二、整體感知1.導(dǎo)入新課同學(xué)們《細(xì)胞生命的禮贊》是一個(gè)醫(yī)學(xué)家、生物學(xué)家關(guān)于生命、人生、社會(huì)乃至宇宙的思考。思想博大而深邃,信息龐雜而新奇,批評(píng)文明,嘲弄愚見,開闊眼界、激發(fā)思索。而其文筆又少見的優(yōu)美、清新、幽默、含蓄,無(wú)愧當(dāng)今科學(xué)散文中的大家手筆。無(wú)怪乎自1974年出版后,立即引起美國(guó)讀書界和評(píng)論界的巨大反響和熱烈歡呼,獲得當(dāng)年美國(guó)國(guó)家圖書獎(jiǎng),此后18年來(lái)由好幾家出版社印了二十多版,至今暢行不衰!年過(guò)花甲的劉易斯·托馬斯的名字因這一本小書而家喻戶曉,有口皆碑,以至于在他接連拋出后兩本書時(shí),書商都不用再作廣告,只喊聲"《細(xì)胞生命的禮贊》一書作者劉易斯·托馬斯的新著"就夠了。今天我們就來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)選自這部書的精彩章節(jié)《作為生物的社會(huì)》(板書課題)。
(2)個(gè)性化的對(duì)話描寫。在三個(gè)事件的描述中,大段對(duì)話占了很大篇幅,有的情節(jié)干脆由對(duì)話來(lái)表達(dá),許多對(duì)話形象地表現(xiàn)了人物的思想和性格,使我們?nèi)缏勂渎?,如見其人。先說(shuō)藺相如,他在秦廷上的慷慨陳詞,有時(shí)語(yǔ)氣平和,謙恭有禮,使對(duì)方放松警惕;有時(shí)直言斥責(zé),有理有據(jù),雄辯折人;有時(shí)堅(jiān)決表態(tài),分析利害,暗示對(duì)方;有時(shí)怒不可遏,咄咄逼人??傊~鋒犀利,剛?cè)峒媸州p重恰當(dāng),充分表現(xiàn)了他是一個(gè)熱愛祖國(guó)、不畏強(qiáng)暴、有智有勇,長(zhǎng)于辭令的外交家。再說(shuō)廉頗,在將相交歡事件中,他先前說(shuō)的這一番話,表現(xiàn)了他的自高自大和心胸狹窄,非常符合武將廉頗的性格特點(diǎn),后來(lái)寫他知過(guò)改過(guò),負(fù)荊請(qǐng)罪時(shí)說(shuō):“鄙賤之人,不知將軍寬之至此也!”語(yǔ)言不多,坦誠(chéng)直率,可敬可愛。(解說(shuō):對(duì)話描寫的分析,宜以學(xué)生為主,教師必要時(shí)適當(dāng)點(diǎn)撥。)
三.分析第三部分:1.夫妻贈(zèng)詩(shī)表現(xiàn)了二人怎樣的心情?提示:崔鶯鶯告誡張生切勿忘記她;張生則發(fā)誓永無(wú)別戀。這充分展示了二人深厚的情誼。2.怎樣理解[耍孩兒]中的典故?提示:“紅淚”借王嘉《拾遺記》的典故,司馬青衫借白居易《琵琶行》的典故,表現(xiàn)主人公因離別而生的傷心之情?!安畡陲w去燕西歸”則用牛郎織女的典故表現(xiàn)兩人纏綿難舍的心情。3.[五煞]表明了主人公怎樣的心情?提示:對(duì)張生的生活的關(guān)心,千叮萬(wàn)囑,真情自現(xiàn)。4.[二煞]中所用是幾個(gè)典故?這些典故的作用是什么?提示:三個(gè)典故,見課本。其作用是表明崔鶯鶯對(duì)張生的擔(dān)心。四.分析第四部分:1.[一煞]中再寫環(huán)境,其作用是否與先前所寫相同?提示:稍有不同,這里是表現(xiàn)崔鶯鶯目送張生遠(yuǎn)去時(shí)那種凄愴悲苦的眷戀之情。以所見之物,寫內(nèi)心深藏之情。2.[收尾]中寫‘殘照’其含義是什么?提示:以“殘照”表現(xiàn)內(nèi)心的悵惘失意之情。
【教學(xué)過(guò)程】導(dǎo)入:如果說(shuō)唐詩(shī)是中國(guó)文學(xué)史中的一朵奇葩,那孟浩然則是點(diǎn)綴其上的一滴晶瑩露珠,其充滿魅力與特色的詩(shī)風(fēng)在盛唐獨(dú)樹一幟,也為其在人才濟(jì)濟(jì)的詩(shī)史上刻下了永恒的印記。同學(xué)們能否先回憶一下,我們學(xué)過(guò)的孟浩然的詩(shī)歌有哪些?(《春曉》、《宿建德江》、《望洞庭湖贈(zèng)張丞相》、《過(guò)故人莊》。)我們常說(shuō)"中國(guó)古詩(shī)寫胸襟,是人格美的自然流露",那么孟詩(shī)在語(yǔ)言和思想情感上留給你怎樣的印象和感受?整體感知:本文作者聞一多先生也是一位詩(shī)人,所謂"英雄惜英雄",相同的志向與情趣使聞一多似乎帶著我們?cè)谂c孟浩然進(jìn)行了一場(chǎng)心靈的對(duì)話。那么同學(xué)們?cè)诳焖匍喿x文章之后,能否先找出作者是選擇了一個(gè)怎樣的角度對(duì)孟浩然評(píng)價(jià)的?(詩(shī)如其人,人如其詩(shī)。)
