Example:One day, a poor boy who was trying to pay his way through school by sending newspapers door to door found that he only had one dime(一角)left. He was so hungry that he decided to beg for a meal at the next house.However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. Instead of a meal he asked for a drink of water. She thought he looked hungry so she brought him a large glass of milk. He drank it slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?” “You don’t owe me anything,” she replied, “Mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” “Then I thank you from the bottom of my heart.” With these words, Howard Kelly left that house.Years later the woman became badly ill and was finally sent to the hospital in a big city. Dr. Howard Kelly, now famous, was called in. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes. Dressed in his doctor’s clothes, Dr. Kelly went into her room and recognized her at once. From that day on, he gave special attention to her, and decided to do his best to save her life.At last the woman was saved. Dr. Kelly asked the business office to pass the final bill to him. He looked at it and then wrote something on the side. The bill was sent to the woman’s room. She was afraid to open it because she was sure that it would take the rest of her life to pay for it off. Finally she looked, and the note on the side of the bill caught her attention. She read these words: “Paid in full with a glass of milk, Dr. Howard Kelly.” Tear of joy flooded her eyes.
The topic of this part is “Learn to make choices in life”.The Listening & Speaking & Talking part aims at the moral dilemmas, and this part is about making choices in life. The heroin is Lin Qiaozhi, a famous medical scientist, made a great contribution to our country’s medical care. Most importantly, her life experience can inspire our students whether in studying or the development of career. she had moral dilemmas and life choices, which are similar to the students who will step into society. Besides, Lin has quite good virtues like kindness, self-improvement, insistence, job-loving , generosity and responsibility, which is worth being learned.Concretely, this article is a biography about Lin Qiaozhi. The article tells her whole life according the timeline, among which the life choices is