說教材本文是部編版八年級(jí)語文下冊第五單元的第二篇課文,同時(shí)也是一篇游記。作者生動(dòng)的寫出了格拉丹東雪山的壯美,表現(xiàn)了長江源頭的神異不凡。說學(xué)情學(xué)生雖然聽說過雪山,但親眼見過雪山的同學(xué)比較少。本課從紀(jì)錄片《再說長江》入手,再現(xiàn)長江的源頭,揭開格拉丹東雪山的神秘面紗,激發(fā)了學(xué)生求知和探索的學(xué)習(xí)欲望。教學(xué)目標(biāo)1.準(zhǔn)確認(rèn)讀并理解重點(diǎn)字詞。2.了解游記的特點(diǎn),把握作者的游蹤、寫景的角度、寫景的方法,體會(huì)格拉丹冬冰塔林的特點(diǎn)3.揣摩品味語言,欣賞、積累精彩語句。教學(xué)建議【教學(xué)方法】1.朗讀法。2.品味點(diǎn)撥法。3.合作探究法?!菊n時(shí)安排】2課時(shí)一、教學(xué)導(dǎo)入長江,她以自己的源遠(yuǎn)流長、磅礴大氣和她的風(fēng)光萬千,為我們構(gòu)筑了永恒的大江之美,啟發(fā)著一代又一代華夏兒女的激情與靈感,贏得了世人發(fā)自肺腑的贊美和感嘆。今天我們來學(xué)習(xí)《在長江源頭各拉丹冬》這篇文章,欣賞長江的源頭各拉丹冬這片雪域高原的壯美景色。
Teaching Goal:1. General aims:Talk about recent past events2. Particular aims:A. Language Focus.Talk about recent past events and think of the past events.B. Language goalsHow was….?It was …What did …do over the weekend?C. Language structures:(1). How was your weekend? I was great. Pay attention to no form.(2). What did you do over the weekend? I played soccer. We went to the beach.D. Useful words and phrases:Words: was, did, went, beach, over, project, test, wasn’t, false, number, geography, spend, week, most, mixture, their, had, little, cook, read, saw, change, everyone, sit, sat, no, anythingPhrases: did one’s homework, played soccer, cleaned my room, went to the beach, played tennis, went to the movies, on Saturday morning, over the weekend, cook … for, what about, do some reading, have a party, talk show, go shoppingE. Grammar language:Present simple past tenseRegular and irregular verbsF. Learning strategies:Tour and holidaysG. Interdiscipinary:H. Emotion and manner:Teaching time: 5 periodsTeaching procedures:Period One教學(xué)步驟、時(shí)間 教師活動(dòng) 學(xué)生活動(dòng) 媒體應(yīng)用Step 1Free talk 3’ Ask some questions like:Who’s on duty today?What’s the weather like? Answer and talk about something.讓同學(xué)們回答下列問題1. Do you like weekend? (Let some students answer)It takes them three minutes to talk about the question.2. Why do you like weekend? (let the students answer) Most of the students like the weekend此時(shí)教師用漢語問:“在周末期間問你干了什么?這句話用英語這么回答?Let the students guess.At last the teacher give them right answer3. What did you do over the weekend?(板書、學(xué)習(xí))
Period 2 (3a----Section B 2c)Preview(Pre-task): Key points: What laAdd another information about their pen pals----their language on the cardnguage does she/he speak?She/He speaks....Does she/he have any brothers and sisters? Does she/he speak English?Preview(Pre-task): Add another information about their pen pals----their language on the cardKey points: What language does she/he speak?She/He speaks....Does she/he have any brothers and sisters? Does she/he speak English?Step 1 Revision1.Revisionand dictation of the new words 2.Revise the drills they learned yesterday.(by pairwork and grammar exercise)Step 2 Leading-inT has a conversation with one student. The conversation is following:---Do you have a pen pal?---Yes, I do.---What's your pen pal's name? ---His/Her name is....---Where is your pen pal from? ---He/She is from...---Where does he/she live? ---He/She lives in....---What language does he/she speak?He/She speaks...Write the new words on the Bb. They are following: EnglishChineseJapaneseFrenchStep 3 LearnLearn the new words with the whole class.Finish 3a with the students3b Pairwork T still does an example with one student Then the Ss practise in pairs. The example is following:--Curry Muray is my pen pal. He is from the United States.---What language does he speak?
