這個地區(qū)有著深厚的傳統(tǒng)。既學(xué)既練:為了讓更多的外國游客了解中國文化,欣賞中國美麗的自然風(fēng)光,感受中國發(fā)生的巨大變化,某外文雜志社將出版一本英語小冊子來介紹中國的旅游景點(diǎn)。該雜志社邀請你為該小冊子寫一篇英語短文來介紹杭州,內(nèi)容包括:1.杭州的位置(中國東南部)、面積(16 000多平方公里)及歷史(2 200多年)等;2.杭州的旅游特色(自然風(fēng)景、傳統(tǒng)文化、特色小吃等);3.希望更多的游客來杭州參觀。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。Located in the southeast of China, Hangzhou is a beautiful city.Dating back more than 2,200 years, Hangzhou covers an area of more than 16,000 square kilometers.In Hangzhou, you can visit the West Lake, whose scenery is fascinating.In addition, you can’t miss its cultural relics and historical sites, from which you will learn more about excellent Chinese traditional culture and traditions.In Hangzhou, the special snacks are famous and visitors from different parts of the world think highly of them.As a tourist attraction, Hangzhou attracts a large number of visitors from home and abroad every year.Once you come to China, Hangzhou is a scenic spot you can’t miss.
Step1:自主探究。1.(教材P52)Born(bear) in the USA on 2 January 1970, Whitacre began studying music at the University of Nevada in 1988.2.(教材P52) Moved(move) by this music, he said, “It was like seeing color for the first time.”3.(教材P56)I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged(discourage).4.(教材P58)Encouraged(encourage) by this first performance and the positive reaction of the audience, I have continued to play the piano and enjoy it more every day.Step2:語法要點(diǎn)精析。用法1:過去分詞作表語1).過去分詞可放在連系動詞be, get, feel, remain, seem, look, become等之后作表語,表示主語所處的狀態(tài)Tom was astonished to see a snake moving across the floor.湯姆很驚訝地看到一條蛇正爬過地板。Finally the baby felt tired of playing with those toys.終于嬰兒厭倦了玩那些玩具。注意:1).過去分詞作表語時與被動語態(tài)的區(qū)別過去分詞作表語時,強(qiáng)調(diào)主語所處的狀態(tài);而動詞的被動語態(tài)表示主語是動作的承受者,強(qiáng)調(diào)動作。The library is now closed.(狀態(tài))圖書館現(xiàn)在關(guān)閉了。The cup was broken by my little sister yesterday.(動作)昨天我妹妹把杯子打碎了。2)感覺類及物動詞的現(xiàn)在分詞與過去分詞作表語的區(qū)別過去分詞作表語多表示人自身的感受或事物自身的狀態(tài),常譯作“感到……的”;現(xiàn)在分詞多表示事物具有的特性,常譯作“令人……的”。
This section focuses on "learning about experiencing music Online". This virtual choir is a new form of music performance. Members from all over the world don't need to love to come to a place. Instead, they use the new technology to model the various parts and wonderful virtual harmony group of music in the family. Students need to understand the main meaning of each paragraph. Finding topic sentences is an important way to understand the general idea of a paragraph. After the topic sentence, it is usually the detail sentence that supports and explains the topic sentence. Some paragraphs have obvious subject sentences, for example, the first sentence of the second paragraph is the subject sentence of the paragraph, and the following sentenceStudents need to pay attention to the topic sentences and key sentences, and then pay attention to how the sentences after the meaning explain, explain and support the topic sentences or key sentences before.1.Guide students to learn about experiencing music online2.Guide students to scan and circle the information in the text.3.Guide students to find the numbers and dates to fill in the timeline.4.Guide students to learn more about music by completing the sentences with the correct forms of the words and phrases. And then make a mind map about the outline of the passage.1. Guide students to pay attention to reading strategies, such as prediction, self-questioning and scanning.2. Help students sort out the main meaning of each paragraph and understand the narrative characteristics of "timeline” in illustrative style.3. Lead students to understand the changes that have been caused by the Internet.