emphasized. For example, whether married or chased her dream, returned home or stayed abroad, family or public, her choices all reflected her faith, spirit, responsibility and devotion.1. Fast reading to get the detailed information about Lin Qiaozhi; careful reading to do the deductive information.2. Learn the reading skills--deductive judgement according the context.3. Study the structure features and language features. 4. Communicate about Lin’s life choices and reflect their own life choices.1. Learn the reading skills--deductive judgement according the context.2. Study the structure features and language features.3. Communicate about Lin’s life choices and reflect their own life choices.Step 1 Lead in---Small talkWhat are some important life choices?Importance choices: university study, jobs and marriage partners. Because they can determine our future.
The grammatical structure of this unit is predicative clause. Like object clause and subject clause, predicative clause is one of Nominal Clauses. The leading words of predicative clauses are that, what, how, what, where, as if, because, etc.The design of teaching activities aims to guide students to perceive the structural features of predicative clauses and think about their ideographic functions. Beyond that, students should be guided to use this grammar in the context apporpriately and flexibly.1. Enable the Ss to master the usage of the predicative clauses in this unit.2. Enable the Ss to use the predicative patterns flexibly.3. Train the Ss to apply some skills by doing the relevant exercises.1.Guide students to perceive the structural features of predicative clauses and think about their ideographic functions.2.Strengthen students' ability of using predicative clauses in context, but also cultivate their ability of text analysis and logical reasoning competence.Step1: Underline all the examples in the reading passage, where noun clauses are used as the predicative. Then state their meaning and functions.1) One theory was that bad air caused the disease.2) Another theory was that cholera was caused by an infection from germs in food or water.3) The truth was that the water from the Broad Street had been infected by waste.Sum up the rules of grammar:1. 以上黑體部分在句中作表語。2. 句1、2、3中的that在從句中不作成分,只起連接作用。 Step2: Review the basic components of predicative clauses1.Definition