Don’t fight. =You can’t fight. (板書,教讀)教師把這些句子板書在黑板上,并請學(xué)生大聲整齊地讀祈使句和“can’t”句型,并讓學(xué)生注意兩種句型表達(dá)形式的不同和轉(zhuǎn)換,“Don’t …=You can’t…”;并對學(xué)生說:These are our school rules. (板書,教讀) You can’t break the school rules. Don’t break the school rules.(板書,教讀)步驟3 :Practicea. T: Now, each of the students is breaking one of these rules.Please finish 1a.學(xué)生看圖,完成1a的內(nèi)容,檢查答案并大聲朗讀校規(guī)。b. 聽錄音,完成1b,選出四位學(xué)生都違反了哪條校規(guī);聽之前,學(xué)生要讀會(huì)英文名。c. 請兩位學(xué)生朗讀1c部分的句型;要求學(xué)生兩人一組對話表演,SA扮演外校轉(zhuǎn)來新生,SB告知本校校規(guī)。(學(xué)生可經(jīng)過討論,多說出他們想到的校規(guī),不必只限于書上;教師應(yīng)給予幫助)2) 第二課時(shí)(2a~4)步驟1 :warming up of revisionT: What are the rules at your school?學(xué)生使用“can”或祈使句表達(dá)各條校規(guī);其中老師可引出“eat in the cafeteria outside”的表達(dá)。步驟2 :Practicea.T: Christina is an exchange student. She doesn’t know the rules. Let’s listen, what activities they’re talking about?學(xué)生聽第一遍時(shí),完成2a;第二遍時(shí),完成2b;b. 請學(xué)生領(lǐng)讀2c部分,看著2a完成的表格,理解2c活動(dòng)的要求;分成小組針對2a進(jìn)行問答;
三、教學(xué)建議第一課時(shí):1. Lead in (Vocabulary)A) Before class, teacher should collect some pictures of working places. For example: Bank, TV Station, Restaurant, Police Station, Hospital ...B) In class, show students the pictures (PowerPoint, OHP). Ask students to tell the name of the working places and the name of the jobs.Shop assistant, doctor, actor, reporter, police office, waiter, bank clerk, studentC) Do exercise 1a and 3a.2. Bingo GameAsk groups of students to make up pairs of cards with a job on one and the related workplace on the other. For example, waiter / restaurant, teacher / school, doctor / hospital. Encourage students to use both the job / workplace combinations in the book and the ones that students came up during class discussions. Be sure they have twice as many sets of cards as there are students in the group. They can make two sets of cards for a single job / workplace, if necessary. Then have each group mix up its set of cards and hand their cards out in random order. Each time a student gets a pair of cards that match, he or she can lay these cards down. The goal is to have no cards in your hand at the end.3. Task OneA) Ask students to work in pairs and ask the partner what does he / she want to be in the future.e. g. :What do you / does he / does she want to be?I want to be a.Why?Because it's (adj).B) Vocabulary: Section B, 1a4. Homework 1.2.
