǎng)學生概括總結(jié)能力。 教師要放開，讓學生自己總結(jié)所學內(nèi)容，允許內(nèi)容的順序不同，從而構(gòu)建他們自己的知識框架。［布置作業(yè)］課后討論 P3“問題與練習”中的問題。［課外訓(xùn)練］以豎直上拋的小球為例說明小球的勢能和動能的轉(zhuǎn)化情況。在這個例子中是否存在著能的總量保持不變？
人教版高中歷史必修2殖民擴張與世界市場的拓展教案
●活動與探究從葡萄牙、西班牙、荷蘭的興衰歷程，從英國的強盛歷程，我們從中可獲得什么啟示？啟示：積極發(fā)展本國的工商業(yè)；實現(xiàn)制度創(chuàng)新；抓住機遇，及時更新觀念；建立能保障自身經(jīng)濟順利發(fā)展的國防力量，尤其是海軍力量；積極發(fā)展海外貿(mào)易，實行對外開放……★本課小結(jié)16世紀后期荷蘭積極向海外殖民擴張，在17世紀建立了世界范圍內(nèi)的殖民帝國；17世紀開始，英國也積極向海外殖民擴張，并與荷蘭、法國進行了激烈的爭奪，到18世紀中期，英國成為世界上最大的殖民國家，最終確立了世界殖民霸權(quán)；新航路開辟后，伴隨著殖民擴張，人類的商業(yè)活動開始在全球范圍內(nèi)開展，人類的經(jīng)濟活動由于世界市場的出現(xiàn)而第一次被廣泛地聯(lián)系在一起，而西歐國家對殖民地財富、資源、勞動力的暴力掠奪，是歐洲發(fā)展和興旺的重要條件，也是亞、非、拉美災(zāi)難的根源。
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 1 Cultural Heritage-Discovering Useful Structure教案二
This theme of the part is “ Describe people or things in greater detail”. Students have learned the grammar(restrictive relative clauses) in Book 1, and further review and consolidate its structure “prep+relative pronouns(which/whom)” and the relative adverbs(when, where and why), besides students should understand its form, meaning and functions. In this section, students should be able to express the grammar correctly in daily communication and in the writing. 1. Review the basic usages of relative pronouns and adverbs of attributive clauses . 2. Learn to use some special cases about restrictive relative clauses.3. Learn to write sentences with restrictive relative clauses flexibly according to the context.1. Review the basic usages of relative pronouns and adverbs of attributive clauses .2. Learn to use some special cases about restrictive relative clauses.3. Learn tow rite sentences with restrictive relative clauses flexibly according to the context.Step 1. Observe the following sentences, and mark the relative pronouns and the adverbs. 1. After listening to the scientists who had studied the problems, and citizens who lived near the dam, the government turned to the United Nations for help.2. Temples and other cultural sites were taken down piece by piece, and then moved and put back together again in a place where they were safe from the water.Step 2 PracticePlease complete these sentences with relative pronouns and relative adverbs and answer the following questions.Questions: 1. What is the head noun ?2. What relative words should be used ?3. What elements do they act in these sentences ?
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 2 Wildlife Protection-Reading for Writing教案二
This lesson aims at making a poster about protecting wildlife after reading some posters. During reading students are guided to understand the content and try to summarize the posters with one sentence. Then students are guided to try to make a poster about protecting wildlife.1. Read the two posters and try to understand the summary sentences.2. Look at the two posters and try to understand what emotions they express.3. Try to summarize the features of posters4. Try to make a poster about wildlife.1. Look at the two posters and try to understand what emotions they express.2. Try to summarize the features of posters3. Try to make a poster about wildlife.Step 1 Lead inLook at the the posters on the textbook and ask:Which emotions do the posters communicate ?Step 2 Read the poster and answer the questions.1. What do you think of the animals in the poster on the left ?I think it is frightening and ugly.2. Why do we should protect the ugly animals ?All species--the good, the bad, and the ugly-- should be treated equally.The world needs all kinds--without variety, our planet cannot survive.3. Why are billions of trees being cut down every year ?To make paper for humans.4. What result will be lead to after the trees are cut down ?A lost of animal homes are being destroyed./The habitat of wildlife is being destroyed.Step 3 Find the feature of posters1. What does each poster use to stir up emotions ?On the left, it makes us a little frightened and it looks a little ugly, but it can activate our curiosity--What is it? And What is wrong with it?On the right, it makes us feel a little sad and want to protect them.