【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】以“新科技是一把雙刃劍”為主題開展討論活動。這個話題比較大,所以給了一定的限制,首先需要以智能家居為例來闡述科技發(fā)展對未來生活產(chǎn)生的影響,然后列舉其優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn),最后就以上現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn)。這個活動是對整個文本的創(chuàng)意性總結(jié)與意義的升華,留給學(xué)生一定的想象空間,學(xué)生借此機(jī)會可以運(yùn)用文本內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá)自己對科技發(fā)展的看法和態(tài)度。Assignments:1. Finish Exercise 4 on Page 15 of the textbook.A smart home is one that integrated computers into the structure of the building itself. In this way, many of the things that we now do ourselves become automatic. For example, the smart home could control the air conditioning and lights so that you would no longer have to turn switches on and off, and so that your home would be more energy-efficient. The smart home could also monitor itself to make sure that everything is working as it should, and send you warnings if there is a problem. Such smart homes could even be programmed to detect your health problems, and then give you reasonable advice as to the food you should eat or if you should see a doctor. So, in a sense, smart homes will lead us to living smarter lives.2.Create a smart function for your home, and share your creation in the next period.
Activity 4: Figuring out the structure and the writing purpose 本活動為實(shí)現(xiàn)課時目標(biāo)2。 1.Read Paragraph 6 and think about its main idea and the writer’s writing purpose. Q1: If you were the author, how would you end your article? “For young people, there is plenty of time to change bad habits. However, there is no “magic pill” or delete button that will help you; you have to think about your bad habits and decide on some changes. You have the power to build a happy and healthy life full of good habits!” Q2: What is Paragraph 6 mainly about? (Possible answer: to appeal to young people including teenagers to change bad habits and live a happy and healthy life.) 2.Think about the writer’s writing purpose and share opinions. Q1: What is the writing purpose? Work in pairs and figure it out. (Possible answer: On the one hand, the passage is written to help teenagers change their bad habits and live a healthy lifestyle. On the other hand, it provides us with a scientific way to identify and analyse our problems objectively, thus strengthening our resolve to tackle the seemingly common yet tough problems in our lives.) 【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】 步驟1旨在預(yù)測和驗(yàn)證文章最后一段主要內(nèi)容,梳理完整的語篇結(jié)構(gòu),步驟2旨在思考和討論作者的寫作目的。教師也可根據(jù)學(xué)生課堂反應(yīng)情況融入對語篇人稱多次轉(zhuǎn)換的思考。
本活動旨在落實(shí)課時目標(biāo)3。 The Student Union is looking for three students for a 3-week voluntary program in Guizhou province. The volunteers have got to be high school students, with a persevering personality and experiences in overcoming adversity. The volunteers need to stay, eat and teach with 20 pupils in a small school up on the hill of a village. There are no facilities but desks and a blackboard in the school. And there is no take-away food to be bought anywhere; the only way to feed yourself is to cook. You’re interested in applying. Write your application letter introducing what adversity you have ever overcome and how persevering you are as well as what you want to do when at work. Dear Student Union,【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】此任務(wù)旨在遷移一、二課時所學(xué),解決實(shí)際問題。學(xué)生對比自己經(jīng)歷過的挑戰(zhàn)或挫折,寫信給學(xué)生會申請前往貴州擔(dān)任短期支教教師,把個人以前是怎么戰(zhàn)勝挫折的經(jīng)過書寫出來。結(jié)合所學(xué),遷移創(chuàng)新,分析解決自身實(shí)際問題,在真實(shí)情境中學(xué)生通過仿寫進(jìn)行主題語言的精確輸出。完成任務(wù)的過程中,能較多地使用已學(xué)語言、內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)和寫作手法來描述自己面對挫折的處理方式、態(tài)度和應(yīng)有的品質(zhì),近一步激發(fā)學(xué)生樹立正確的價(jià)值觀,學(xué)會逆境出人才,堅(jiān)忍不拔,從容不迫,又做到謙讓、分享和合作。課后學(xué)生修正習(xí)作,再次提交。