1 Each group choose one place to describe and what you are doing in it Choose one place, and describe what they are doing 2 Move around the room and give suggestions Talk about it and write it down 3 Ask one to show their works and act it Choose one of each group to make a report 4 Evaluate the best group and the best reporter Choose the best one Homework Ask your friends their ideal place and write about it教學(xué)反思:新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)生在課堂中的主體地位,在綜合課中他們的主體地位就更加突出。在各個(gè)活動(dòng)中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì),從而產(chǎn)生對英語的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來輔助教學(xué),效果更好。同時(shí)讓了解其他國家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知知識(shí),實(shí)現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。教案點(diǎn)評:采用任務(wù)型教學(xué)模式,在各個(gè)活動(dòng)中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì),從而產(chǎn)生對英語的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來輔助教學(xué),效果更好。讓了解其他國家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知識(shí),實(shí)現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。
單元整體說明(一)單元教材分析本單元的核心話題是描述動(dòng)物和表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好,以及句式why do you like…? Because…。這也是本單元的教學(xué)重點(diǎn)。通過本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生應(yīng)能較流利地運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯和句型描述動(dòng)物,表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好。(二)單元知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)1.詞匯動(dòng)物名稱 tiger, elephant, koala, dolphin, etc.詞匯描述性形容詞: smart, cute, ugly, clever, shy, etc.國家名: Australia, South Africa2.句型Why do you like koala hears? Because they are cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(三)單元整體目標(biāo)1.Master the vocabulary2.Master and use: Why do you like koalas? Because they am cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(四)單元教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)一覽(五)單元學(xué)情分析學(xué)生此前已經(jīng)學(xué)過由why, where, what 引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問句句型,具有了學(xué)習(xí)本單元知識(shí)的認(rèn)知前提。形形色色的動(dòng)物能激發(fā)學(xué)生的好奇心,產(chǎn)生了解它們的欲望,這有利于本單元知識(shí)的教學(xué)和學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣的培養(yǎng)。
說明:在幫Li Lei提建議的同時(shí),教育學(xué)生如何學(xué)好英語。第三課時(shí)教學(xué)目標(biāo)1. 語言目標(biāo):a) 詞匯: Original, in style, haircut, the same as.b) 語言結(jié)構(gòu):My friend wears the same clothes and has the same haircut as I do.2. 能力目標(biāo):大多數(shù)學(xué)生能夠談?wù)撟约合矚g哪種服裝,提高查找信息的能力。3. 情感目標(biāo):學(xué)會(huì)如何與朋友相處,要有自己對時(shí)尚的看法。教學(xué)重點(diǎn)掌握一些重要詞匯。教學(xué)難點(diǎn)學(xué)會(huì)談?wù)搯栴},并能提出書面建議?!艚虒W(xué)突破首先針對Erin的問題,提出個(gè)人的建議,模仿2c部分的對話展開雙人交際Pair-work;聽老師誦讀3a部分的信件,并找出LEFT OUT的問題所在;學(xué)生完成3b部分的內(nèi)容,給Left Out提出書面的建議;學(xué)以口頭形式提出自己目前存在的某個(gè)問題,講給大家聽,讓同學(xué)們給自己提出一個(gè)建議,并作筆錄;學(xué)生兩、三個(gè)人分成一組,隨意性地進(jìn)行口語交際,談?wù)揚(yáng)14的第4部分的某個(gè)問題,相互交換意見。
區(qū)分賓語從句、定于從句和狀語從句賓語從句和狀語從句,都叫做主從復(fù)合句。賓語從句主要是中考必考的,是初中階段必掌握的從句,賓語從句主要是掌握三要素,所謂賓語從句,就是賓語在主從復(fù)合句當(dāng)中充當(dāng)賓語的一個(gè)句子,叫做賓語從句。主句的謂語動(dòng)詞是及物動(dòng)詞,后面如果是詞或者是短語的話,是簡單句,如果是句子的話,肯定是賓語從句。I know that he good at English.就是賓語從句,三要素,一要素是要注意連詞,連詞一共學(xué)了三類連詞,一類連詞是that口語當(dāng)中可以省略,就像剛才說的那一句,I hear he is good at English.還有疑問代詞、疑問副詞,how where when,疑問代詞、疑問副詞。還有一類連詞weather是否的意思,不是狀語從句當(dāng)中的如果,這一定要和如果區(qū)分開,這是是否。I don't know if he interested at English。賓語從句要注意if是連詞。第二要素是語序,要用陳述舉語序。比如說你家有幾口人,我們都說How many people are there in you family?但是這是簡單句,一旦說成賓語從句,你可以告訴我你家有幾口人嗎?Could you tell me how many people there are in you family ?