當(dāng)孩子們由父母陪同時,他們才被允許進入這個運動場。3.過去分詞(短語)作狀語時的幾種特殊情況(1)過去分詞(短語)在句中作時間、條件、原因、讓步狀語時,相當(dāng)于對應(yīng)的時間、條件、原因及讓步狀語從句。Seen from the top of the mountain (=When it is seen from the top of the mountain), the whole town looks more beautiful.從山頂上看,整個城市看起來更美了。Given ten more minutes (=If we are given ten more minutes), we will finish the work perfectly.如果多給十分鐘,我們會完美地完成這項工作。Greatly touched by his words (=Because she was greatly touched by his words), she was full of tears.由于被他的話深深地感動,她滿眼淚花。Warned of the storm (=Though they were warned of the storm), the farmers were still working on the farm.盡管被警告了風(fēng)暴的到來,但農(nóng)民們?nèi)栽谵r(nóng)場干活。(2)過去分詞(短語)在句中作伴隨、方式等狀語時,可改為句子的并列謂語或改為并列分句。The teacher came into the room, followed by two students (=and was followed by two students).后面跟著兩個學(xué)生,老師走進了房間。He spent the whole afternoon, accompanied by his mom(=and was accompanied by his mom).他由母親陪著度過了一整個下午。
Step 7: complete the discourse according to the grammar rules.Cholera used to be one of the most 1.__________ (fear) diseases in the world. In the early 19th century, _2_________ an outbreak of cholera hit Europe, millions of people died. But neither its cause, 3__________ its cure was understood. A British doctor, John Snow, wanted to solve the problem and he knew that cholera would not be controlled _4_________ its cause was found. In general, there were two contradictory theories 5 __________ explained how cholera spread. The first suggested that bad air caused the disease. The second was that cholera was caused by an _6_________(infect) from germs in food or water. John Snow thought that the second theory was correct but he needed proof. So when another outbreak of cholera hit London in 1854, he began to investigate. Later, with all the evidence he _7_________ (gather), John Snow was able to announce that the pump water carried cholera germs. Therefore, he had the handle of the pump _8_________ (remove) so that it couldn't be used. Through his intervention,the disease was stopped in its tracks. What is more, John Snow found that some companies sold water from the River Thames that __9__________________ (pollute) by raw waste. The people who drank this water were much more likely _10_________ (get) cholera than those who drank pure or boiled water. Through John Snow's efforts, the _11_________ (threaten) of cholera around the world saw a substantial increase. Keys: 1.feared 2.when 3. nor 4.unless 5.that/which 6.infection 7.had gathered 8.removed 9.was polluted 10.to get 11. threat
