Good expressions that students can choose to use: help the travelers choose which tour to take1. In my opinion, you could/might choose…, because you prefer to…2. …could be a perfect choice for you, for…3. As far as I am concerned, you would enjoy…, for…4. …would probably suit you, because you enjoy/love/hate doing…Step 5 Passage ConsolidationLanguage appreciation:1. You can then spend three days exploring the rainforest with a local guide and enjoying the plants and animals unique to the rainforest. 在接下來的三天里,您可以在當(dāng)?shù)貙?dǎo)游的陪同下,深入雨林進(jìn)行探索,欣賞雨林特有的動植物。本句主體結(jié)構(gòu)為spend some time doing sth. 2. Inca builders cut stones to exact sizes so that nothing was needed to hold walls together other than the perfect fit of the stones. 印加的建筑工人將石頭切割成精確的尺寸,僅僅憑著石頭間的完美契合,即可穩(wěn)固墻體。本句為so that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句。nothing與the perfect fit為并列成分; other than在句中意為“除了”。Step 6 HomeworkSuppose you will travel to Peru, write a short essay about your three-day tour plan.
Then have them write a short paragraph to describe and explain their changes. After that, get the Ss to exchange their drafts with their partners and use the checklist to give feedback on their drafts, and finally revise it.Step 5 Summary of how to write a wellness book1.健康書的審題步驟:第一步:明確要求該寫作屬于經(jīng)驗分享,故要用第一人稱來寫;時態(tài)以一股現(xiàn)在時為主。第二步:確定段落該類文章可以從以下三個方面人手:Para.1首先表明寫作的目的Para.2自己的做法及心得體會Para.3表示期望及感謝第三步:提煉要點2.健康書常見句式:1) It is an honor for me to share my favorite sport with you,2) It makes me feel relaxed playing with my friends.3) It makes me rid myself of stress while playing with my friends.4) Moreover, it provides me a valuable chance to communicate with others.5) I we eat too little or too much, or if we choose the wrong food, we may become sick.6) We can do something to change the poor situation.Step 6Homework假如你的老師讓你在班級Wellness Bok上分享自己的親身經(jīng)歷及心得,請根據(jù)以下要點寫一篇80字左右的文章1. 你喜歡的運動是什么?2. 你最喜歡的原因是什么?3. 你參加鍛煉的體會。
II Learn the technical terms-2.1. What can be used as “Subject, Object, Predicative, Direct Object, Indirect Object and objective complement” in a sentence?2. What can be used as “adverbial” in a sentence?3. What can be used as “verb” in a sentence?Answers to questions 1-3:1. Nouns, pronouns and appellations can be used as “Subject, Object, Predicative, Direct Object, Indirect Object and Objective Complement”. Besides, adjectives can be used as “Predicative and Objective Complement” in a sentence.2. Adverbs and prepositional phrases can be used as “Adverbial”.3. Verbs with actual meaning can be used as “Verb” in a sentence. Auxiliary verbs alone cannot be used as “Verb” in a sentence.III Learn to recognize the sentence structures.1. SV structure. For Example:(1) A bird flies.S V(2) A monkey jumps.S V(3) A fish swims.S V√ In SV structures, verbs are “intransitive verbs”.2. SVO structure. For Example:(1) A sheep eats grass.S V O(2) They like bananas.S V O(3) He wants candy.S V O√ In SVO structures, verbs are “transitive verbs”.3. SP structure. For Example:(1) This is great.S P (2) He looks well.S P (3) She became a teacher.S P √ In SP structures, Predicatives are formed by “l(fā)ink verbs” and “adjectives or nouns”.√ link verbs: be, become, grow, look, feel, taste, etc.4. SV IO DO structure. For Example:(1) He asked me a question.S V IO DO(2) Danny wrote me a letter.S V IO DO(3) Billy brought Sam a kite.S V IO DO√ In SV IO DO structures, the verbs are transitive and are followed by two objectives – pronouns or nouns as Indirect Objective, and nouns as Direct Objectives.