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 1 Cultural Heritage-Reading and Thinking教案二
1. This section focuses on "Understanding how a problem was solved”, which is aimed to guide students to analyze and discuss the challenges and problems faced by cultural heritage protection during the construction of Aswan Dam, as well as the solutions. On the basis of understanding, students should pay attention to the key role of international cooperation in solving problems, and attach importance to the balance and coordination between cultural heritage protection and social and economic development. Students are encouraged to face challenges actively, be good at cooperation, and make continuous efforts to find reasonable ways and means to solve problems.2. Enable students to understand the main information and text structure of the reading text;3. Motivate students to use the reading strategy "make a timeline" according to the appropriate text genre;4. Enable students to understand how a problem was solved;5. Enable students to understand the value of protecting cultural heritage by teamwork and global community;1. Guide students to pay attention to reading strategies, such as prediction, self-questioning and scanning.2. Help students sort out the topic language about protecting cultural relics and understand the narrative characteristics of "time-event" in illustrative style3. Lead students to understand the value of protecting cultural heritage by teamwork and global community;
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 2 Wildlife Protection-Discovering Useful Structure教案二
2．表示現(xiàn)階段正在進行的被動動作(該動作在說話的瞬間未必正在進行)。Many interesting experiments are being carried out these days.(說話時，并不一定正在進行)3．表示一種經(jīng)常性的被動行為，常和always，constantly 等表示頻度的副詞連用，這種用法常常帶有贊揚或厭惡的感情色彩。He is always being praised by the leader.4．表示按計劃或安排主語將要承受謂語動詞所表示的動作(僅限于少數(shù)及物動詞)。A party is being held tonight.Step 4 Special cases1.像take care of, look after, talk about, think of等動詞與介詞構(gòu)成的短語用于現(xiàn)在進行時的被動語態(tài)時, 其中的介詞不可省略。The ways to stop illegally hunting are being talked about. 2．可與部分情態(tài)動詞連用，表示對正在發(fā)生的事情的推測。She may be being punished by her mother.3．有時可表示按計劃或安排將要進行的一個被動動作。A celebration is being held this weekend for his success.4．某些表示“狀態(tài)、心理活動、存在”等的動詞，如have，want，need，love，一般不用現(xiàn)在進行時的被動語態(tài)，而常用一般現(xiàn)在時的被動語態(tài)。With the population increasing，more land is needed.5．“be＋under/in＋n.”可表示現(xiàn)在進行時的被動意義。My computer is under repair.＝My computer is being repaired.
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 2 Wildlife Protection-Reading and Thinking教案二
The theme of this unit is human and nature, focusing on the theme of wildlife protection. Nature is a complex ecosystem, in which there are delicate balance between animals and plants. Because of the role of the food chain, the extinction of one species will produce influence, causing a series of chain reaction. Large scale extinction of species will have a serious and even irreversible impact on the ecosystem, resulting in immeasurable losses. Therefore, it is of great significance to protect wild species. To protect wild species is to protect human beings themselves. The motto of this unit is "when the buying stops, the killing can too,” which is a public service advertising slogan to protect wildlife. It tells people that every rhinoceros horn, every fur, every bowl of shark fin soup, every Ivory product, and every tiger bone product, etc. consumed by human beings, are innocent wild animals slaughtered behind them. The mission of wild aid is to ban illegal trade in endangered wildlife and mitigate climate change. It aims to educate the public to reduce the consumption demand for endangered wildlife products through public publicity and improve the awareness of environmental protection.1. Improve the awareness of wildlife protection by acquiring the knowledge of wildlife protection.2. Focus on environmental protection and protection of all lives.3. Analysis of the living environment of wild animals with appropriate thinking mode.4. Skillfully use the vocabulary and grammar knowledge of this unit to cultivate self-study ability according to the unit content5. Develop cooperative learning ability through discussion and other ways1. Enable the Ss to talk about the current situation of wild animals.2. Guide the Ss to summarize the main idea of each paragraph as well as the main idea of the text.