(2)怎樣理解本文的一些相關(guān)論述?【明確】這是一篇科學(xué)講演,涉及較為復(fù)雜的背景知識(shí)。這些知識(shí)和講演的主題是密切相關(guān)的,如果不作必要的交待,講演的內(nèi)容就會(huì)顯得抽象和單薄。如,談到天氣預(yù)報(bào)、大腦工作原理都具有混沌性質(zhì),來(lái)反襯宇宙在大尺度上是"平滑而非混沌"的;如,談到恒星的死亡(歸宿)引出黑洞,為宇宙中暗物質(zhì)的存在尋找理論支持;如,談到現(xiàn)存宇宙對(duì)初始密度的極度敏感,引出了"人擇原理"等等。這些相關(guān)的論述,或從對(duì)立面凸顯觀點(diǎn),或從縱深面強(qiáng)化觀點(diǎn),使論證豐富多彩。(3)這篇講演在語(yǔ)言上具有怎樣的特點(diǎn)?【明確】講演是面對(duì)面的交流,這種交流又是單向度的,如果不注意講演的語(yǔ)言藝術(shù),就達(dá)不到最佳的表達(dá)效果。這篇講演,除了推理嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)外,語(yǔ)言幽默也是其突出的特點(diǎn)。幽默的語(yǔ)言創(chuàng)造出一種輕松愉快的氣氛,更具有親和力,使所闡發(fā)的事理更容易為聽眾接受。
(一)上片:描寫杭州的自然風(fēng)光和都市的繁華“東南形勝,三吳都會(huì),錢塘自古繁華”,“東南形勝”,是從地理?xiàng)l件、自然條件著筆寫的。杭州地處東南,地理位置很重要,風(fēng)景很優(yōu)美,故曰:“形勝”?!叭齾嵌紩?huì)”,是從社會(huì)條件著筆寫的。它是三吳地區(qū)的重要都市,那里人眾薈萃,財(cái)貨聚集,故曰:“都會(huì)”。“錢塘自古繁華”,這一句是對(duì)前兩句的總結(jié),因?yàn)楹贾菥哂羞@些特殊條件,所以“自古繁華”。下面就對(duì)“形勝”、“都會(huì)”和“自古繁華”進(jìn)行鋪敘?!盁熈嫎?,風(fēng)簾翠幕,參差十萬(wàn)人家”是對(duì)“三吳都會(huì)”的展開描寫。“云樹繞堤沙。怒濤卷霜雪,天塹無(wú)涯”是對(duì)“東南形勝”的展開描寫。這里選擇了錢塘江岸和江潮兩種景物來(lái)寫?!笆辛兄榄^,戶盈羅綺,競(jìng)豪奢”是對(duì)“錢塘自古繁華”的展開描寫。描寫了兩個(gè)方面:一是商業(yè)貿(mào)易情況——“市列珠璣”,只用市場(chǎng)上的珍寶,代表了商業(yè)的豐富、商業(yè)的繁榮;二是衣著情況——“戶盈羅綺”,家家披羅著錦?!案?jìng)豪奢”,又總括杭州的種種繁華景象。
【合作探究】分析說(shuō)明巴黎公社是無(wú)產(chǎn)階級(jí)建立政權(quán)的第一次偉大嘗試(1)從巴黎公社產(chǎn)生的情況來(lái)看,它是在巴黎無(wú)產(chǎn)階級(jí)通過(guò)暴力革命,推翻反動(dòng)的資產(chǎn)階級(jí)政府的基礎(chǔ)上,通過(guò)普選建立起的新型國(guó)家。(2)從巴黎公社的政權(quán)的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人和階級(jí)成分來(lái)看,通過(guò)民主選舉產(chǎn)生的公社委員會(huì)的成員,大多數(shù)是工人,其中有些委員會(huì)雖然從事不同的職業(yè),有的不是馬克思主義者,但公認(rèn)是公認(rèn)階級(jí)的代表。(3)從巴黎公社實(shí)行的政策措施來(lái)看,這是最能說(shuō)明公社性質(zhì)的一個(gè)方面。公社在建設(shè)新政權(quán)的同時(shí),打碎資產(chǎn)階級(jí)國(guó)家機(jī)器,做出建立無(wú)產(chǎn)階級(jí)專政國(guó)家機(jī)器的偉大嘗試。公社的社會(huì)經(jīng)濟(jì)措施和其他民主措施,都在一定程度上體現(xiàn)了它的無(wú)產(chǎn)階級(jí)性質(zhì)。沒(méi)收逃亡資本家的工廠,觸及資本主義私有制,具有明顯的無(wú)產(chǎn)階級(jí)性質(zhì)。
