Finally, after finishing the task above, the teacher is expected to instruct students to work in groups to finish the following project:Speaking ProjectWhat event or activity would you like to invite your friend to? Make a conversation with a partner.Ski Race: Zhangjiakou, a beautiful city in northern China, will host the Youth Ski Race in December.Track Meet: a great event for track –and –field lovers on 26 October.Gym Class: come and work out at a gym! You can make it.Part 2: Listening and Talking:The teacher is advised to talk with their new students about the related topic: Boys and girls , what do you think of sportsmanship? Let’s listen and find out:Play the listening and match each opinion with the right speaker. Who do you agree with? Why?Cao Jing _____________ Lily _____________ Max _____________A. An athlete should do his/her best to win.B. The girl should stop and help the other girl. Good sportsmanship is more important than wining!C. An athlete should think about honor and his/her fans if he/she is competing for his/her country.Listen again and circle the expressions that you hear in the conversation.
【教材分析】This teaching period mainly deals with the grammar: tag questions.This period carries a considerable significance to the cultivation of students’ spoken English. The teacher is expected to enable students to master this period thoroughly and consolidate the knowledge by doing some exercise of good quality.【教學(xué)目標(biāo)與核心素養(yǎng)】1. Get students to have a good understanding of the basic usages of tag questions.2. Enable students to use the basic phrases structures flexibly.3. Develop students’ speaking and cooperating abilities.4. Strengthen students’ great interest in grammar learning.【教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)】1. How to enable students to have a good understanding of the basic usages of tag questions.2. How to enable students to use the basic usages of tag questions flexibly.【教學(xué)過程】Step1: 語法自主探究一、基本組成方法1.肯定式陳述部分+否定附加疑問部分(前肯后否) You often play badminton, don’t you? 你經(jīng)常打羽毛球,是嗎?You are going to the gym with me, aren’t you?你要和我一起去健身房,是嗎?She’s been to shanghai before, hasn’t she? 她以前去過上海,是嗎?2.否定式陳述部分+肯定附加疑問部分(前否后肯) It isn't a beautiful flower, is it? 那不是美麗的花,是嗎?You didn't go skating yesterday, did you? 你昨天沒去滑冰,是嗎?They can’t finish it by Friday, can they?他們不能在星期五之前完成,是嗎?
二、說學(xué)情本課的教學(xué)對(duì)象為高二學(xué)生,他們思維活躍已具備一定歸納能力和分析、綜合能力,能夠自主地分析現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的一些文化行為,但看問題往往比較偏激、片面,缺乏良好的邏輯思維能力。所以,在文化創(chuàng)新的途徑上要對(duì)他們進(jìn)行指導(dǎo),以免走入誤區(qū)。三、教學(xué)目標(biāo)根據(jù)新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)、教材特點(diǎn)、學(xué)生的實(shí)際,我確定了如下教學(xué)目標(biāo):【知識(shí)與能力目標(biāo)】1.理解文化創(chuàng)新的根本途徑和兩個(gè)基本途徑;2.了解文化創(chuàng)新過程中需要堅(jiān)持正確方向,克服錯(cuò)誤傾向。