"Hello! Welcome to English class! Introduce yourself. Meet your new classmates." That's what the teacher says. What do you say? "Oh no!" It can be difficult talking to new people. But it can be fun, and you can make friends. How do you do it? Make small talk. Small talk is polite conversation. "Wang Nan is a great pingpang player, isn't she?" "I'd love to meet her, wouldn't you?" "It's been raining a lot, hasn't it?" Tag questions are a form of polite speech. To make small talk successfully, you should know how to make them. You should also know what topics to talk about. Try to learn this unit carefully. The next time you're in English class, you'll find out. Making small talk's easy, isn't it? (“你好!歡迎你!請做一下自我介紹。認(rèn)識(shí)一下你的新同學(xué)?!蓖ǔT谡n上老師會(huì)這樣說。你會(huì)說什么呢?“噢,不!”與陌生人談話太困難了。但是這也很有意思,并且你還能交到朋友。你該怎么做呢?閑聊。閑聊指得是禮貌的對話?!巴蹰且粋€(gè)很棒的乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員,不是嗎?”“我希望自己能認(rèn)識(shí)她,你呢?“今年的雨水很多,不是嗎?”反意疑問句是一種禮貌用語。為了使得談話成功,你應(yīng)該知道怎樣去進(jìn)行閑聊。你還應(yīng)該知道與不同的人該談?wù)撌裁礃拥脑掝}。認(rèn)真的學(xué)習(xí)這個(gè)單元吧,下次在英語課上,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)與大家展開談話是一件很容易的事情,不信我們來試試。)
This activity introduces some new vocabulary and provide oral practice using the target language.Task 1 . Ask four students to stand in front of the class, and the teacher asks them the following questions as a reporter.1.What are you going to do when you grow up?2.What are you going to do next week?3.What are going to do after school?The students will give different answers, then ask a good student to report what they said.I am going to e a doctor.What did she say?----------She said she was going to be a doctor.I am going to have a party on Friday night.What did he say?-------He said he was going to have a party on Friday night.I am going to do my homework.What did she say ?------ She said she was going to do her homework.I am going home after school.What did she say?-----She said she was going home after school.Say In this unit we are going to learn to use words like to report what someone said.Task 2. Read the instructions. Then ask a student to read the four questions. And write the words on the Bb. Explain what soap opera is.Task 3. Ask the students to Look at the pictures, point out the TV screens in the picture. Ask one girl to read what Marcia said.What did Marcia say? She said She said she was having a surprise party for Lana on Friday night. Repeat the other pictures in the same way.Activity3. Listen and number the pictures in activity 1a.