Step 3: Read to sum upRead it again and sum up the problems of the three students, and then write down the advice that was given from others.Step 4: Work in pairs. List your learning problems in English and brainstorm some useful advice.Useful expressions ? I don't know how to…... Is a big difficulty for me. I cannot ...? You might try …. It's very important to…? I have no idea how/what .My biggest problem is .... ? I (also) have trouble with. My advice is …. This worked for me.? l cannot understand the teachers’ English in class.Step 5 Homework:為提高我校學(xué)生的英語口語水平,我們將舉辦英語演講比賽(English- speaking contest),請你根據(jù)下面的信息,以學(xué)生會(the Students‘ Union)的名義寫一份海報,歡迎全校同學(xué)參加,屆時特邀本校美籍教師史密斯先生頒獎。? 報名時間 9月30日以前(報名:signup)? 報名地點 學(xué)生會辦公室? 比賽時間 10月9日晚7:00~9:00? 比賽地點 學(xué)校大會議室? 獎勵 前8名
教學(xué)目標(biāo)知識目標(biāo):讓學(xué)生更好理解如何恰當(dāng)?shù)貙懸粋€人的信息介紹,并能讓學(xué)生熟練地使用一些寫作技能。能力目標(biāo):培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的寫作能力和團(tuán)隊協(xié)作能力。情感目標(biāo):提升學(xué)生對寫作的興趣。教學(xué)重難點 教學(xué)重點:如何能讓學(xué)生更好地理解個人信息介紹。教學(xué)難點:如何能讓學(xué)生通過適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂靡恍懽骷寄軄韺懸黄^好的個人信息介紹。教學(xué)準(zhǔn)備 多媒體、黑板、粉筆一、Pre-class1. Greetings2. Leading-inAsk students how to write a profile. What kinds of aspects should be included? The teacher asks students to discuss the topic with each other and put forward to much more ideas about the answer.二、While-class1. The teacher lets students to read the student profiles on Page 8 silently and then asks students to discuss the questions below.1. What is Ann like? How do you know?2. What are Thando’s hobbies?3. Where does Thando come from?4. What is Thando’s dream?5. What does “You will never see me without a book or a pen” mean?
This teaching period mainly deals with grammar “restrictive relative clauses.” To begin with, teachers should lead students to revise what they have learned about the relative pronouns and relative adverbs. And then, teachers move on to stress more special cases concerning this grammar, such as the “preposition+ relative pronouns which and whom” and cases where we can omit the relative pronouns. This period carries considerable significance to the cultivation of students’ writing competence and lays a solid foundation for the basic appreciation of language beauty. The teacher is expected to enable students to master this period thoroughly and consolidate the knowledge by doing some exercises. 1. Guide students to review the basic usages of relative pronouns and adverbs of attributive clauses.2. Lead students to learn to use some special cases concerning restrictive relative clauses flexibly.2. Enable students to use the basic phrases structures flexibly.3. Strengthen students’ great interest in grammar learning.1. Help students to appreciate the function of relative pronouns and adverbs of attributive clauses in a sentence2. Instruct students to write essays using the proper relative pronouns and adverbs of attributive clauses.本節(jié)語法思考:定語從句在復(fù)合句中的作用是什么? 關(guān)系詞有哪些?定語從句在復(fù)合句中的作用相當(dāng)于形容詞,它在句中作定語修飾名詞或代詞。他們在先行詞和定語從句之間起到聯(lián)系作用,同時在意義上代表先行詞并在定語從句中擔(dān)任一個成分。被定語從句所修飾的詞稱先行詞,定語從句一般放在先行詞的后面。
This report is short, concise and has typical news content and language features. The title uses the verb phrases, embodying the characteristics of being concise and general. The introduction is the first two sentences in the first paragraph, describing the general situation of the cultural heritage protection project, including time, place, characters, events and other news elements, so that readers can see the main points of the news report at a glance. The main body is the second and third paragraphs, which report the important historical and cultural value of Mogao Grottoes and the production of Mogao Grottoes Material digital photos, which are of great significance to the inheritance of historical culture and the promotion of international cultural understanding, exchange and cooperation. Direct citation is used in the report, as well as background introduction and other news writing techniques.1. Get students to have a good understanding of some features about a news report by reading the text.2. Instruct students to write a summary about a news report properly using some newly acquired writing skills in this period.3. Develop students’ writing and cooperating abilities.4. Strengthen students’ great interest in writing discourses.1. Stimulate students to have a good understanding of how to a summary about a news report 2. Cultivate students to write a news report properly and concisely.Step 1: Lead in Do you think it is necessary for us to circulate our cultural heritage to the world? Why or why not?Do we need to learn more about other countries’ cultural heritage? Why or why not?Step 2: Read to discover details concerning the main body of the news report.