You have no excuse for not going.你沒有理由不去。He was punished for not having finished his homework.他因未完成作業(yè)而受到懲罰。2.動詞ing形式復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)由物主代詞或人稱代詞賓格、名詞所有格或普通格加動詞ing,即“sb./sb.'s+doing”構(gòu)成。動詞ing形式的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)實際上是給動詞ing形式加了一個邏輯主語。動詞ing形式的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)有四種形式:①形容詞性物主代詞+動詞ing②名詞所有格+動詞ing③代詞賓格+動詞ing④名詞+動詞ingHer coming to help encouraged all of us.她來幫忙鼓舞了我們所有人。The baby was made awake by the door suddenly shutting.這個嬰兒被突然的關(guān)門聲吵醒了。Can you imagine him/Jack cooking at home?你能想象他/杰克在家做飯的樣子嗎?無生命名詞無論是作主語還是作賓語都不能用第②種形式。Tom's winning first prize last year impressed me a lot.湯姆去年得了一等獎使我印象深刻。Do you mind my/me/Jack's/Jack leaving now?你介意我/杰克現(xiàn)在離開嗎?Excuse me for my not coming on time.很抱歉我沒能按時來。His father's being ill made him worried.他父親病了,他很擔(dān)心。We are looking forward to the singer's/the singer to give us a concert.我們盼望著這位歌手來給我們舉辦一場演唱會。
該活動是為了加深學(xué)生對字母順序的記憶。并在此同時學(xué)唱字母歌。要求活動前準(zhǔn)備好火車頭圖案一個及字母歌磁帶。在學(xué)生唱字母歌的同時,教師播放磁帶。Arrive at the palace.( 進宮)到站了,字母客人經(jīng)過一條由三張課桌壘成的地道后,來到一塊寫有“請過字母認(rèn)讀關(guān)”的牌前,一名交通警(由教師或?qū)W生扮演)出示字母卡片,讓其逐個認(rèn)讀1—3個字母。凡認(rèn)讀過了關(guān)的到指定地點排好隊。不能正確認(rèn)讀的經(jīng)指導(dǎo)認(rèn)讀正確后去指定地點,準(zhǔn)備上賓館。該活動旨在訓(xùn)練字母的認(rèn)讀和發(fā)音。要求事先準(zhǔn)備一塊 “請過字母認(rèn)讀關(guān)”的標(biāo)牌。Go to ABC Hotel. (上賓館)已進城上賓館的客人須在ABC Hotel(字母賓館)內(nèi)按編號拿取房門鑰匙方可入內(nèi)。這時帶頭飾大寫A卡者拿取小寫a卡,帶頭飾大寫B(tài)卡者拿取小寫b卡,其他人均尋找并取走相應(yīng)的小寫字母卡。
教學(xué)目標(biāo):(1)知識目標(biāo):1.能夠聽、說、認(rèn)讀句子:Let's read, Let's make ,listen,write,match and say 中的句子。2.能夠聽懂 Listen and write 部分的錄音并正確填寫句子。(2)能力目標(biāo):通過教學(xué),使學(xué)生能夠了解英語請柬的內(nèi)容并會模仿書寫英語請柬。(3)情感目標(biāo):培養(yǎng)師生之間和同學(xué)之間的友誼與情感,積極鼓勵學(xué)生展現(xiàn)才能。三、說教學(xué)重點:1.能夠聽、說、認(rèn)讀句子:"We're going to have a farewell party . How do you feel? I feel …."四、說教學(xué)難點:Is every having a good time?五、說教法:1. 教法設(shè)計本節(jié)課中,在教學(xué)過程中注意發(fā)揮學(xué)生的主動積極性,給學(xué)生一個輕松愉快的語言學(xué)習(xí)氛圍,讓學(xué)習(xí)過程充滿樂趣,同時使他們感受到一定的挑戰(zhàn),滿足他們的成就感,使思維始終處于積極狀態(tài)。2. 學(xué)法指導(dǎo)重視多元智能教學(xué)原理、合作學(xué)習(xí)法和任務(wù)型語言學(xué)習(xí)法等應(yīng)用,充分調(diào)動學(xué)生的感覺器官,想象能力,激發(fā)學(xué)生積極參與課堂教學(xué)活動。