1.知識(shí)與能力:(1)通過(guò)引導(dǎo)學(xué)生分析鑒賞19世紀(jì)以來(lái)有代表性的音樂(lè)與美術(shù)作品,了解這些作品產(chǎn)生的時(shí)代背景及其藝術(shù)價(jià)值。(2)通過(guò)分析世界藝術(shù)產(chǎn)生的歷史背景,可以幫助學(xué)生正確認(rèn)識(shí)人類文化的多樣性、時(shí)代性和民族性,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生結(jié)合歷史背景分析歷史問(wèn)題的能力。(3)通過(guò)對(duì)19世紀(jì)以來(lái)的音樂(lè)與美術(shù)史實(shí)的分析、綜合、比較、歸納、概括等認(rèn)知活動(dòng),培養(yǎng)歷史思維和解決問(wèn)題的能力。2.過(guò)程與方法:(1)讓學(xué)生在搜集資料、自主探究、合作交流過(guò)程中,發(fā)展學(xué)生在社會(huì)中學(xué)習(xí)、網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)習(xí)、終身學(xué)習(xí)的能力。(2)通過(guò)上網(wǎng)了解藝術(shù)大師及分析鑒賞其各類美術(shù)、音樂(lè)作品,感受其藝術(shù)價(jià)值。 (3)思維方法:學(xué)會(huì)知識(shí)遷移,在從感知?dú)v史到不斷積累歷史知識(shí),進(jìn)而不斷加深對(duì)歷史和現(xiàn)實(shí)的理解過(guò)程中,提高分析理解問(wèn)題能力。學(xué)會(huì)善于從不同的角度發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題,積極探索解決問(wèn)題的方法,從而做到論從史出、史論結(jié)合。
材料五航路開辟后,東方香料輸入歐洲的總量較中古之時(shí)猛增30倍,而胡椒、丁香等在印度購(gòu)入和在英國(guó)賣出的差價(jià)亦高達(dá)10至29倍,其他貨物的獲利同樣驚人。這一時(shí)期,新的商品不斷涌現(xiàn),特別值得注意的是美洲的特產(chǎn)——玉米、馬鈴薯、煙草、可可等——被傳播到歐亞大陸。這時(shí),世界性的對(duì)外貿(mào)易主要通過(guò)大西洋,地中海與意大利皆告衰落,而沿大洋的英、荷等漸居中心。到17世紀(jì)時(shí),英國(guó)的倫敦與荷蘭的阿姆斯特丹成為世界貿(mào)易中心。問(wèn)題4:材料五表明,新航路開辟后對(duì)世界貿(mào)易產(chǎn)生了哪些重大影響?答案4:結(jié)束了世界相對(duì)孤立狀態(tài);各地文明開始會(huì)合交流,日益連成一個(gè)整體;歐洲商人直接同世界各地建立商業(yè)聯(lián)系;促進(jìn)不同國(guó)家和貿(mào)易的發(fā)展,促進(jìn)世界市場(chǎng)雛形開始出現(xiàn)。
教師總結(jié):社會(huì)主義市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)是使市場(chǎng)在國(guó)家宏觀調(diào)控下起基礎(chǔ)性配置作用的經(jīng)濟(jì),充分發(fā)揮市場(chǎng)基礎(chǔ)性調(diào)節(jié)作用,就必須主要靠經(jīng)濟(jì)手段、法律手段,而不是行政手段。(三)課堂總結(jié)、點(diǎn)評(píng)這節(jié)課我們重點(diǎn)學(xué)習(xí)了社會(huì)主義市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)的有關(guān)知識(shí),知道了社會(huì)主義市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)的基本特征,以及國(guó)家宏觀調(diào)控的含義、目標(biāo)和主要手段。這對(duì)于我們?cè)诮?jīng)濟(jì)生活中正確地認(rèn)識(shí)我國(guó)市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)的性質(zhì)和作用,理解國(guó)家宏觀調(diào)控的措施及意義,增強(qiáng)社會(huì)主義優(yōu)越感和民族自強(qiáng)意識(shí),自覺(jué)投身現(xiàn)代化建設(shè)等將有重大指導(dǎo)作用?!