<Good morning> T:Look!今天我們班來了很多老師,我們一起跟老師打招呼吧! S:Goodmorning Miss! T:Follow mecry stop ! Follow me laugh stop ! Follow me eat stop ! Follow me stand up ! Follow me sit down !幼兒跟老師做 T:Children,look ,what’s this ? S:A T:Yes! Verygood!Follow me A A ae ae ae S:A A ae aeae T:Apple S:Apple T: A A ae aeae ant S: A A ae aeae ant T: A A ae aeae cat S: A A ae aeae cat T: A A ae aeae hat S: A A ae aeae hat
(三)作家介紹,寫作背景大家說“雨巷”這首詩寫得美不美?(美)剛才我也說了,這首詩是中國(guó)朦朧詩的百年經(jīng)典。那么對(duì)于這么出名的詩,有誰能夠向我們介紹一下它的作者跟寫作背景呢?(明確:戴望舒,原名戴朝實(shí)又名戴夢(mèng)鷗,1905年出生于杭州。1929年4月出版第一本詩集《我底記憶》,他的成名作《雨巷》即收入此集中。1933年8月出版了《望舒草》1948年出版了《災(zāi)難歲月》一生留下了詩篇92首?!队晗铩肥谴魍娴某擅骱颓捌诘拇碜?他曾因此而贏得了“雨巷詩人”的雅號(hào)。這首詩寫于1927年夏天。當(dāng)時(shí)全國(guó)處于白色恐怖之匯總,戴望舒因曾參加進(jìn)步活動(dòng)而不得不避居于松江的友人家中,在孤寂中咀嚼著大革命失敗后的幻滅與痛苦,心匯總充滿了迷惘的情緒和朦朧的希望。)(適當(dāng)板書)
教師在教學(xué)古詩時(shí),只有指導(dǎo)學(xué)生反復(fù)朗讀,才能讓學(xué)生直接體會(huì)到古詩所具有的音樂美,增強(qiáng)學(xué)生對(duì)古詩的美學(xué)感染力,進(jìn)一步激發(fā)學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)古詩詞的熱情。除此,在《荷塘月色》、《春》等優(yōu)美的寫景抒情散文中,朱自清運(yùn)用了不少的疊詞,朗讀它們,猶如一個(gè)個(gè)跳動(dòng)的音符貫穿于文章中,有效地增強(qiáng)了文章的節(jié)奏感。通過朗讀,學(xué)生能夠更好地領(lǐng)悟到朱自清散文所具有的音樂美。4、朗讀能夠增強(qiáng)學(xué)生對(duì)文章含蓄美和形象美的感染能力:含蓄,是指用少量的、具體的、可感觸的藝術(shù)形象,來表現(xiàn)豐富的生活內(nèi)容和思想感情,把詩意藏在富于概括性和內(nèi)涵豐富的形象中,以瞬間表現(xiàn)永恒,以有限傳達(dá)無限,以少勝多,給人以推理和想象的廣闊大地?!白x書百遍,其義自見”,“熟讀唐詩三百首,不會(huì)作詩也會(huì)吟”,“觀書須熟讀,使其言皆者出于吾云之口;繼以精思,使其意皆出于吾之心?!边@些話語道出了反復(fù)朗讀對(duì)于理解文章含義所起的重要作用。教師在課堂教學(xué)過程中,特別是地教學(xué)詩歌時(shí),只有指導(dǎo)學(xué)生反復(fù)地朗讀,才能讓學(xué)生將文章中雋永的意境,深厚的蘊(yùn)涵更好地品味出來,從而更好地欣賞到文章的含蓄美。
The topic of this part is “Learn to make choices in life”.The Listening & Speaking & Talking part aims at the moral dilemmas, and this part is about making choices in life. The heroin is Lin Qiaozhi, a famous medical scientist, made a great contribution to our country’s medical care. Most importantly, her life experience can inspire our students whether in studying or the development of career. she had moral dilemmas and life choices, which are similar to the students who will step into society. Besides, Lin has quite good virtues like kindness, self-improvement, insistence, job-loving , generosity and responsibility, which is worth being learned.Concretely, this article is a biography about Lin Qiaozhi. The article tells her whole life according the timeline, among which the life choices is emphasized. For example, whether married or chased her dream, returned home or stayed abroad, family or public, her choices all reflected her faith, spirit, responsibility and devotion.1. Fast reading to get the detailed information about Lin Qiaozhi; careful reading to do the deductive information.2. Learn the reading skills--deductive judgement according the context.3. Study the structure features and language features. 4. Communicate about Lin’s life choices and reflect their own life choices.1. Learn the reading skills--deductive judgement according the context.2. Study the structure features and language features.3. Communicate about Lin’s life choices and reflect their own life choices.Step 1 Lead in---Small talkWhat are some important life choices?Importance choices: university study, jobs and marriage partners. Because they can determine our future.