1. Ss look at the picture and scan the passage to understand the main idea while teacher is giving the following questions to inspire Ss to think.*Where are those people?*What are they doing?*Why are they so excited?2. Ss complete the passage with the appropriate -ing form. Then discuss and check the answers with class.Answers: boring, interesting, taking, exciting, amazing3. The teacher raises questions for the students to discuss and encourages them to express their opinions.*Do you like La Tomatina? Why or why not?4. Each group representative reports the discussion result, the teacher gives feedback and the evaluation.Step 6 PracticeActivity 41. Ss complete the Ex 2 in Using structures.2. Check the answers after finishing the exercises.①The dragon boat races are the most exciting part of the Dragon Boat Festival.② The children were excited to go Easter egg hunting.③What an amazing performance! This is the best music festival I have ever been to.④We were amazed by her funny-looking hat.⑤His inspiring speech at the conference won the admiration/ favour of the audience.⑥This is a challenging game to test your memory and observation capabilities. 3. T asks Ss to finish Ex 3 and 4 in Using structures by themselves, then check the answers with class.Step 6 Homework1. Understand and master the functions and usage of the -ing form;2. Finish the other exercises in Using structures.1、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生是否理解和掌握動詞-ing形式作定語和表語的功能和意義;2、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生能否在理解文段內(nèi)容的基礎(chǔ)上,根據(jù)上下文語境和表達(dá)邏輯,能正確運用動詞-ing形式描述節(jié)日慶典。3、通過本節(jié)內(nèi)容學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生是否歸納和積累用于表達(dá)情緒的相關(guān)詞匯。
本板塊的活動主題是“談?wù)摴?jié)日活動”(Talk about festival activities),主要是從貼近學(xué)生日常生活的角度來切入“節(jié)日”主題。學(xué)生會聽到發(fā)生在三個國家不同節(jié)日場景下的簡短對話,對話中的人們正在參與或?qū)⒁H歷不同的慶?;顒印kS著全球化的進(jìn)程加速,國際交流日益頻繁,無論是國人走出國門還是外國友人訪問中國,都已成為司空見慣的事情。因此,該板塊所選取的三個典型節(jié)日場景都是屬于跨文化交際語境,不僅每組對話中的人物來自不同的文化背景,對話者的身份和關(guān)系也不盡相同。1. Master the new words related to holiday: the lantern, Carnival, costume, dress(sb)up, march, congratulation, congratulate, riddle, ceremony, samba, make - up, after all. 2. To understand the origin of major world festivals and the activities held to celebrate them and the significance of these activities;3. Improve listening comprehension and oral