镎n余作業(yè) 討論:聯(lián)系經(jīng)濟(jì)生活中國(guó)家宏觀調(diào)控的實(shí)例,討論應(yīng)如何認(rèn)識(shí)和理解國(guó)家各種宏觀調(diào)控手段的綜合運(yùn)用,對(duì)國(guó)民經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的意義。★教學(xué)體會(huì) 本節(jié)內(nèi)容與學(xué)生生活實(shí)際聯(lián)系密切,在學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)該多引入日常生產(chǎn)、生活中常見的一些宏觀調(diào)控實(shí)例,讓學(xué)生去深刻理解、把握宏觀調(diào)控手段及其作用。
【教材分析】The topic of this unit is about teenage life, which belongs to the theme context of “humans and oneself”.As teenagers who shoulder the responsibility of “Chinese great dream”, they must fully know themselves, including their strengths, weaknesses and challenges etc. They are supposed to improve themselves continuously and readily study their subjects, and thus foster their strategies and confidence in lifelong studies.This period is entitled the freshmen challenges, which mainly concerns some big challenges for new students in Senior high school. In this period, a teacher should lead students to find out what their challenges are and guide them to figure out how to crack the challenges and better themselves. More importantly, a teacher should instruct students to absorb new language points and appreciate the language. Besides, a teacher must instruct students to acquire some skills concerning reading efficiently and inspire them to talk more about their new school life, especially their new problems and solutions both at school and in life.【教學(xué)目標(biāo)與核心素養(yǎng)】1. Enable students to acquire the basic usage of the new words and expressions concerning the freshmen challenges and learn to use them flexibly.2. Enable students to have a good understanding of the freshmen challenges in the new senior high school which is quite different from junior middle school.3. Develop students’ sense of cooperative learning and individual thinking capability. 4. Develop students’ different learning skills to solve different reading comprehensive problems.