本單元閱讀文本介紹了幾種簡單的英語詩歌形式,旨在讓學(xué)生能理解和欣賞英語詩歌的美,包括形式美、內(nèi)容美、意義美,培養(yǎng)審美情趣,并從作品的意義美中獲得積極的人生態(tài)度和價(jià)值觀念啟示。 該文本是一則典型的說明性文本,用簡單易懂的語言向英語詩歌的初學(xué)者們介紹了五種比較簡單的英語詩歌形式。文題“A Few Simple Forms of English Poems”是整個文本的核心話題。正文內(nèi)容共七段,按“總—分—總”建構(gòu)。第一段為總起段,概述了英語詩歌的創(chuàng)作原因以及主要特點(diǎn),涉及了形式、內(nèi)容、意義等方面賞析英語詩歌的幾個主要維度;第二段至第六段分別介紹了童謠、清單詩、五行詩、俳句和唐詩五種英語詩歌形式;第七段收尾,鼓勵讀者嘗試英語詩歌創(chuàng)作。 在進(jìn)行文本教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)時,要引導(dǎo)學(xué)生梳理關(guān)于與詩歌要素和詩歌賞析有關(guān)的話題類語言,既包括format、rhythm、subject、image等名詞,也包括have a strong rhythm、be made up of、contain、consist of、convey這樣的動詞和動詞短語。
幫助學(xué)生通過討論與對主題的提升,反思自己的旅游方式,以便做出更優(yōu)化的安排,在今后的旅程中有更多的收益。 Activity 2: Further discussion of the 6 elements above and supplement of more background knowledge 本活動為實(shí)現(xiàn)課時教學(xué)目標(biāo)2。 1.Target Q: The writer’s clear target of traveling, meeting the people and experiencing the culture, is closely related to his major in social studies. Then what is social studies? Social studies is a part of a school or college curriculum concerned with the study of social relationships and the functioning of society and usually made up of courses in history, government, economics, civics, sociology, geography, and anthropology. (Dictionary by Merriam-Webster) Reflection: When you go out to travel, what targets do you usually have in mind? 2.Research Q: Suppose you are traveling to Hangzhou during the school holidays, how will you do research on the city? (surf the internet, read books or travel brochures, consult friends, ...) What information will you be interested to know? (location, iconic sites, local cuisines, interesting customs, shopping malls ...) 3.Abandonment To make the most of time, we have to learn to abandon so that we can accomplish our plan. What will you be interested in doing if you go to Hangzhou if you have a week’s time? What if you only have 2 days? 4~5. Venturing & Experiencing Q: What did he venture to do during the trip? What new experiences did he have? In Sydney: attend his first open-air barbecue, enjoy many different but yummy meals In Catherine: observe the life and customs of the aborigines appreciate their music & try the musical instruments: the didgeridoo
本活動旨在落實(shí)課時目標(biāo)3。 Think about the following questions and talk about your own attitude in pairs.Q1: As for this topic,what impresses you the most in the passage?Q2: What do you think of the future of China’s further exploration in sea? Are you in favor of the further exploration?Why or why not? 【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】該活動是一個完全開放性的活動,每個學(xué)生都會有不同的答案。運(yùn)用遷移所學(xué),自由口頭表達(dá)自己對海洋探索的態(tài)度。對于中國海洋探索的未來,每個人的想法是不一樣的,有樂觀,有擔(dān)憂,有認(rèn)為值得投入,也有認(rèn)為不值得付出太大代價(jià),這里給學(xué)生自由表達(dá)的空間只要學(xué)會有支撐自己觀點(diǎn)的事實(shí)就可以了,進(jìn)一步培養(yǎng)學(xué)生批判性思維和正確的價(jià)值觀。 Assignment: 此任務(wù)旨在遷移一、二課時所學(xué),培養(yǎng)學(xué)生辯證分析問題的能力。 Write about your idea of the future of China’s sea exploration. And add your attitude towards the effort China have made in sea exploration. You’re expected to use the language and the writing technique learnt in the passage.