[活動一]導(dǎo)入:利用多媒體課件展示一些電影海報,從漂亮的海報引入今天所要學(xué)習(xí)的新單詞。師生活動:師問:What kind of movies are they?引出單詞:comedy thriller action movie documentary[設(shè)計意圖]通過多媒體給學(xué)生以直觀感受,熟悉的海報畫面使學(xué)生興趣大增,激發(fā)求知欲,順利進入新課。[活動二](1)演示《三槍》海報師問:What kind of movies is it? What’s his name?Yes,he’s Xiao Shenyang.Do you like him?....Do you know his English name?結(jié)論:I guess it’s a comedy.[設(shè)計意圖]從大家喜愛的喜劇名星入手,讓學(xué)生辨認(rèn)電影類型,鮮亮的海報色彩,夸張的人物造型,使課堂氣氛大增。[活動三]師生活動:Match these pictures with the mew words.[設(shè)計意圖]運用所學(xué)英語單詞,說出這些電影的類型。活動中充分運用, Do you want to go to this movies?這個一般疑問句,為下面小組活動打基礎(chǔ)。[活動四]1b師生活動:Please listen and circle the kinds of movies you hear.[活動五]1c結(jié)對活動:看例子,讓學(xué)生依照例子兩人一組做下面的對話。Sample:A:Do you want to go to a movie?B:Yes,I do,I want to see a comedy.[設(shè)計意圖]充分練習(xí)此對話,熟練掌握want to do 句型,句子中多讓學(xué)生使用第三人稱,正確掌握語法知識。
2、學(xué)習(xí)策略:(1)通過Disscussing, Classifying and Guessing等形式多樣的活動,促使學(xué)生運用認(rèn)知策略進行有效地學(xué)習(xí)。(2)在與同學(xué)合作完成任務(wù)的活動中主動探究和學(xué)習(xí)語言;并運用知識內(nèi)在規(guī)律幫助記憶、鞏固知識。三、課時結(jié)構(gòu)為了能較好地 實現(xiàn)既定的教學(xué)目標(biāo),結(jié)合本單元教學(xué)內(nèi)容和學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)規(guī)律,將本單元授課時定為四課時。Period 1 Section A 1a /1b /1c /2a /2b.Period 2 Section A 2c /3 /4 .Period 3 Section B 1a /1b /2a /2b /2c /3a /3b /3c /4a/4b.Period 4 Summing up Sections A and Band the grammar.四、教學(xué)過程設(shè)計Period One(第一課時)一、教學(xué)目標(biāo)1.知識目標(biāo):1)單詞:do, don’t, does, doesn’t, strawberries, like, have, hamburgers, orange, tomatoes,ice-cream,broccoli,salad,French fries, bananas.2)句型:Do you like bananas?Yes, I do. \ No, I don’t.2.能力目標(biāo):通過學(xué)習(xí)本課,學(xué)生能夠用英語互相討論喜歡與不喜歡的食品。3.情感目標(biāo):討論美食,享受生活美味,提倡健康合理膳食。二、教學(xué)重點:掌握關(guān)于食物的詞匯。三、教學(xué)難點:學(xué)會使用交際用語Do you like bananas?Yes,I do.\ No, I don’t.四、教學(xué)設(shè)計:Step1.通過讓學(xué)生猜冰箱里有哪些食物的形式,導(dǎo)出新的單詞。同時讓全體學(xué)生拼讀每個單詞、讓個別學(xué)生將單詞寫到黑板上。
【教學(xué)設(shè)計】一、教學(xué)目的:1、引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注生活,向生活學(xué)習(xí)語言。2、了解新詞新語,能正確評價和運用新詞新語。二、教學(xué)重難點:1、重點:認(rèn)識并評價新詞新語。2、難點:如何評價新詞新語三、教學(xué)用時:一課時四、教學(xué)過程預(yù)設(shè)(一)導(dǎo)入新課以前如果有人說我可愛,我會很高興:我還是有優(yōu)點的哦。現(xiàn)在如果有人說我可愛,我就會心里嘀咕了:這是什么意思呀?同學(xué)們知道這有什么意思嗎?(可愛=可憐沒人愛)如果大家留心就會發(fā)現(xiàn),類似這樣的詞語很多,在網(wǎng)上是特別流行,很新穎、獨特,誰來列舉幾個?(點評學(xué)生所列舉出的詞語)網(wǎng)絡(luò)上有新詞新語,其它媒體(如報刊、電視等)都有新詞新語。關(guān)于新詞新語的概念,一般認(rèn)為,新近創(chuàng)造出來的詞語,或是舊詞新用,這樣的詞語就叫新詞新語。