expression of the topic by listening and talking about traditional festivals around the world;4. Improve my understanding of the topic by watching pictures and videos about different traditional festivals around the world;5. Review the common assimilation phenomenon in English phonetics, can distinguish the assimilated phonemes in the natural language flow, and consciously use the assimilation skill in oral expression. Importance:1. Guide students to pay attention to the attitude of the speaker in the process of listening, and identify the relationship between the characters;2. Inspire students to use topic words to describe the festival activities based on their background knowledge. Difficulties:In the process of listening to the correct understanding of the speaker's attitude, accurately identify the relationship between the characters.
知識和技能 ⑴從圖片和簡易圖中,了解氣團(tuán)(冷氣團(tuán)、暖氣團(tuán))的概念;鋒的概念與分類;低壓(氣旋)、高壓(反氣旋)、高壓脊、低壓槽的概念。⑵從氣溫、氣壓、濕度、降水、風(fēng)等幾方面分析各種天氣系統(tǒng)的形成及其氣流特點,并綜合出各種天氣系統(tǒng)控制下的天氣狀況過程與方法 ⑴讓學(xué)生能閱讀和簡單分析天氣圖,解釋天氣變化現(xiàn)象;⑵用案例說明氣象災(zāi)害發(fā)生的原因和危害;⑶結(jié)合我國常見的天氣系統(tǒng)說明其對人們生產(chǎn)和生活的影響情感、態(tài)度與價值觀激發(fā)學(xué)生探究天氣的形成和變化的興趣和動機(jī),培養(yǎng)學(xué)生求真、求實的科學(xué)態(tài)度,提高地理審美情趣教學(xué)重點1.鋒面系統(tǒng)。(鋒面系統(tǒng):一是要區(qū)別冷暖鋒的成因,二是要掌握鋒面兩側(cè)的氣壓、溫度、濕度、風(fēng)和天氣差異)2.低壓、高壓系統(tǒng)。(要掌握其成因、氣壓特征、氣流特征及其天氣特點四個方面。)
師:很好。由于存在地球大氣圈、地球水圈和地表的礦物,在地球上這個合適的溫度條件下,形成了適合于生物生存的自然環(huán)境。人們通常所說的生物,是指有生命的物體,包括植物、動物和微生物。據(jù)估計,現(xiàn)有生存的植物約有40萬種,動物約有110多萬種,微生物至少有10多萬種。據(jù)統(tǒng)計,在地質(zhì)歷史上曾生存過的生物約有5億~10億種之多,然而,在地球漫長的演化過程中,絕大部分都已經(jīng)滅絕了?,F(xiàn)存的生物生活在巖石圈的上層部分、大氣圈的下層部分和水圈的全部,構(gòu)成了地球上一個獨特的圈層,稱為生物圈。生物圈是太陽系所有行星中僅在地球上存在的一個獨特圈層。課堂小結(jié):地球所有的外部圈層是相互滲透、相互影響,甚至相互重疊的,在太陽和人類生活的參與下,整個地球生機(jī)盎然;同時,它們起著保護(hù)地球的作用,可以減弱太陽和宇宙輻射對地表的影響,減少宇宙中的隕石對地球表面的撞擊。外部各圈中的物質(zhì)運動和循環(huán),是促使地表物質(zhì)和形態(tài)演變的重要動力。
三維目標(biāo):知識和技能 1、了解地球自轉(zhuǎn)和公轉(zhuǎn)的方向及一些基本數(shù)據(jù):周期、速度、公轉(zhuǎn)軌道、黃赤交角。2、理解由于地球自轉(zhuǎn)運動造成的晝夜交替、地方時差,掌握時間的有關(guān)換算,能正確判斷晨昏線。3、理解地球自轉(zhuǎn)和公轉(zhuǎn)的關(guān)系,理解太陽直射點的南北移動的過程及其原因,并能演示其運動規(guī)律。4、理 解晝夜長短和正午太陽高度的季節(jié)變壞緯度變化 。過程與方法 1、通過運用地球儀演示地球的自傳和公轉(zhuǎn)現(xiàn)象,學(xué)生能夠準(zhǔn)確的畫出夏至日到冬至日太陽照射地球的示意圖2、能根據(jù)“二分二至日太陽照射地球示意圖”分析全球各 地的晝夜長短和正午太陽高度的變化,分析同緯度地區(qū)不同季節(jié)和不同緯度地區(qū)相同季節(jié)的晝夜長短和正午太陽高度的變化。