Is there a clear purpose for the trip? :Does each paragraph have a clear main idea? Does the writer use the present continuous tense for future plans?Does the writer use commas, stops, and question marks correctly? Are all the words spelt correctly?Are all the proper nouns capitalized?Revise your draft according to your partner's comments.Step 5:The summary of how to write a travel plan.旅游計(jì)劃是一種常見的應(yīng)用文寫作。旅游可分為觀光游、文化游、美食游及探險(xiǎn)游等不同類型,因此旅游計(jì)劃也要根據(jù)不同的旅游目的進(jìn)行設(shè)計(jì)。常規(guī)的旅游計(jì)劃需要明確以下幾個(gè)方面的問(wèn)題:Travel planWhen will you leave for? Where is your the destination?How will you get there?What will you do there?How long will you there?Is there a clear purpose for the trip? 為了提升旅行計(jì)劃的層級(jí),還需注意以下幾個(gè)方面的問(wèn)題:1.每段是否有明確清晰的主題;2.用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)代替一般將來(lái)時(shí);3.用更高級(jí)的形容詞詞匯。例如:表達(dá)“好”時(shí),不要總用“nice”,我們還可以用“smart, clean, excellent, exciting, beautiful, wonderful, clever, famous, grand”等表達(dá)更具有指向性的詞匯;4.用更高級(jí)的動(dòng)詞詞匯。比如:我們可以用“seem stand, lie .get stay, remain, look . sound, become . keep, grow”等代替"be";
Listening and Speaking introduces the topic of “how to save endangered wildlife and help wildlife in their neighborhood.” Due to the continuous deterioration of the living environment, a large number of wild animals are always facing the threat of endangered or extinction. Listening and speaking period enables students to understand the fact and reason why wild species are disappearing from the earth at an amazing speed, and realize that human beings ought to enhance the awareness of protecting wild species as soon as possible.Listening and Talking introduces the theme of " how to help wildlife in Ss’ neighborhood.". Now there are many volunteers who spontaneously protect wild animals, carry out various activities according to local conditions, and contribute their own strength to local animal protection with practical actions. Middle school students are also enthusiastic participants. They organize activities in their spare time, and take this opportunity to make friends, broaden their horizons, cultivate team spirit and communication skills. This section describes a bird watching activity organized by several middle school students of Bird watching Club. It aims to stimulate students' interest, improve their understanding of bird watching activities, and use the language structure of “being used for; in order to, so as to, to, so that, in order that ” to express the purpose for communication and discussion.1. Guide students to understand the content of listening texts in terms of using visuals to predict content.2. Cultivate students' ability to guess the meaning of words in listening; discuss with their peers how to save endangered wildlife and help wildlife in their neighborhood.3. Instruct students to use functional sentences of the dialogue such as “I am concerned about…” “what do you know about the endangered animals in…" and so on to talk about one of the endangered animals.
This teaching period mainly deals with grammar: The past participle is used as attributive and objective complement.1. Guide students to review the basic usages of the past participle used as attributive and objective complement.2. Lead students to learn to use some special cases concerning the past participle used as attributive and objective complement flexibly.3. Strengthen students’ great interest in grammar learning.1. Help students to appreciate the function of the past participle used as attributive and objective complement.2. Instruct students to write essays using the past participle used as attributive and objective complement.Step1:溫故而知新。Analyze the underlined phrases and then sum up the common usages of the past participles.1.(教材P41)They had castles built(build) all around England, and made changes to the legal system.2.(教材P42)They use the same flag, known(know) as the Union Jack,...3.(教材P42)Judy and I had our car parked(park) in an underground car park near Trafalgar Square, where we could get our car battery charged(charge).Common points: f the past participle used as attributive and objective complement.Step 2:過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)時(shí)的意義1.及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ),在語(yǔ)態(tài)上表示被動(dòng);在時(shí)間上,常表示動(dòng)作已經(jīng)發(fā)生或完成,有時(shí)也不表示時(shí)間性。Our teacher watched us doing the experiment and gave us a satisfied smile at last.我們的老師看著我們做實(shí)驗(yàn),最后給了我們一個(gè)滿意的微笑。The plan put forward at the meeting will be carried out soon.會(huì)上提出的計(jì)劃將很快被執(zhí)行。2.不及物動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ),它不表示被動(dòng)意義,只強(qiáng)調(diào)動(dòng)作完成。Many little kids like gathering fallen leaves in the yard.