教學(xué)目標(biāo):1、了解文學(xué)作品解讀的個性化及其原因。2、探討個性化解讀遵循的基本原則,合理解讀文學(xué)作品。教學(xué)重點:引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注文學(xué)現(xiàn)象,培養(yǎng)他們對文學(xué)作品理解的多重思維能力。教學(xué)難點:把握個性化的度。避免偏激的理解、過度的張揚所謂個性,嚴(yán)重歪曲文學(xué)作品。教學(xué)方法:導(dǎo)讀、計論、合作探究。教學(xué)時間:一課時教學(xué)過程:一、創(chuàng)設(shè)情境、揭題導(dǎo)入:記得有這樣一個故事:一個小孩在四歲就能背《登鸛雀樓》,可平時只有在大人的要求下,他才背出來。直到六歲的某一天,他父母帶他去旅游,在他登陸上山頂時,竟然隨口背出:“欲窮千里目,更上一層樓”來。這說明了什么?……(討論)文學(xué)作品解讀的個性化。二、探討個性化解讀的原因1、讀者的差異導(dǎo)致解讀的個性化A、同一作品,閱讀的時間不同,解讀不同。如上面的例子。如《從百草園到三味書屋》和《風(fēng)箏》主題的多元化理解。“溫故知新”,名作重讀,不但有趣,而且有益。B、同一作品,不同讀者,解讀不同。
(三)教學(xué)重、難點1、教學(xué)重點:結(jié)合課文,了解演講辭針對性強、條理清楚、通俗易懂、適當(dāng)?shù)母星樯实忍攸c。2、教學(xué)難點:深入理解文章內(nèi)涵,聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實,體會本文的現(xiàn)實意義二、說學(xué)情高中學(xué)生在初中階段已經(jīng)接觸過演講辭了,對演講詞的特點已經(jīng)有了一些基本的知識,因此本輪的教學(xué)應(yīng)該讓他們在此基礎(chǔ)上有所提高。本文是學(xué)生在高中階段第一次接觸演講辭,有必要讓他們了解演講辭的特點及課文如何體現(xiàn)這些特點的。隨著年齡的增長,生活閱歷的增加,高中學(xué)生正逐漸形成自己對世界、對人生的看法,蔡元培先生的這篇文章能很好地激發(fā)他們對當(dāng)前的高中學(xué)習(xí)和未來的大學(xué)生活進行思考。此外,學(xué)生對北大的歷史及蔡元培先生作這番演講的時代背景了解不深,應(yīng)作出補充說明。
現(xiàn)代詩歌賞讀方法四:美讀(飽含謳歌與贊美情感再一次有感情地配樂朗讀全文,對比前面的朗讀,在讀中加深情感的領(lǐng)悟。)(五)延伸拓展引進生活的源頭活水,用情感來撞開學(xué)生的心扉。引導(dǎo)學(xué)生找到文章與現(xiàn)實的聯(lián)系點,抓住這一聯(lián)系點,讓語文回歸生活。我設(shè)計了“本詩哪些語段讓你聯(lián)想到自己的母親?講講你和母親的故事?!边@個問題是把對大堰河的感情升華為對母親的感情的過程。這樣將語文學(xué)習(xí)的外延與生活的外延相等,把課文與生活有機地結(jié)合在一起。要求學(xué)生講述條理清楚,語言生動。教師可以播放背景音樂,調(diào)動學(xué)生情感。這樣,不僅鍛煉了學(xué)生的口語表達能力,培養(yǎng)了學(xué)生感恩美德,同時也深化了本文的教學(xué)難點?,F(xiàn)代詩歌賞讀方法五:比讀(投影出示孟郊《游子吟》比較兩詩的異同,并有感情地朗誦。)(六)布置作業(yè)。把“你與母親的故事”整理成一篇文章。
精讀課文,理解積累 1、同學(xué)們的字記的很好,課文也一定能讀出感情來?,F(xiàn)在就請同學(xué)們帶著自己的理解和感受,有感情地讀一遍課文,并自己喜歡的一段精讀?! ?、討論交流,指導(dǎo)朗讀 調(diào)整方案: 方案一:通過讀文你知道了什么?(這一問題較開放,如果學(xué)生已從整體上感知課文內(nèi)容,即可進入下一環(huán)節(jié)。如果學(xué)生回答只停留在零散的詞句上,就按方案二教學(xué)。) 方案二:小燕子、麻雀和黃鶯它們分別認(rèn)為春雨是什么色的?他們?yōu)槭裁催@么認(rèn)為?(板貼寫有字的小寫圖片和對應(yīng)的顏色) 3、小組內(nèi)討論:a.如果分角色朗讀的話,該怎樣讀爭論的語法,朗讀好“不對”“不對,不對”“你們瞧”b.怎樣表現(xiàn)春雨小鳥和大自然?! ?、根據(jù)自己的理解感受小組內(nèi)分角色讀、表演讀?! ?、請一組同學(xué)配樂表演讀,學(xué)生評價 6、同學(xué)們春雨到底是什么顏色的呢?把你的想法說一說,畫一畫(自選粉筆板畫春雨) 7、指導(dǎo)積累。同學(xué)們讀得真有感情,現(xiàn)在請把你喜歡的詞句畫下來。