Step Ⅱ Show the new words on the screen and teach the new words. Read the new words to students and ask them to repeat.Step Ⅲ 3aThis activity introduces new vocabulary and provides reading practice using the target language.In this activity first look at the four pictures.T: What can you see in the pictures?Ss: Four snow globes.T: Right. There are four snow globes in the pictures. And what are they?Ss: They are a monster, two polar bears, two penguins and a birthday cake.Write these words on the blackboard: snow globe; monster; polar bear; penguin and birthday cake. Read them to the class and ask students to repeat each one. Make sure students understand each word.Use a computer to show the E-mail message on the screen and read the message to students.Get students to read the e-mail on their own, and then draw lines connecting each snow globe and its description.Correct the answers.AnswersA line should connect each snow globe picture with the words that describe it in the letter.Step Ⅳ 3bThis activity provides writing practice using the target language.First review Activity 2a on Page 47.Then ask students to complete the message according to Activity 2a.Some partial sentences are given to students. Write about one person's collection.When students work, walk around the room checking the progress and offering help as needed.When they finish, ask some students to read their messages to the class.
(一).知識(shí)方面: 1.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生能運(yùn)用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)來描述、談?wù)撨^去某個(gè)時(shí)間正在發(fā)生的事情或動(dòng)作的意識(shí)和能力,能就過去某個(gè)時(shí)間正在發(fā)生的動(dòng)作做出正確的描述。 2.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的想象力和角色扮演的合作能力。 3.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生講述過去發(fā)生的事情經(jīng)過的能力。能正確運(yùn)用一般過去時(shí)來講述故事。 (二).技能方面: 1.本單元的語言目標(biāo)是Talk about past events and tell a story(談?wù)撨^去的時(shí)間和講述一個(gè)故事),圍繞這一目標(biāo),要涉及句型: What were you doing when the UFO arrived? ----I was sitting in the barber’s chair. The barber was cutting my hair. 因此必須學(xué)習(xí)standing、studying、cleaning、sleeping、cooking、making、eating、cutting、等表示地點(diǎn)的詞,以便為上述句型提供語言材料。2.學(xué)習(xí)過去進(jìn)行時(shí)的有關(guān)知識(shí)。Was/were+現(xiàn)在分詞,是該時(shí)態(tài)的表達(dá)式。 3.在學(xué)習(xí)過程中,要區(qū)分The boy was walking down the street when the UFO landed.和While the boy was walking down the street, the UFO landed.這兩種由when和while引導(dǎo)的狀語從句的句型結(jié)構(gòu)。注意它們的不同。
本單元主要圍繞著有關(guān)瀕臨滅絕的動(dòng)物這一話題,學(xué)習(xí)了應(yīng)該怎樣保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境,以及就某一問題展開辯論。目標(biāo)提示語言目標(biāo)能夠運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí),就某一問題展開辯論。認(rèn)知目標(biāo)1、復(fù)習(xí)一些語法:現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、用used to 表示一般過去時(shí)、現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)、一般過去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。2、學(xué)會(huì)表達(dá)同意和不同意。3、學(xué)會(huì)以下基本句型:We’re trying to save the manatees.Manatees eat about 100 pounds of food a day.There used to be a lot of manatees.In 1972,it was discovered that they were endangered.Some of the swamps have become polluted.情感目標(biāo)了解一些瀕臨滅絕的動(dòng)物的生活習(xí)性和瀕臨滅絕的原因,教育學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。教學(xué)提示充分利用多媒體等教學(xué)設(shè)備,創(chuàng)設(shè)與本課話題相關(guān)的情境,如各種不同種類的動(dòng)物、動(dòng)物園以及有關(guān)環(huán)境的畫畫等等。圍繞著本單元的教學(xué)目標(biāo),設(shè)計(jì)一些貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際的教學(xué)任務(wù),如讓學(xué)生談?wù)撟约鹤钕矚g的動(dòng)物,如何拯救瀕危動(dòng)物,如何保護(hù)環(huán)境等等。讓學(xué)生根據(jù)所學(xué)知識(shí),就動(dòng)物園是否對動(dòng)物有利以及其他的話題進(jìn)行辯論。