【核心素養(yǎng)提升點(diǎn)】學(xué)會將抽象信息進(jìn)行可視化表達(dá),提高信息處理能力和分析、推理等高階思維品質(zhì);在跨文化交際中學(xué)會以國際視野接受和包容不同的文化。 5.Read Paragraph 2, draw a mind map and answer the questions. Q1:What did Jo learn about Tombe’s life? Q2:What kind of life do the natives lead? Read paragraph 2-5 and draw a mind-map. (Focus on accommodation, possession, diet and belief) 【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】引導(dǎo)學(xué)生利用思維導(dǎo)圖和問題鏈等形式來厘清當(dāng)?shù)厝说纳罘绞?,更好地處理和歸納信息 【核心素養(yǎng)提升點(diǎn)】提高信息處理能力、分析和歸納能力,包容異國文化、擴(kuò)展國際視野。 6.Read Paragraph 3 and answer the questions. Q1:What was Jo’s feeling upon arriving her own home? Q2:Why would she feel that way? Q3:Do you think “It was such a privilege to have spent a day with Tombe’s family”? 【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】通過提問,讓學(xué)生理解Jo的苦并快樂的心情,并通過對“It was such a privilege to have spent a day with Tombe’s family”這句話的理解,體驗(yàn)志愿者生活的偉大。 【核心素養(yǎng)提升點(diǎn)】學(xué)會對信息的綜合和歸納,從而理解作者所表達(dá)的觀點(diǎn)。 Activity4: Summarize the change of Jo's feelings
本單元閱讀文本向中學(xué)生推薦職業(yè)能力測試(Career Aptitude Test),旨在建議學(xué)生利用職業(yè)傾向測試來發(fā)現(xiàn)自己更感興趣、更有潛力的學(xué)習(xí)或職業(yè)方向,并規(guī)劃自己的未來職業(yè)。 本文采用了建議性文本,全篇從職業(yè)生涯的重要意義講起,針對中學(xué)生對職業(yè)規(guī)劃比較迷茫的現(xiàn)狀,提出了職業(yè)傾向測試這一建議。全文共七段,其中第一段和第二段為第一部分,其余五段為第二部分。第一部分論述職業(yè)的重要性和職業(yè)生涯規(guī)劃的最佳時間是在校期間,第二部分提出解決職業(yè)選擇困惑可以通過完成職業(yè)能力測試,介紹了不同種類的職業(yè)傾向測試,結(jié)合圖表詳細(xì)說明其中一種操作步驟,并提醒職業(yè)建議也基于學(xué)歷和經(jīng)驗(yàn),最后一段概括論述,建議學(xué)生通過職業(yè)能力測試這一有效的工具,找到自己真正熱愛的事物。 在文本教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)時,要幫助學(xué)生梳理有關(guān)職業(yè)的話題語言。閱讀策略層面,指導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過學(xué)習(xí)圖表和圖形,在有限的空間內(nèi)獲取廣泛信息,如閱讀圖表標(biāo)題,圖表上的標(biāo)簽,X軸Y軸上的數(shù)據(jù)所指。
中國的拱橋的歷史可追溯到東漢時期,至今已有一千八百多年。中國的拱橋別具一格,造型優(yōu)美,曲線圓潤,形式多樣,世界罕見。拱橋按照建筑材料分為石拱橋、磚拱橋和木拱橋,其中較為常見的是石拱橋。拱橋又分為單拱、雙拱、多拱,拱的多少根據(jù)河面的寬度而定。多拱橋一般正中間的拱較大,兩邊的拱略小。根據(jù)拱的形狀,又分五邊、半圓、尖拱、坦拱。橋面上鋪板,橋邊有欄桿。單孔拱橋的拱形呈拋物線的形狀,如北京頤和園的漢白玉石橋玉帶橋。多孔拱橋適于跨度較大的寬廣水面,常見的多為三、五、七孔,以奇數(shù)為多,偶數(shù)較少。當(dāng)多孔拱橋某個孔的主拱受荷時,能通過橋墩的變形或拱上結(jié)構(gòu)的作用把荷載由近及遠(yuǎn)地傳遞到其他孔主拱上去,這樣的拱橋稱為連續(xù)拱橋,簡稱“聯(lián)拱”。如建于唐代元和年間的古橋蘇州寶帶橋,橋下共有53個孔相連,橋孔之多,結(jié)構(gòu)之精巧,為中外建橋史上所罕見。