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 3 The Internet-Discovering Useful Structure教案二
This teaching period mainly deals with grammar “The Present Perfect Passive Voice.” To begin with, teachers should lead students to revise what they have learned about the Present Perfect Passive Voice. And then, teachers move on to stress more special cases concerning this grammar。This period carries considerable significance to the cultivation of students’ writing competence and lays a solid foundation for the basic appreciation of language beauty. The teacher is expected to enable students to master this period thoroughly and consolidate the knowledge by doing some exercises. 1. Guide students to review the basic usages of the Present Perfect Passive Voice2. Lead students to learn to use some special cases concerning the Present Perfect Passive Voice flexibly.2. Enable students to use the basic phrases structures flexibly.3. Strengthen students’ great interest in grammar learning.1. Help students to appreciate the function of the Present Perfect Passive Voice in a sentence2. Instruct students to write essays using the proper the Present Perfect Passive Voice.觀察下列句子特點，總結(jié)共同點。1．(教材P28)Much has been written about the wonders of the World Wide Web．2．(教材P28)But the Internet has done much more for people than simply make life more convenient．3．(教材P28)Many people have been helped by the club．4．(教材P28)She no longer feels lonely, and her company has become quite successful．5．(教材P32)Today I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times—how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences on the Internet?
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 3 The Internet-Listening &Speaking＆Talking教案二
From the pictures in the text and the title--- choose the best app, we can know that this part is about how to save money by using apps.Step 2 While-listening1. Laura and Xiao Bo are talking about apps. Listen to their conversation and find out what apps they want.Xiao Bo is looking for a(n) exercise app to help him get in shape.Laura would like an app for getting rich and another that will make her grades better.2. Listen again. Are the sentences true T or false F?1). Both of Xiao Bo's apps keep track of the steps he takes._____2). Xiao Bo's second app can help him make a fitness plan._____3). Laura needs an app that will help her get discounts.______4). Laura needs an app that will add money to her bank account._______F T F T3. Listen once more and tick the sentence you hear. Underline the words used to express predictions, guesses, and beliefs.Predictions, Guesses, and Beliefs________It might help me walk more.________My guess is that it wouldn't work.________I imagine this app would help me get fit faster________I suppose that would be good.________I guess you could save a little with this app.________I suppose there would be some problems, too.________I believe this app could help me get thinner.
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 3 The Internet-Reading and Thinking教案二
Q5：What's Jan's next goal?Her next goal is to start a charity website to raise money for children in poor countries.Q6：What can we learn from her experiences?We learn that when we go through tough times, we can find help and support from other people online. We learn that we can feel less lonelyStep 5: While reading---rethinkingQ1: What is Jan’s attitude to the Internet ?Thankful/Grateful, because it has changed her and her life.Q2: What writing skills is used in the article ?Examples(Jan’s example, the 59-year-old man’s and the 61-year-old woman’s example)Q3: Can you get the main idea of the article ?The Internet has changed Jan’s life/Jan’s life has been changed by the Internet.Step 6 Post reading---Retell the storyMuch has been written about the wonders of the World Wide Web. There are countless articles (1)telling(tell) us how the Internet has made our lives more convenient. But the Internet has done a lot (2)more(much) for people than simply make life more convenient. People’s lives (3) have been changed(change) by online communities and social networks so far. Take Jan for example, who developed a serious illness that made her (4)stuck(stick) at home with only her computer to keep (5)her(she) company. She joined an online group (6)where she could share problems, support and advice with others. She considered the ability to remove the distance between people as one of the greatest (7)benefits(benefit). She was so inspired (8)that she started an IT club in which many people have been helped. She has started to learn more about how to use the Internet to make society better. Her next goal is to start a charity website to raise money (9)for children in poor countries. Jan’s life has been (10)greatly(great) improved by the Internet.