Step 1 Lead inThere are many interest of places in the UK. What do you know ?The Big Ben the London Tower the Thames RiverStep 2 Before reading---analyze the titleBeautiful Ireland and its traditionWe know that the article mainly tells about the beauty and traditions of Ireland. Step 3 While reading---Task 1Read the text and answer the following questions.Q1: What makes the Irish countryside exciting and inspiring?Its beauty and how it offers something for all the scenes.Q2: What are the best ways to experience some Irish traditions and cultures?By stopping by a village pub and relaxing with a drink and traditional meal while listening to music and watching dancingQ3: What is the meaning of “breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song ?”It means to not just smell but also breathe in the smell of fresh flowers early in the morning as the birds sing their first song of the new day.Q4: What are the best ways to experience Chinese traditions and customs ?By travelling to different places and using all your senses to experience everything and by interacting with local people.Step 4 While reading---Task 2Analyze the descriptive paragraph1. Identify and underline the paragraph’s introductory sentence and the ending sentence.Introductory sentence: Ireland’s beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.Ending sentence: And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.2. The paragraph talks about different senses in different places. Write the senses and places in the order that they appear.
The Internet celebrity Gao Yifeng. Years ago, he owned 5 companies and the staffs over 1,000, but during the economy crisis, he became nothing but debt. He was so worried that his hair became white overnight. There was a time when he wanted to killed himself. But after listening to the song Start Over by Liu Huan, he decided to cheer himself up. He started a steamed bun shop and gradually became a national chain shops. Now he became successful again.Walter Haddon said, “Music is the medicine of a troubled mind.” Music contains such a pleasant and inspiring force. Music gave him courage and bravery. When he listened to the song, it made his spirit fly like a kite in the wind. Music gave him strength and brought him relief. It was the rock I leant on to become strong and to get through those hard times. I hope none of us have to go through the same kind of suffering that he did. At the same time, we all go through various periods when we feel sad or alone. During those times, music can help us in the same way that it helped him. I hope we all will somehow begin to treasure music and make it a part of our life. Thank you for your listening !5.Revise your writing each other.Does he/she explain how music has changed his/her/someone else’s life?Are some of the rhetorical devices included and used properly ?Does he/she talk about how music makes him/her/someone feel?Is the first word in each sentences capitalised?Does he/she use correct punctuation ?