Discuss these questions in groups.Q1: Have you ever been to a place that has a diverse culture ? What do you think about the culture diversity ?One culturally diverse place that I have been to is Harbin, the capital city of Heilongjiang Province. I went there last year with my family to see the Ice and Snow Festival, and I was amazed at how the culture as different to most other Chinese cities. There is a big Russian influence there, with beautiful Russian architecture and lots of interesting restaurants. I learnt that Harbin is called “the Oriental Moscow” and that many Russians settled there to help build the railway over 100 years ago.Q2: What are the benefits and challenges of cultural diversity ?The benefits: People are able to experience a wide variety of cultures, making their lives more interesting, and it can deepen the feelings for our national culture, it is also helpful for us to learn about other outstanding culture, which helps improve the ability to respect others. The challenges: People may have trouble communicating or understanding each other, and it may lead to disappearance of some civilizations and even make some people think “The western moon is rounder than his own.”Step 7 Post reading---RetellComplete the passage according to the text.Today, I arrived back in San Francisco, and it feels good (1) _____(be) back in the city again. The city succeeded in (2)_________ (rebuild) itself after the earthquake that (3)________ (occur) in 1906, and I stayed in the Mission District, enjoying some delicious noodles mixed with cultures. In the afternoon, I headed to a local museum (4)____ showed the historical changes in California. During the gold rush, many Chinese arrived, and some opened up shops and restaurants in Chinatown to earn a (5)_____ (live). Many others worked on (6)______ (farm), joined the gold rush, or went to build the railway that connected California to the east. The museum showed us (7)____ America was built by immigrants from (8)________ (difference) countries and cultures. In the evening, I went to Chinatown, and ate in a Cantonese restaurant that served food on (9)________(beauty) china plates. Tomorrow evening, I’m going to (10)__ jazz bar in the Richmond District. 答案:1. to be 2. rebuilding 3. occurred 4. that 5.living6. farms 7.how 8. different 9. beautiful 10. a
The theme of this unit focuses on “space exploration.” Students will learn about the training and experience needed to become an astronaut. The text is mainly about the development of space exploration. On the one hand, the text helps students to have a good understanding about the great feats humans have achieved, on the other hand, they will further understand the contributions that we Chinese have achieved, and feel confident and proud about our homeland and strengthen their love for our country. The teacher should instruct students to aim high and study harder to make great progress in the space career if possible.1. Read about the development and value of space exploration.2. Explore the mysteries of the universe and the achievements in space exploration.3. Skillfully use the vocabulary of this text to cultivate self-study ability 4. Develop cooperative learning ability through discussion.1. Enable the Ss to talk about the development and value of space exploration.2. Guide the Ss to summarize the main idea of each paragraph as well as the main idea of the text.3. Help Ss comprehend the main reasons for space exploration. Multi-media, textbook, notebooks.Step 1: Warming up and predictionLook at the title and the pictures of the text and predict what the text will be about?2. What are the main reasons for space exploration?
Q4: What is the function of the International exploration ?Having astronauts from different countries on boardQ5: What can you learn from Para 4 ?China has made great achievements in exploring spaceQ6: What is the attitude to the space exploration ?SupportiveStep 6 Post reading---RetellPeople have always wanted to learn more about space. Before the mid-20th century, most people felt (1)_________ (travel) into space was an impossible dream. However, (2)____ the help of scientists, peoplesucceeded in realizing their dream (3) _________ (explore) space. On 4 October 1957, the Sputnik 1 satellite (4) ____________(launch) by the USSR. (5) ________________ scientists try to make sure nothing goes wrong, accidents can still happen. These disasters made everyone(6)___________(disappoint), but people still believe in the importance of (7) ________(carry) on space exploration. In 2003, China became the third country to (8)_____________ (independent) send humans into space. Then Shenzhou 6 and 7 completed (9)____ second manned orbit and the first Chinese spacewalk. In spite of the difficulties, scientists hope future (10)__________ (discovery) will not only enable us to understand the universe but also help us survive well into the future.Answers: 1. travelling 2. with 3. to explore 4. was launched 5. Although6. disappointed 7. carrying 8. independently 9. a 10. discoveriesStep 6 Post reading---Critical thinkingQ1: What do you think of the space exploration ? I think it is beneficial to us. Through further study of space, people will make full use of it in the future, such as the space experiments by Wang Yaping in Tian Gong 1.Q2: If you are determined to be an astronaut, what should you prepare at present ?First of all, I should study hard to get a related college degree. Besides, I must keep mental and physical healthy.Step 7. HomeworkTry to summarize the structure of the article by a mind map.
Good afternoon, everyone. It’s my great pleasure to be here sharing my lesson with you. The content of my lesson is Senior English for China Book5 Unit 3 Life in the Future. I’ll be ready to begin this lesson from six parts: Analysis of the teaching material, Analysis of the students, Teaching aims and important and difficult points, Teaching methods and aids, Teaching procedures, and Blackboard design. First, let me talk about the teaching material.Part 1 Analysis of the Teaching Material:This unit is about what human beings’ life will be like in about one thousand years. By studying of this unit, we’ll Enable the students to know the changes in humans’ life and some new inventions bringing about the change and develop the interest in science. This lesson plays an important part in the English teaching in this unit. This is an important lesson in Book Five. From this lesson, it starts asking the Ss to grasp contents of each passage. Therefore, this lesson is in the important position of the teaching material. If the Ss can learn it well, it will be helpful to make the Ss learn the rest of this unit.Part 2 Analysis of the SsAs Senior2 Ss, they are at different levels of English fluency, some of them have lost interest in English. So during the lesson, I arrange a variety of activities to let all of them join in to attract their interest and let them be confident and taste the joy of success.