3.歸納主旨本文通過描寫范進(jìn)參加鄉(xiāng)試中了舉人一事,運(yùn)用夸張的手法刻畫了他為科舉考試喜極而瘋的形象,用岳丈在范進(jìn)中舉前后的極其鮮明的肢體動作和言語表情,以及中舉后鄰居對他的前呼后擁和鄉(xiāng)紳贈屋等行為,刻畫了一個趨炎附勢、熱衷仕途、好官名利祿的封建知識分子形象,并且譴責(zé)了世態(tài)炎涼的可恥的社會風(fēng)氣,對當(dāng)時的社會及其陰暗面進(jìn)行了辛辣的諷刺?!驹O(shè)計(jì)意圖】本板塊研讀品析了文本中的若干次要人物,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生理解次要人物的作用,體會本文側(cè)面烘托的寫法,揭示社會環(huán)境,點(diǎn)明范進(jìn)悲劇的必然性,進(jìn)一步挖掘本文的主旨,使學(xué)生理解文本深刻的現(xiàn)實(shí)意義。結(jié)束語:范進(jìn),一個讓人啼笑皆非的人物,他卑微可憐,熱衷科舉,丑態(tài)百出。文章塑造這個下層知識分子的典型形象,深刻揭露并辛辣地諷刺了封建科舉制度,揭露了封建科舉制度的腐朽及其對讀書人的腐蝕和毒害。如今,科舉制度早已被廢除,我們有著公平的人才選拔方式,希望同學(xué)們可以珍惜每一個機(jī)會,好好努力,實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想抱負(fù)?!景鍟O(shè)計(jì)】
(“節(jié)馬”:1841年1月7日,英國侵略者義律進(jìn)攻虎門,沙田炮臺副將陳連升率眾浴血奮戰(zhàn),壯烈犧牲。其馬“神駿”守護(hù)主人遺體,不屈敵之羈絆,不食敵之草料,不畏敵之鞭打刀刺,終不就范?!白驽驯蕖保鹤驽?,東晉名將,著名愛國將領(lǐng),曾率軍北伐,收復(fù)許多失地。此句大意為若要揚(yáng)眉吐氣,意氣風(fēng)發(fā),仍需祖逖的這種精神。)八、本文反映的就是香港回歸這一重大歷史事件本文是一篇新聞特寫。特寫性消息,也稱新聞速寫、新聞素描,要求用類似電影“特寫鏡頭”的手法來反映事實(shí),是作者深入新聞事件現(xiàn)場,采寫制作的一種新聞價(jià)值高、現(xiàn)場感較強(qiáng)、篇幅短小精粹的消息文體。特寫性消息側(cè)重于“再現(xiàn)”,往往采用文學(xué)手法,集中、突出地描述某一重大事件的發(fā)生現(xiàn)場,或某些重要和精彩的場面,生動、形象地將所報(bào)道的事實(shí)再現(xiàn)在讀者面前。
巴金在十年浩劫中的大致經(jīng)歷:放棄包弟并沒有換得保全一家人,1968年8月,巴金被關(guān)進(jìn)牛棚改造,隨后經(jīng)受了大字報(bào)、掛牌游街等形式的批斗。1970年,到農(nóng)村改造,掏大糞、喂豬、背稻草、種地……1972年,妻子蕭珊在飽受精神折磨后患上癌癥,病逝。巴金的兒子在勞動改造的過程中也飽受精神和肉體上的折磨,性格變得內(nèi)向抑郁,疾病纏身。此時,巴金69歲。巴金曾在《病中》一文寫道:“當(dāng)姚文元拿著棒子的時候,我給關(guān)在牛棚里除了唯唯諾諾之外,敢于做過什么事情?十年間我不過是一條含著眼淚等人宰割的牛?!毙〗Y(jié):(幻燈片12)社會是病態(tài)的社會,政治是高壓的政治,人性是扭曲的人性。十年文革,十年浩劫,給多少人留下了累累不可彌合的精神創(chuàng)傷。即使一條小狗,也可能擺脫不了“文革”無情的迫害,比如包弟,比如藝術(shù)家鄰居的小狗。
四、講讀第一段(10分鐘)1.抽生朗讀本段,注意生字詞讀音。2.講析本段譯釋由學(xué)生完成,師只作扼要補(bǔ)糾和簡要分析。分析內(nèi)容包括伏筆手法和語句深意,全段作用。3.讓學(xué)生齊讀全段。4.處理練習(xí)一之中的第1小題,要求學(xué)生試譯回答,然后指導(dǎo)學(xué)生背誦本段。五、講讀第二段(15分鐘)1.抽生朗讀本段,注意生字詞讀音。2.講析本段①重點(diǎn)講析三個文言詞“若”、“之”、“辭”的用法和人物對話。②字詞句的理解仍然注意發(fā)揮學(xué)生的能動性,讓他們完成為主,師糾補(bǔ)為輔。對要求掌握的三個文言詞的用法要板書列于黑板上,對話部分要讓學(xué)生試作語氣練習(xí)。③小結(jié)的內(nèi)容包括情節(jié)的曲折性、寫法的詳略和表達(dá)的特點(diǎn)。3.生齊讀本段,然后處理相關(guān)練習(xí)。