【教學(xué)重點(diǎn)】直線的點(diǎn)斜式方程、斜截式方程的確定.【教學(xué)難點(diǎn)】直線的點(diǎn)斜式方程、斜截式方程的確定.【教學(xué)過(guò)程】1、對(duì)特殊三角函數(shù)進(jìn)行鞏固復(fù)習(xí);表1 內(nèi)特殊三角函數(shù)值 不存在圖1 特殊三角形2、鞏固復(fù)習(xí)直線的傾斜角和斜率相關(guān)內(nèi)容;直線的傾斜角:,;直線的斜率: , ;設(shè)點(diǎn)為直線l上的任意兩點(diǎn),當(dāng)時(shí),
(“節(jié)馬”:1841年1月7日,英國(guó)侵略者義律進(jìn)攻虎門,沙田炮臺(tái)副將陳連升率眾浴血奮戰(zhàn),壯烈犧牲。其馬“神駿”守護(hù)主人遺體,不屈敵之羈絆,不食敵之草料,不畏敵之鞭打刀刺,終不就范?!白驽驯蕖保鹤驽眩瑬|晉名將,著名愛國(guó)將領(lǐng),曾率軍北伐,收復(fù)許多失地。此句大意為若要揚(yáng)眉吐氣,意氣風(fēng)發(fā),仍需祖逖的這種精神。)八、本文反映的就是香港回歸這一重大歷史事件本文是一篇新聞特寫。特寫性消息,也稱新聞速寫、新聞素描,要求用類似電影“特寫鏡頭”的手法來(lái)反映事實(shí),是作者深入新聞事件現(xiàn)場(chǎng),采寫制作的一種新聞價(jià)值高、現(xiàn)場(chǎng)感較強(qiáng)、篇幅短小精粹的消息文體。特寫性消息側(cè)重于“再現(xiàn)”,往往采用文學(xué)手法,集中、突出地描述某一重大事件的發(fā)生現(xiàn)場(chǎng),或某些重要和精彩的場(chǎng)面,生動(dòng)、形象地將所報(bào)道的事實(shí)再現(xiàn)在讀者面前。
巴金在十年浩劫中的大致經(jīng)歷:放棄包弟并沒(méi)有換得保全一家人,1968年8月,巴金被關(guān)進(jìn)牛棚改造,隨后經(jīng)受了大字報(bào)、掛牌游街等形式的批斗。1970年,到農(nóng)村改造,掏大糞、喂豬、背稻草、種地……1972年,妻子蕭珊在飽受精神折磨后患上癌癥,病逝。巴金的兒子在勞動(dòng)改造的過(guò)程中也飽受精神和肉體上的折磨,性格變得內(nèi)向抑郁,疾病纏身。此時(shí),巴金69歲。巴金曾在《病中》一文寫道:“當(dāng)姚文元拿著棒子的時(shí)候,我給關(guān)在牛棚里除了唯唯諾諾之外,敢于做過(guò)什么事情?十年間我不過(guò)是一條含著眼淚等人宰割的牛?!毙〗Y(jié):(幻燈片12)社會(huì)是病態(tài)的社會(huì),政治是高壓的政治,人性是扭曲的人性。十年文革,十年浩劫,給多少人留下了累累不可彌合的精神創(chuàng)傷。即使一條小狗,也可能擺脫不了“文革”無(wú)情的迫害,比如包弟,比如藝術(shù)家鄰居的小狗。
這兩章是對(duì)戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)場(chǎng)面的描寫。寫的是戰(zhàn)車、戰(zhàn)馬、象弭、魚服以及士兵的勞累奔波、饑渴難當(dāng),通過(guò)這些具體生動(dòng)的細(xì)節(jié)描寫來(lái)展現(xiàn)戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)生活的圖景。而沒(méi)有寫戰(zhàn)場(chǎng)上的刀光劍影、廝打拼殺,但戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)的殘酷已可想見。4“昔我往矣,楊柳依依。今我來(lái)思,雨雪霏霏”被視為情景交融的佳句。清人王夫之在論《詩(shī)經(jīng)·小雅·采薇》這兩句時(shí)說(shuō):“以樂(lè)景寫哀,以哀景寫樂(lè),一倍增其哀樂(lè)?!闭?wù)勀愕目捶?。一以往昔之虛襯眼前之實(shí),以出征之樂(lè)襯內(nèi)心之思親之悲痛;二“楊柳依依”與“雨雪霏霏”對(duì)比,突出不勝今昔之感;三大雪交加,饑渴難當(dāng),情境實(shí)悲,以哀景寫哀情。四、交流延伸1寫一首詩(shī)或一段文字表達(dá)你對(duì)“鄉(xiāng)愁”的新的體驗(yàn)。在全班交流。2課后搜集更多的表現(xiàn)鄉(xiāng)情的詩(shī)歌散文作品,將你最感動(dòng)的一篇拿到班上與同學(xué)分享感受。