今天我們來介紹一下必修五第四單元的授課方式。這個(gè)單元的題目是Making the news。應(yīng)該是學(xué)生比較感興趣的話題,學(xué)生往往對(duì)新聞工作充滿好奇,所以我們可以利用這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)多設(shè)計(jì)一些師生互動(dòng)和學(xué)生互動(dòng),來激發(fā)起學(xué)習(xí)的積極性,提高學(xué)習(xí)效率。同時(shí)我們可以利用這個(gè)單元不僅幫助學(xué)生掌握語言知識(shí),培養(yǎng)語言能力,同時(shí)讓其了解新聞工作的重要性,培養(yǎng)起社會(huì)智能感。這個(gè)單元分為六個(gè)課時(shí),它的教學(xué)目標(biāo)是這樣的:語言目標(biāo)是掌握詞匯表中的常用單詞和短語,掌握倒裝句的一些基本用法。 技能目標(biāo)是能初步掌握約會(huì)的基本句型并在真實(shí)的場(chǎng)景下正確運(yùn)用。新聞報(bào)道類文章的寫作技能。采訪的基本規(guī)范和溝通技能。情感目標(biāo)是對(duì)新聞報(bào)道的客觀性和真實(shí)性有更好的理解。對(duì)新聞?dòng)浾叩穆殬I(yè)有更深入的了解,并能體會(huì)其工作的重要性。下面我們來介紹一下第一課時(shí)的授課方式,第一課的教學(xué)目標(biāo)是這樣的第一課時(shí)的教學(xué)目標(biāo)語言目標(biāo):單詞:Occupation, journalist, editor, photographer, curious, personality, enthusiasm
Teaching Aims:Knowledge 1. Get the students to learn the useful new words and expressions in this section. Aims:2. Let the students learn about how the UK was formed and the four groups of invaders.1. Develop students’ reading ability and let them learn different Ability reading skills. Aims:2. Enable students to learn to talk about the United Kingdom and the Union Jack Emotional 1. Let students know more about the UK2. Develop students’ sense of cooperative learning Aims:Teaching Important Points:1. Let the students learn about the countries of the United Kingdom and the Union Jack2. Get the students to read the passage and know about how the UK was formed and the four groups of invaders.3. Have the students learn different reading skills.Teaching Difficult Ponts:1. Develop students’ reading ability.2. Enable students to talk about the United Kingdom and the Union Jack.3. Let students learn how the UK was formed geographically and historically.Teaching Methods:Showing pictures, asking, exercising, listening, reading etc.Teaching Aids:A computer,a projector and a blackboard.Teaching Procedures: 1) Show a map of the world, ask students the following questions:Where is the UK?What’s the full name of the UK?2) Ask the students work in pairs to do the quiz on Page 9.Do you want to test how many things you know about the United Kingdom? Let’s have a small test.Using the map on P9, students answer the following questions:?How many countries does the UK consist of? What are they??England is divided into three main areas. Do you know what they are? 1) Scanning (10Minutes )Let the students hold the questions asked in pre-reading and read the passagequickly and then let them do the following exercise.Join lines to the right answer.
Step 2 Pre-listeningAfter students finish their discussion, I will show a picture of Newton and ask them: Who is him? What is he famous for? Could you find out some words to describe him? Maybe students will answer that he is genius for his finding of theGravitation, making a great contribution to the progress of human being. At that time I will show another two pictures of Einstein and Hawking, letting students guess who they are and write down their idea about the Gravitation. For I have arranged them to search more information about the gravity before this class, Students have beenfamiliar with the topic and will not be afraid about this abstract conception, which is helpful for their listening.Step 3 While-listeningIn this step, students will be required to listen the material for three times. The first and listening is extensive listening and the second and third listening is intensive listening. In the first time, They are required to listen a material including Part 1 and Part 2 and choose the best summary of the listening text. After they choose the right answer, They also need work in group to explain what is wrong with the others. Then I will make a conclusion that we should pay attention to the first paragraph and last paragraph and some keys to get the main idea. By doing this, their capacity of generalization will have a great improvement.Before the second listening, I will ask students to scan the blank on the power point quickly and ask them to note down some key words .Then ask them to listen to the Part 1again and fill the first column of the chart. Maybe some students just show the ideas of these three scientists an still can’t catch their development of gravity. Therefore, I will ask them to listen to Part 2 again and fill in the rest. After finish the listening, I will give them ten minutes to discuss with their partner. I will also guidethem to improve their answers when they discuss with others.