初讀課文,學(xué)習(xí)字詞?! ?.出示自學(xué)提示:默讀課文,一邊讀一邊畫出不認(rèn)識的字和不理解的詞,并借助詞典等學(xué)習(xí)工具書理解。 2.教師檢查學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)情況?! 。?)檢查生字讀音?! 、賲⒉睿?cēncī)芭蕉(b?。┮陆螅?jīn)嫵媚(wǔ) ?、凇氨 笔且粋€多音字,在字典中有三個讀音,一個讀bo,當(dāng)“迫近、靠近”講,組詞是日薄西山;還有的當(dāng)“輕微、少”、“不強壯”、“不厚道”、“看不起”等意思,組詞是“廣種薄收”、“單薄”、“輕薄”、“厚古薄今”等;一個讀bo,組詞是薄荷,多年生草本植物;還有一個讀音是bao,表示感情冷淡、不濃、不肥沃等意思。課文中 ?。?)指導(dǎo)易混淆的字?! 坝摹笔前氚鼑Y(jié)構(gòu),外面是“山”,里面是兩個“幺”?! 鞍浮笔巧舷陆Y(jié)構(gòu),上面是“安”,下面是“木”?! 氨 币c“簿”相互比較,可以通過組詞的形式來辨析,“薄”組詞是“薄餅”,“簿”組詞是練習(xí)簿?! 昂保鹤笥医Y(jié)構(gòu),與“米”有關(guān),形容非常黏稠、混沌不清的狀態(tài)。
《樹之歌》是統(tǒng)編版二年級上冊第二單元的一篇識字課文。介紹樹木特征的歸類識字歌,描寫了楊樹、榕樹、梧桐樹……等11種樹木,表現(xiàn)了大自然樹木種類的豐富。課文安排了一組“木”字旁歸類識字。把樹木的名稱集中在一首詩歌中,讓學(xué)生在感受美麗景色、感受美好生活的同時,認(rèn)識事物,認(rèn)識表示樹木的漢字,感知不同樹木的名稱。教學(xué)的過程中可引導(dǎo)學(xué)生在誦讀文本的同時,體現(xiàn)多樣的識字形式,要將識字教學(xué)與閱讀文本有機融合, 在反復(fù)的讀書體會中,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生發(fā)現(xiàn)漢字規(guī)律,運用形聲字形旁表義、聲旁表音的特點歸類識字,并鼓勵學(xué)生運用已經(jīng)掌握的方法自主識字。 1.認(rèn)識“梧、桐”等15個生字,會寫“楊、壯”等10個生字。學(xué)會運用形聲字的特點自主識字。2.正確、流利地朗讀兒歌,并背誦全文。3.通過看圖和讀兒歌,初步了解11種樹木的基本特點。積累與樹木有關(guān)的語句。4.引導(dǎo)學(xué)生學(xué)會觀察身邊的事物,樹立愛護花草樹木的意識。 1.教學(xué)重點:學(xué)會本課生字,利用形聲字特點掌握木字旁的8個生字。朗讀課文,背誦課文。了解不同樹木的特點。2.教學(xué)難點:能按掌握形聲字的構(gòu)字特點,了解11種樹木的基本特點。積累與樹木有關(guān)的語句。能背誦課文。 2課時
1.懸念法懸念法又稱關(guān)子。它是作者為了激發(fā)那種“緊張與期待的心理活動”,在行文中有意采取的一種積極而有效的手段。這種手段包括“設(shè)懸”和“解懸”兩方面。所謂 “設(shè)懸”就是設(shè)置懸念,即在情節(jié)發(fā)生發(fā)展的關(guān)鍵時刻或人物命運攸關(guān)的重要關(guān)頭,敘述戛然而止,轉(zhuǎn)敘他事。從而引起讀者強烈的尋根問底的興趣。所謂“解懸” 也叫“釋懸”,就是指在情節(jié)發(fā)展的特定階段,通過矛盾的解決,揭示事情原委和人物命運的結(jié)局,使讀者的期待心理得以滿足。如《驛路梨花》,當(dāng)人們正為露宿而發(fā)愁時出現(xiàn)了一間神秘的小屋,小屋的主人是誰呢?猜想間,有人來了,但也不是屋子主人,那小屋子的主人是誰呢?終于知道了小屋是解放軍蓋的,但為什么要蓋這間小屋呢?這樣“設(shè)懸——釋懸——帶出新懸念”,環(huán)環(huán)相扣、層層遞進,使文章韻味無窮。
天上有明月,年年照相思。她夜夜沉醉在夢中。夢把空間縮短了,夢把時間凝固了,夢把世界凈化了。夢中沒有污穢,沒有嘈雜,沒有邪惡;夢中沒有分離,沒有創(chuàng)傷,沒有痛苦;夢中只有柔和的月色,只有溫馨的愛;夢使她永遠(yuǎn)年輕,使她不原醒來。…………啊,那個世界,是為天下最真最善最美的心靈準(zhǔn)備的,藝術(shù)家懷著虔誠的情感,用充滿魔力的琴弦,在人們的心中筑起了一座不朽的天堂,它像天地一樣長久,日月一樣永恒!新月微微地閉著眼睛,她清清楚楚地看到了那座天堂,真真切切地觸到了那座天堂,冰凌砌成墻壁,白云鋪成房頂,霧靄織成紗幔,星星串成明燈;在那里,她的頭發(fā)像沐浴之后那樣清爽柔軟,隨風(fēng)飄拂,她的肌膚像披著月光那樣清涼潤滑,她的那顆心啊,像浸潤著蒙蒙細(xì)雨的花蕾,掛著晶瑩的露珠,自由地呼吸……她沉醉在那個一塵不染的美好的境界,如歌如詩,如夢如幻,如云如月,如水如煙……
(學(xué)生展開暢敘所談,言之有理即可。)歸納:以上因素在人物語言表達中是綜合體現(xiàn)的,所以在寫作時必須周密思考,使人物語言體現(xiàn)的人物性格更豐富,更有立體感。(3)行動描寫矛盾先生曾說:“人物性格必須通過行動來表現(xiàn)?!蔽覀冊趯懽魑臅r,應(yīng)當(dāng)注意描寫最能揭示人物本身的獨特性格的,最合乎人物地位,身份的動作,從而使人物形象更生動。行動描寫要注意哪些方面?A、選擇具有代表性,最能表現(xiàn)人物性格的行動來寫。如《守財奴》中的老葛朗臺的性格特點。B、要善于選擇具有表現(xiàn)力的動詞,把人物的行動準(zhǔn)確傳神地描寫出來。(4)側(cè)面描寫寫作不僅可以從正面對人物加以刻畫,也可以通過周圍各種不同人物的眼看,嘴講等方式,從側(cè)面起到烘托某個特定人物的作用。(請學(xué)生欣賞片段《茶花女》,《紅樓夢》,教師歸納。)