這兩章是對戰(zhàn)爭場面的描寫。寫的是戰(zhàn)車、戰(zhàn)馬、象弭、魚服以及士兵的勞累奔波、饑渴難當(dāng),通過這些具體生動的細(xì)節(jié)描寫來展現(xiàn)戰(zhàn)爭生活的圖景。而沒有寫戰(zhàn)場上的刀光劍影、廝打拼殺,但戰(zhàn)爭的殘酷已可想見。4“昔我往矣,楊柳依依。今我來思,雨雪霏霏”被視為情景交融的佳句。清人王夫之在論《詩經(jīng)·小雅·采薇》這兩句時說:“以樂景寫哀,以哀景寫樂,一倍增其哀樂?!闭?wù)勀愕目捶?。一以往昔之虛襯眼前之實(shí),以出征之樂襯內(nèi)心之思親之悲痛;二“楊柳依依”與“雨雪霏霏”對比,突出不勝今昔之感;三大雪交加,饑渴難當(dāng),情境實(shí)悲,以哀景寫哀情。四、交流延伸1寫一首詩或一段文字表達(dá)你對“鄉(xiāng)愁”的新的體驗(yàn)。在全班交流。2課后搜集更多的表現(xiàn)鄉(xiāng)情的詩歌散文作品,將你最感動的一篇拿到班上與同學(xué)分享感受。
教學(xué)目標(biāo):1、知識與能力:①了解荊軻刺秦王的歷史背景和過程,整體感知課文。②掌握文言文中重要的字、詞、句解釋,提高翻譯能力。③學(xué)會從人物的對話、動作、神態(tài)描寫入手,分析主要人物形象。2、情感與態(tài)度:正確看待荊軻刺秦王這一事件,學(xué)會歷史而辯證地評價(jià)人物。重點(diǎn)難點(diǎn):評價(jià)歷史事件,分析人物形象。教學(xué)方法:朗讀法、提問法、討論法課時安排:三課時教學(xué)過程:第一課時一、導(dǎo)入:(課前展示雕塑照片)來到正定講課,我感到非常高興,一進(jìn)縣城,就被這里濃郁的歷史文化氣息所感染。我們住在華陽假日酒店,外面正在興建文化廣場,剛才的照片就是在那里拍攝的。在此,我進(jìn)一步了解到正定這座文化古城悠久的歷史淵源,這里有南越王趙佗,常勝將軍趙云,一代名家顏真卿等等,可謂物華天寶、人杰地靈。因此我相信我們正定中學(xué)的同學(xué)們一定都非常優(yōu)秀。這也讓我更深刻地體會到一個道理:語文的外延就是生活的外延。
教學(xué)過程:一、交流誦讀課文技巧。——節(jié)奏、韻腳、感情……(5分鐘)二、再讀確定自己的學(xué)習(xí)主題(15分)1、主題提示:音樂美、繪畫美、建筑美簡介詩歌“三美”追求聞一多先生是我國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)史上集詩人、學(xué)者和斗士于一身的重要詩人。他不但致力于新詩藝術(shù)美的探索,提出了音樂美、繪畫美、建筑美的詩歌\"三美\"的新格律詩理論主張,還努力進(jìn)行創(chuàng)作實(shí)踐,寫出了許多精美詩篇。他的新格律詩理論被后人稱為現(xiàn)代詩學(xué)的奠基石,影響深遠(yuǎn)?!对姷母衤伞肥锹勔欢嘞壬盗性娬撝凶钪匾囊黄T谶@篇論文中,他系統(tǒng)的提出\"詩的實(shí)力不獨(dú)包括音樂的美(音節(jié))、繪畫的美(詞藻),并且還有建筑的美(節(jié)的勻稱和句的均齊)。\"這一關(guān)于新詩\"三美\"主張遂成為新格律詩派的理論綱領(lǐng)。
三、想象畫面,把握意境1.指導(dǎo)想象學(xué)習(xí)陶淵明的《歸園田居》我們腦海中自然會出現(xiàn)一幅幅的畫面,比如他歸家后的生活場景,我們會想象“榆柳”是如何遮蔽房屋的,而“桃李”又是如何摘種在房前的。我們會想象村落是如何在薄霧中若隱若現(xiàn)的,想象炊煙是如何裊裊升起的?!渡娼绍饺亍芬辉娭挥?句話,更需要我們展開想象,去構(gòu)畫場景,這樣才能深入詩歌,體會到詩歌的味道。2.學(xué)生想象要求學(xué)生閉目想象1分鐘。3.學(xué)生展示想象結(jié)果(抽三四個學(xué)生回答即可)4.老師指導(dǎo)糾正學(xué)生想象不合理之處。要注意的地方:“江”可能學(xué)生會想象成小溪流、小池塘?!疤m澤”可能學(xué)生理解成“湖泊”。注意字詞“還顧”“漫浩浩”中隱含的情感,注意“離居”中流露的愁怨。5.時間允許的話,老師讀自己的下水作文。