(幻燈六)巴金作品《家》描寫的是“五四”之后,成都地區(qū)一個(gè)封建大家庭走向崩潰的故事。故事集中在1920年冬到1921年秋的八九個(gè)月時(shí)間里。成都的一個(gè)官僚地主家庭高公館,一家之主的高老太爺,封建專制,頑固不化。長(zhǎng)房長(zhǎng)孫覺新,為人厚道,卻很軟弱,原與梅表姐相愛,后屈從于老太爺之命而與李瑞玨結(jié)婚。后來梅和瑞玨雙雙慘死。覺新的胞弟覺民、覺慧積極參加愛國(guó)運(yùn)動(dòng),從而和馮公館的馮樂山成了死對(duì)頭。覺民愛上琴,馮樂山卻要他娶自己的侄孫女,在覺民覺慧的反抗下,他們終于取得勝利。覺慧愛上聰明伶俐的婢女鳴鳳,但馮樂山卻指名要娶鳴鳳為妾,鳴鳳堅(jiān)決不從,投湖自盡…至此,覺新有所覺醒,而覺慧則毅然脫離家庭,投身革命。(故事主要以高家三兄弟的愛情遭際為線索。)
從《詩經(jīng)》的現(xiàn)實(shí)主義到屈原的浪漫主義,是中國(guó)詩歌發(fā)展的一個(gè)里程碑。屈原的騷體詩,依詩取興,引類譬喻,繼承發(fā)展了《詩經(jīng)》的比興傳統(tǒng)?!对娊?jīng)》的比興較為單純,而《楚辭》的比興具有象征的特質(zhì),往往成為一個(gè)形象的系統(tǒng)。《離騷》中香草美人的比興就是范例。楚地本是澤鄉(xiāng)山國(guó),其間頗有疊波曠宇、崇山秀嶺,這些江山的光怪之氣足以搖蕩心靈、催發(fā)麗辭偉句。但騷體詩已沖破《詩經(jīng)》四言詩的固定格式,句式加長(zhǎng)而靈活,篇章放大而嚴(yán)密,詩采絢麗而貼切,是《詩經(jīng)》之后的一次詩體大解放。有人說,中國(guó)歷代詩“莫不同祖風(fēng)騷”,足見其對(duì)后代詩歌的影響。先秦時(shí)代,《詩經(jīng)》與《楚辭》雙峰并峙,是中國(guó)詩史上現(xiàn)實(shí)主義與浪漫主義的兩座巍然屹立的坐標(biāo)。
1.本文由“不得極夫游之樂”生發(fā)出“盡吾志”的觀點(diǎn),又由“仆碑”生發(fā)出“深思慎取”的觀點(diǎn),這兩個(gè)觀點(diǎn)彼此有聯(lián)系嗎?作者游褒禪山,本來是一次平常的游歷活動(dòng),但卻從中悟出了人生哲理──從前洞后洞游人的多少悟出“夷以近,則游者眾;險(xiǎn)以遠(yuǎn),則至者少”,從“入之愈深,其進(jìn)愈難,而其見愈奇”悟出“而世之奇?zhèn)ァ⒐骞?、非常之觀,常在于險(xiǎn)遠(yuǎn)”;由此再引申一步,就得出了“非有志者不能至”的結(jié)論。然后將這次游山而未能“極夫游之樂”的教訓(xùn)升華到理論上來,具體分析了“至”的幾個(gè)條件,最后得出“盡吾志”的觀點(diǎn)──這正是“求思之深而無不在”的結(jié)果。由此可見,“盡吾志”的觀點(diǎn)跟“深思慎取”的觀點(diǎn)是有聯(lián)系的:“盡吾志”的觀點(diǎn)是在“深思慎取”的基礎(chǔ)上產(chǎn)生的;有了這個(gè)觀點(diǎn),又能反過來促使人們“深思慎取”,二者是相輔相成的。