當(dāng)時,不只發(fā)生了太陽風(fēng)暴,同時還有其它的現(xiàn)象發(fā)生,導(dǎo)致災(zāi)難巨大。 如果,這些現(xiàn)象單獨地發(fā)生,結(jié)果就會是另外一個樣子。正是由于這些因素綜合起來,1859年的太陽風(fēng)暴,才在人類歷史上留下了濃墨重彩的一筆。太陽磁暴開始干擾通信日本衛(wèi)星首個被“擊中”日本航天機(jī)構(gòu)29日聲明,受強烈的太陽磁暴影響,28日晚,日本“兒玉(Kodama)”通訊衛(wèi)星信號中斷。 據(jù)美聯(lián)社報道,在太陽黑子活動減弱后,“兒玉”通訊衛(wèi)星恢復(fù)正常運轉(zhuǎn)。 美歐研究人員28日發(fā)布新聞公告稱,太陽當(dāng)天發(fā)生了一次強烈的耀斑爆發(fā),預(yù)示著新一輪太陽風(fēng)暴將在今后一兩天內(nèi)抵達(dá)地球,地球上的通信等設(shè)施可能會因此受到部分干擾。與這次耀斑爆發(fā)相伴,太陽表面還產(chǎn)生了一股強大的日冕物質(zhì)噴射,方向幾乎直沖地球。研究人員說,噴射產(chǎn)生的帶電粒子流正以約每小時750萬公里的速度奔地球而來,其與地球磁場作用后可能會形成比較強烈的地磁暴,使地球兩極出現(xiàn)極光,并可能對衛(wèi)星運行和通信等造成干擾。
情感、態(tài)度與價值觀幫助學(xué)生確立事物普遍聯(lián)系的觀點。幫助學(xué)生樹立正確認(rèn)識利用自然規(guī)律,實現(xiàn)人類與環(huán)境的和諧發(fā)展的觀念 。教學(xué) 重點水循環(huán)的形成過程和地理意義。人類活動對水循環(huán)的影響教學(xué) 難點水循環(huán)的地理意義。教具、資料多媒體課件課 時安排1課時教學(xué)過程:【新課導(dǎo)入】出示計算機(jī)圖片:地球衛(wèi)星圖片、太陽系九大行星圖片。請同學(xué)們看,這是人類的家園——地球,與太陽系其它大行星相比,它的最大特點是什么呢?(有豐富的水)是的,我們所居住的這顆行星,表面四分之三為水所覆蓋,是一顆“水的行星”。我們這一章要學(xué)習(xí)的就是地球上的水 ?!疽龑?dǎo)】水有哪些物理化學(xué)性質(zhì)?(固液氣三態(tài)變化、比熱、脹縮、溶劑等)那么,地球上的水都存在哪里呢?(海洋、河 流、湖泊、地下、冰川、沼澤、大氣、生物體等)【總結(jié)】水在地理環(huán)境中以氣態(tài)、固態(tài)和液態(tài)三種形式相互轉(zhuǎn)化,形成各種水體,共同構(gòu)成了一個連續(xù)但不規(guī)則的圈層。這實際上就是水圈。
(“節(jié)馬”:1841年1月7日,英國侵略者義律進(jìn)攻虎門,沙田炮臺副將陳連升率眾浴血奮戰(zhàn),壯烈犧牲。其馬“神駿”守護(hù)主人遺體,不屈敵之羈絆,不食敵之草料,不畏敵之鞭打刀刺,終不就范?!白驽驯蕖保鹤驽眩瑬|晉名將,著名愛國將領(lǐng),曾率軍北伐,收復(fù)許多失地。此句大意為若要揚眉吐氣,意氣風(fēng)發(fā),仍需祖逖的這種精神。)八、本文反映的就是香港回歸這一重大歷史事件本文是一篇新聞特寫。特寫性消息,也稱新聞速寫、新聞素描,要求用類似電影“特寫鏡頭”的手法來反映事實,是作者深入新聞事件現(xiàn)場,采寫制作的一種新聞價值高、現(xiàn)場感較強、篇幅短小精粹的消息文體。特寫性消息側(cè)重于“再現(xiàn)”,往往采用文學(xué)手法,集中、突出地描述某一重大事件的發(fā)生現(xiàn)場,或某些重要和精彩的場面,生動、形象地將所報道的事實再現(xiàn)在讀者面前。
四、講讀第一段(10分鐘)1.抽生朗讀本段,注意生字詞讀音。2.講析本段譯釋由學(xué)生完成,師只作扼要補糾和簡要分析。分析內(nèi)容包括伏筆手法和語句深意,全段作用。3.讓學(xué)生齊讀全段。4.處理練習(xí)一之中的第1小題,要求學(xué)生試譯回答,然后指導(dǎo)學(xué)生背誦本段。五、講讀第二段(15分鐘)1.抽生朗讀本段,注意生字詞讀音。2.講析本段①重點講析三個文言詞“若”、“之”、“辭”的用法和人物對話。②字詞句的理解仍然注意發(fā)揮學(xué)生的能動性,讓他們完成為主,師糾補為輔。對要求掌握的三個文言詞的用法要板書列于黑板上,對話部分要讓學(xué)生試作語氣練習(xí)。③小結(jié)的內(nèi)容包括情節(jié)的曲折性、寫法的詳略和表達(dá)的特點。3.生齊讀本段,然后處理相關(guān)練習(xí)。
第7~10段,我們?nèi)〉昧顺醪降某删汀O葘懨珴蓶|主席的號召,激勵無數(shù)的航天人去實現(xiàn)千年夢想;接著寫我們的計劃,上天畢竟是一件天大的事情,不是誰一句話就能吹上去的,需要有周密的計劃,這計劃的第一步是研制火箭,成功了,而從毛主席發(fā)出號召開始到火箭成功發(fā)射才用了1年零9個月;又用了不到10年的時間中國的第一顆人造衛(wèi)星又上了天,“宣告中國進(jìn)入了航天時代”。由號召,到計劃,到成功,一步一步寫來,緊張的任務(wù),緊湊的文章,娓娓道來,條理清晰。第11~13段,人造衛(wèi)星上天了,下一步就是載人飛天,圓千年夢想。我們也做了大量的準(zhǔn)備工作,一是航天材料、食品等的準(zhǔn)備,一是航天員的準(zhǔn)備,已經(jīng)挑選了19位優(yōu)秀的飛行員,他們是航天員的預(yù)備軍。看來實現(xiàn)中國人的航天夢已為時不遠(yuǎn)了。可是在科學(xué)上是沒有坦途的,由于多方面的原因,計劃擱淺了,我們的飛天夢想“只能塵封在一張張構(gòu)思草圖中”,這是多么遺憾的事??!