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 3 The Internet-Reading for Writing教案二
8. However, the more polite you are, the less likely it is you will be attacked. 然而, 你越有禮貌, 你被攻擊的可能性就越小。 Step 8 Writing---the articleHow to stay safe in the online chat roomToday I thought I’d blog about a question that has been asked many times--- how do you stay safe online and avoid bad experiences in the online chat room ? I’m not an expert, but many years as a blogger have taught me a thing or two.First of all, there’s the golden rule of the Internet: keep out of what makes you uneasy. Don’t post comments or click on anything. Second, protect your privacy. Don’t give out too much private information like your address, phone numbers, the ID numbers, etc. Third, be polite. If you are polite to others on the Internet, you won’t be attacked in normal situation. Finally, don’t believe in others easily and never meet someone you met online alone. It is very dangerous.Have you had any bad experiences online, or do you have some good advice for staying safe? Post your comments below!Step 9 Pair workExchange drafts with a partner. Use this checklist to help your partner revise his/her draft.1. Does the writer tell the reader what he/she know about the topic ?2. Are the tips and suggestions well organised ?3. Has the writer defined the new words ?4. Does the author include examples, comparison, or explanations ?5. Does the writer end by asking readers to leave comments and/or suggestions ?6. Can you find any grammar or spelling mistakes.Step 6 HomeworkPut up your revised draft in the classroom or read it to your class.
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 5 Music-Discovering Useful Structures教案二
4. When he got absorbed in his world of music, he felt as if he could “see” the beauty of the world around him, like he had in his previous life.P·P as adverbial: _________________________________________________________________.Function: _______________________________________________________________________.Step 5 Solid Complete the passage with the words in brackets in their correct forms.Well known as a successful band, the Impact members show quite a few striking qualities. They never ever give up. When _____________(question) by the media, they are not _____________(discourage) and practise even harder. They are improving themselves by attending several master training class. They are united. _____________(fill with) team spirit, they act as a whole, always aiming for glory. Step 6 Difference and similarity from -ingObserve the following examples.1. He went out, shutting the door behind him.=He went out, ________________________________________________________.2. Not knowing what to do, he went to his parents for help.=__________________________________________, he went to his parents for help.Similarity: _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Difference : _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.Step Practice1. ________ in a hurry, this article was not so good. 因為寫得匆忙, 這篇文章不是很好。2. ________ carefully, he found something he hadn’t known before. 他仔細讀書時, 發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些從前不知道的東西。3. ________ why he did it, the monitor said it was his duty. 當被問及他為什么要這么做時, 班長說這是他的職責
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 5 Music-Reading and Thinking教案二
1. Get basic information about Eric; read deeply to understand the history and development of the virtual choir.2. Understand what the function of the virtual choir is and how to make a virtual choir.3. Understand the meaning of some languages in the context of the text through question guidance, such as “Many people do not have close friends or contacts who have the same interest in music.” and so on.Step 1 Leading-in1. Answer the following questions.Q1：Do you know the Apps like Tik Tok and Quick Hand?Q2: Do you want to make a Tik Tok video or a Quick Hand video?2. Play a Tik Tok video Step 2: Understanding the title Q1：What does the title mean ?Q2: Is the article a narration or exposition? Why? Q3: Can you change the title ? If you can, what is the title?Step 3: Scanning the whole text and getting the basic information1. Answer the following questions.Q1：Who came up with the idea for a virtual choir?Q2: Where did Eric studied the musical composition?Q3: What is his song?2. Find the main idea of each paragraph3. Deal with some new words.Step 4: Reading carefully to get detailed informationPara 1 How to make a virtual choir1. PreparationA. tools: a virtual camera; an Internet connectionB. hero/heroin: friends or some individuals who have the same interests2. Process
新人教版高中英語必修2Unit 5 Music-Reading for Writing教案二
The Internet celebrity Gao Yifeng. Years ago, he owned 5 companies and the staffs over 1,000, but during the economy crisis, he became nothing but debt. He was so worried that his hair became white overnight. There was a time when he wanted to killed himself. But after listening to the song Start Over by Liu Huan, he decided to cheer himself up. He started a steamed bun shop and gradually became a national chain shops. Now he became successful again.Walter Haddon said, “Music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” Music contains such a pleasant and inspiring force. Music gave him courage and bravery. When he listened to the song, it made his spirit fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave him strength and brought him relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. I hope none of us have to go through the same kind of suffering that he did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help us in the same way that it helped him. I hope we all will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of our life. Thank you for your listening !5.Revise your writing each other.Does he/she explain how music has changed his/her/someone else’s life?Are some of the rhetorical devices included and used properly ?Does he/she talk about how music makes him/her/someone feel?Is the first word in each sentences capitalised?Does he/she use correct punctuation ?