二、文本解讀方法點(diǎn)撥研讀課文第三、第四段。要求:師范讀,生輕聲跟讀,然后生齊讀。方法:第三段秦統(tǒng)一天下前,應(yīng)用較強(qiáng)的語勢(shì)讀出,充分渲染塑造一個(gè)“威加海內(nèi)”的帝王形象。統(tǒng)一天下之后,秦王朝至此已達(dá)頂峰,這意味著從此轉(zhuǎn)入守勢(shì)。這段文字義正詞嚴(yán),充分揭露了秦的暴虐無道,故誦讀應(yīng)有“聲討”之勢(shì)。末句“天下已定”總承以上內(nèi)容,其后應(yīng)有較長(zhǎng)停頓,然后轉(zhuǎn)入敘秦始皇的心態(tài),用以反襯下文滅亡之速,讀時(shí)須有嘲諷意,突出“自以為”“萬世之業(yè)”等詞語。第四段起首“始皇既沒,余威震于殊俗”兩句,暗示民心不服,人人自危,宜用從容、沉著的語調(diào)讀出?!叭魂惿娈Y牖繩樞之子……”急轉(zhuǎn)直下,稍作停頓,以下先抑(“陳涉”至“之富”)后揚(yáng)(“躡足”至段末)宜讀出對(duì)比情調(diào)。末句敘事結(jié)束全篇,要讀得沉著、有力。三、信息篩選學(xué)生自譯課文(一)學(xué)生參照文下注釋,口譯第三、四段,遇有疑難則作好相應(yīng)標(biāo)記,為討論做好準(zhǔn)備。
2、黛玉進(jìn)入賈府到賈母處,她看到了什么?提示:從榮府西角門進(jìn)去,走“一射之地”,轉(zhuǎn)至垂花門,過穿堂,繞插屏,再經(jīng)三間過廳,后面方是賈母居住的正房大院。“正面五間上房,皆雕梁畫棟,兩邊穿山游廊廂房,掛著各色鸚鵡、畫眉等鳥雀。”這樣穿堂過廳一路行來,仆役、婆子、丫環(huán)輪番更換,的確給人以侯門深似海的感覺。然而賈母居處還不是正內(nèi)室。3、黛玉去拜見二舅舅時(shí)又看到什么?提示:往東?!按┻^一個(gè)東西的穿堂,向南大廳之后,儀門內(nèi)大院落,上面五間大正房,兩邊廂房鹿頂耳房鉆山,四通八達(dá),軒昂壯麗”。堂屋中迎面“一個(gè)赤金九龍青地大匾,匾上寫著斗大的三個(gè)大字,是‘榮禧堂’,后有一行小字:‘某年月日,書賜榮國(guó)公賈源’,又有‘萬幾宸翰之寶’?!蔽輧?nèi)擺設(shè)有名貴的家具,珍貴的字畫、古玩。“又有一副對(duì)聯(lián),乃烏木聯(lián)牌,鑲著鏨銀的字跡,道是:座上珠譏昭日月,堂前黼黻煥煙霞?!庇商梦葸M(jìn)入東耳房,這里是起居室,另有一番布置,再到東廊三間小正房王夫人的住室,又別有擺設(shè)。
【參考】“滄海月明珠有淚,藍(lán)田日暖玉生煙?!睖婧V械恼渲橹挥性诿髟轮梗拍芰飨戮К摰臏I花;藍(lán)田下的美玉只有在日暖之時(shí),才能升騰飄逸的煙霞。物猶如此,人當(dāng)如是。“滄海月明”與“藍(lán)田日暖”優(yōu)美意境的創(chuàng)設(shè),不僅僅是詩人精妙絕倫藝術(shù)素養(yǎng)的表現(xiàn)和揮灑,更是詩人回答人生價(jià)值的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和尺度。詩人以物推人,拓展深化了詩作的主題,整篇的閃光點(diǎn)在此,魂亦在此?!緟⒖肌俊按饲榭纱勺窇?,只是當(dāng)時(shí)已惘然?!弊窇涍^去,盡管自己以一顆浸滿血淚的真誠(chéng)之心,付出巨大的努力,去追求美好的人生理想,可“五十弦”如玉的歲月、如珠的年華,值得珍惜之時(shí)卻等閑而過;面對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí):戀人生離、愛妻死別、盛年已逝、抱負(fù)難展、功業(yè)未建……,幡醒悟之日已風(fēng)光不再。如泣如訴的悲劇式結(jié)問,又讓詩人重新回到對(duì)“人生價(jià)值到底是什么?到底該怎樣實(shí)現(xiàn)?”深深的思考和迷惑之中,大大增強(qiáng)了詩作的震撼力。