劉邦:先看劉邦對項伯的表白(此話也是有意讓項伯轉(zhuǎn)述給項羽聽的):“秋毫不敢有所近”——說“不敢”而不說“不曾”,多么恭順!“籍吏民,封府庫,而待將軍”——“待”,多么虔誠!“日夜望將軍至”——說“望”而不說“等”,多么迫切!再看劉邦的卑詞“謝罪”:他言必稱“將軍”,說自己與項羽“戮力而攻秦”,是戰(zhàn)友而非敵人;將“先入關(guān)破秦”說成是不自意,以表自己的力量不如項羽;把“得復(fù)見將軍于此”當(dāng)作是自己莫大的榮幸以滿足項羽的虛榮心;最后,他還把項羽的憤怒歸咎于“小人”的挑撥,為項羽推卸責(zé)任,及時給項羽一個臺階下。小結(jié):項羽:沽名釣譽、輕敵自大、寡謀輕信、不善用人、剛愎自用、優(yōu)柔寡斷的一介武夫。劉邦:狡詐多謀、遇事果斷、臨危不懼、能屈能伸、善于用人。
【教學(xué)意圖】要了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化,必須閱讀古詩文名著名篇。但在中國文化形成過程中影響最大的是什么?可以說是儒家學(xué)說,包括《論語》這部經(jīng)典?!墩撜Z》等書是讀書人求仕做官的必修課本,是知識分子的思想言行基礎(chǔ),而且影響到整個社會生活,內(nèi)容包括倫理道德、教育體制、民間習(xí)俗等方面的思想。因此,要了解中國傳統(tǒng)文化,有必要讀一讀《論語》?!窘虒W(xué)設(shè)計】因《論語》的年代已久遠(yuǎn),對學(xué)生而言,要理解透徹文句是比較深奧困難的,因此必須在充分理解文意的基礎(chǔ)上,對《論語》進(jìn)行思想上的解讀。可由教師從《論語》中概括出幾點與生活、現(xiàn)實相關(guān)的要點,要求學(xué)生分組進(jìn)行透徹的學(xué)習(xí)和領(lǐng)會,如“小人與君子”、“學(xué)習(xí)的方法”、“教育的理念”等等?!冀虒W(xué)重點、難點〗讀《論語》知儒家思想?!冀虒W(xué)方法〗講解啟發(fā)、探究梳理、拓展延伸。
3、介紹對聯(lián)的歷史引出本課的重點。人類歷史上的第一副對聯(lián)是“新年納余慶,嘉節(jié)號長春”。出現(xiàn)在五代十國時期(公元964年),距離現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)有1044年了。有著一千多年歷史的對聯(lián)有什么基本的特點呢?這是我們這節(jié)課學(xué)習(xí)的重點。請在座的各位當(dāng)回醫(yī)生,給下面這幅對聯(lián)號號脈,看它對仗是否工整?上聯(lián):冬去春來千條楊柳迎風(fēng)綠下聯(lián):冰消雪化梅花萬朵撲鼻有什么問題,怎么改?剛才這幾位同學(xué)指出了這幅對聯(lián)的兩個問題,也提出了兩條修改意見。第一是下聯(lián)少了一個字,最好是添加一個“香”字;第二是下聯(lián)的“梅花萬朵”與上聯(lián)的“千條楊柳”是數(shù)量詞對名詞,名詞對數(shù)量詞,對仗不工整,要調(diào)整為“萬朵梅花”。這樣,數(shù)量詞“萬朵”對“千條”,名詞“梅花”對“楊柳”。大家還有沒有不同的看法。這樣我們就可以得出對聯(lián)的兩個特點特點:第一個特點是上下聯(lián)字?jǐn)?shù)要相等(板書)。就是上聯(lián)有幾個字,下聯(lián)也要有幾個字。大家記下來,對聯(lián)基本要求一,“上下聯(lián)字?jǐn)?shù)相等”。這個要求是很嚴(yán)格的,一般來說,違反這個規(guī)則就不成對聯(lián)了。