(一)、導(dǎo)入 師:今天,我們來學(xué)習(xí)課文《全神貫注》。誰回憶一下我們學(xué)習(xí)略讀課文的方法?! ∩?、自讀課文,掃清字、詞障礙?! ?、再讀課文,理清文章脈絡(luò)。 3、按照閱讀提示研讀課文。 4、小組交流、討論。 5、大組匯報(bào) ?。ǘ凑諏W(xué)習(xí)方法,進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)?! 。ㄈ?、(以小組為單位)匯報(bào)學(xué)習(xí)情況?! ?、小組1:讀課文,并講解不理解的詞義。 提醒易讀錯(cuò)的字音和易寫錯(cuò)的生字。
1.想想課文講了一件什么事?“魚游到了紙上”的意思是什么?(“我”去玉泉觀魚,認(rèn)識(shí)了一位殘疾青年,他每個(gè)星期天都來這里畫金魚?!棒~游到了紙上”意思是說這位青年畫的金魚十分形象生動(dòng),像活的那樣在紙上游動(dòng)。學(xué)生可以從整體感知課文內(nèi)容,只要大致說出課文講了一件什么事就行了。)2.你是怎么知道這位青年是聾啞人?找出課文中的有關(guān)語句。(“從來不說一句話”“沒有任何反應(yīng)”,和他胸前佩戴的“福利工廠”的廠徽,可以看出他是一位聾啞青年。如果是會(huì)說話的人,不可能從來不說一句話;如果是聽得見的人,那么在眾人的贊嘆、議論聲中,不可能“沒有任何反應(yīng)”;“福利工廠”一般是專為殘疾人開辦的工廠。)
(二)提問:夜校的學(xué)習(xí)條件怎樣?雨來在夜校里受到什么教育?默讀第二段。指導(dǎo)朗讀:“我們是中國人,我們愛自己的祖國?!薄拔覀儭恰袊?,我們——愛——自己的——祖國。”討論段意和小標(biāo)題。(段意:雨來上夜校,受到愛國主義教育。)(小標(biāo)題:“雨來上夜校。”)(三)學(xué)習(xí)第三段。默讀課文,提問:這段主要說了幾層意思?學(xué)生默讀課文,小組交流,展示如下:(兩層意思:第一層從“有一天”至“只從街上傳來一兩聲狗叫”,主要寫鬼子開始掃蕩了;第二層從“第二天”至這段結(jié)束,主要寫雨來為掩護(hù)交通員李大叔,被鬼子捆綁起來了。)指導(dǎo)朗讀第二層。重點(diǎn)朗讀:“他抬頭一看,是李大叔。”“咦!這是什么時(shí)候挖的洞呢?”“把缸搬回原地方。你就快到別的院里去,對誰也不許說?!庇懻摱我夂托?biāo)題。段意:(雨來為掩護(hù)交通員李大叔,被鬼子捆綁起來了。)(小標(biāo)題:“雨來掩護(hù)李大叔”。)
我們在湖邊走著,在不高的山上走著。四周的風(fēng)物秀雋異常。滿盈盈的湖水一直溢拍到腳邊,卻又溫柔地退回去了,像慈母撫拍著將睡未睡的嬰兒似的,它輕輕地?fù)崤闹?。水里的碎瓷片清晰可見。小小的魚兒,還有頑健的小蝦兒,都在眼前游來蹦去。登上了山巔,可望見更遠(yuǎn)的太湖?!嵳耔I《石湖》(生根據(jù)師展示的原文,參考、揣摩名家筆下抒情方式的運(yùn)用,體會(huì)抒情描寫中以情動(dòng)人的魅力)2.寫一段話,抒發(fā)某種情感,如幸福、喜悅、痛苦、憂傷、渴望等。200字左右。提示:(1)可以描寫場面、事物,也可以敘述故事;(2)情感的抒發(fā)要有內(nèi)容,有憑借;(3)根據(jù)內(nèi)容特點(diǎn)和表達(dá)需要,選擇合適的抒情方式。(生自由習(xí)作后,小組內(nèi)互評、修改)師小結(jié):情貴在真,要注意抒發(fā)自己的真情實(shí)感。朱光潛曾說過:“作者自己如果沒有感動(dòng),就絕對不能使讀者感動(dòng)?!痹趯懽髦?,情感的抒發(fā)要自然,要水到渠成。
4.組織材料師:一篇游記作品,既要有“靈魂”“血肉”,還得有“筋骨”——材料安排。請大家運(yùn)用我們上節(jié)課學(xué)習(xí)的方法來組織材料。方法:(1)按照自己的游蹤或獨(dú)特體驗(yàn),安排寫作順序。(2)能突出參觀場所特征的要詳寫,其余的略寫或不寫。(3)豐富文章內(nèi)容:適當(dāng)加入敘事,引入一些典故、傳說、史料、評價(jià)或詩文名句。示例:(1)寫作順序:以作者的參觀路線為線索。(2)詳略安排:詳寫魯迅先生北京故居的工作室兼臥室,以突出魯迅簡樸、惜時(shí)的品質(zhì)和忘我工作的精神品質(zhì);詳寫陳列大廳是為了贊揚(yáng)先生的民族精神。其余的略寫。(3)引入內(nèi)容:引用古詩句“望崦嵫而勿迫,恐鵜之先鳴”,表現(xiàn)先生惜時(shí)的品質(zhì)。(生交流,師點(diǎn)評)預(yù)設(shè) (1)寫作順序:一樓的青銅器—二樓的陶器—三樓的古代畫作。
師小結(jié):《投訴母親》中,“我”想讓母親辭職享清福,盡人子之孝心。沒料到通往目標(biāo)的路上障礙重重,解決一個(gè)障礙,又有一個(gè)新的障礙橫在眼前,就這樣一個(gè)個(gè)障礙將故事的矛盾沖突推向高潮。從讓母親辭職到放棄計(jì)劃,順從母親,讓故事有了戲劇性的收尾。這是運(yùn)用了巧設(shè)障礙法讓情節(jié)跌宕起伏?!跺e(cuò)誤的手套》中,母親說“給孩子買副手套”,本意是讓父親給小外孫買手套,父親卻給女兒買了副手套,作者巧用語言的模糊性,使故事一波三折、情真意切。這是運(yùn)用了巧設(shè)誤會(huì)法讓情節(jié)跌宕起伏。技法3:用巧設(shè)障礙法、巧設(shè)誤會(huì)法寫“情節(jié)曲折的故事”。4.歸納整合,明確技法師:共賞“好故事”,我們發(fā)現(xiàn)了三個(gè)技法。技法1:用“以小見大”的手法寫“主題深刻的故事”。技法2:用對比手法寫“人物鮮明的故事”。(1)通過人物在不同情境中的對比來突出人物性格特點(diǎn)。(2)通過人物之間的差異對比來突出人物特征。技法3:用巧設(shè)障礙法、巧設(shè)誤會(huì)法寫“情節(jié)曲折的故事”。