教學(xué)目標(biāo)1.使學(xué)生通過(guò)“稱一稱”的實(shí)踐活動(dòng),親自感受1克和1千克的實(shí)際重量。2.通過(guò)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)使學(xué)生加深質(zhì)量單位的理解,讓學(xué)生深刻體會(huì)到質(zhì)量單位與實(shí)際生活是緊密聯(lián)系的,在實(shí)際生活中是非常有用的。3.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的動(dòng)手能力及創(chuàng)新意識(shí)。4.培養(yǎng)學(xué)生與他人的合作意識(shí)和分工合作的精神。重、難點(diǎn)與關(guān)鍵1.進(jìn)一步了解克和千克的質(zhì)量單位概念。能夠用老師提供的稱,來(lái)稱量物體質(zhì)量。2.鞏固對(duì)質(zhì)量單位實(shí)際概念是認(rèn)識(shí)。教具準(zhǔn)備天平,盤(pán)秤,適量的生活用品,如水果,蔬菜等。教學(xué)過(guò)程一、創(chuàng)設(shè)情境同學(xué)們這節(jié)課老師帶你們?nèi)コ泄湟还?,想去嗎?(出示課本第85頁(yè)情境圖)在超市里你看到了什么?指名回答。(餅干110克、豆油5千克、6個(gè)蘋(píng)果1千克……)這些都表示什么意思呢?指名回答。教師說(shuō)明表示物品有多重可以用克和千克作單位。那么在日常生活中有什么地方用到克與千克呢?舉例說(shuō)明。
教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:5分鐘(1)教師課前在教室里藏好一些動(dòng)物和人物的圖片。(2)給全班學(xué)生一分鐘時(shí)間尋找。(3)請(qǐng)找到圖片的學(xué)生根據(jù)圖片上的人物或動(dòng)物正在做的動(dòng)作表演對(duì)話?;顒?dòng)七:猜一猜教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:5分鐘(1)教師一只手拿一張圖片,另一只手用白紙遮住圖片,一邊慢慢抽動(dòng)白紙,一邊問(wèn):What are the…s doing? 學(xué)生用They are…猜圖片中的內(nèi)容。(2)猜對(duì)的學(xué)生上臺(tái)主持游戲。(3)教師也可以在白紙上剪幾個(gè)圓洞蓋在圖片上,慢慢移動(dòng)白紙的位置讓學(xué)生猜白紙下面圖片的內(nèi)容。(4)也可以分組利用詞卡做該游戲。4、Consolidation and extension (鞏固與擴(kuò)展)活動(dòng)八:練一練教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:5分鐘(1)活動(dòng)手冊(cè)Ask and write. 讓學(xué)生看一看兩個(gè)表格,找規(guī)律做問(wèn)答,然后再把表格中所缺單詞寫(xiě)出來(lái)。(2)活動(dòng)手冊(cè)Let’s find out.讓學(xué)生仔細(xì)觀察兩幅圖找出不同的地方,并用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)?;顒?dòng)九:小結(jié)教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:1分鐘本課我們學(xué)習(xí)了如何詢問(wèn)他、她、它們正在做什么What are they doing? 及回答:They are…5、板書(shū)
Teaching Goal:1. General aims:Talk about recent past events2. Particular aims:A. Language Focus.Talk about recent past events and think of the past events.B. Language goalsHow was….?It was …What did …do over the weekend?C. Language structures:(1). How was your weekend? I was great. Pay attention to no form.(2). What did you do over the weekend? I played soccer. We went to the beach.D. Useful words and phrases:Words: was, did, went, beach, over, project, test, wasn’t, false, number, geography, spend, week, most, mixture, their, had, little, cook, read, saw, change, everyone, sit, sat, no, anythingPhrases: did one’s homework, played soccer, cleaned my room, went to the beach, played tennis, went to the movies, on Saturday morning, over the weekend, cook … for, what about, do some reading, have a party, talk show, go shoppingE. Grammar language:Present simple past tenseRegular and irregular verbsF. Learning strategies:Tour and holidaysG. Interdiscipinary:H. Emotion and manner:Teaching time: 5 periodsTeaching procedures:Period One教學(xué)步驟、時(shí)間 教師活動(dòng) 學(xué)生活動(dòng) 媒體應(yīng)用Step 1Free talk 3’ Ask some questions like:Who’s on duty today?What’s the weather like? Answer and talk about something.讓同學(xué)們回答下列問(wèn)題1. Do you like weekend? (Let some students answer)It takes them three minutes to talk about the question.2. Why do you like weekend? (let the students answer) Most of the students like the weekend此時(shí)教師用漢語(yǔ)問(wèn):“在周末期間問(wèn)你干了什么?這句話用英語(yǔ)這么回答?Let the students guess.At last the teacher give them right answer3. What did you do over the weekend?(板書(shū)、學(xué)習(xí))
所需要用到的句子:Who is that?That is Jack. I like him.Why do you like him?I like him because he is interesting.Task 4: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中的人類Step one: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中的人類的外貌。把全班同學(xué)分成若干小組,學(xué)生可以邊說(shuō)邊在紙上畫(huà)出他們的模樣。Step two: 設(shè)計(jì)理想中人類的性格。學(xué)生們可以把那些能描述性格的單詞寫(xiě)在圖畫(huà)的旁邊。Step three: 每組選出一名同學(xué),其他同組同學(xué)提問(wèn),他作簡(jiǎn)單回答,并說(shuō)明原因。所需用到的句子:What does he or she look like?He or she ...What is he or she like?He or she is ...Why?Because ...Task 5: 挑戰(zhàn)性活動(dòng)調(diào)查性格是天生的還是后天形成的,讓每個(gè)同學(xué)回家去調(diào)查一下自己成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中性格是否有變化,具體是怎樣的,為什么會(huì)這樣? Teaching Aims:1. Enable students to have a general understanding of how to talk about people's physical appearance.2. Enable students to tackle some essential vocabularies and patterns about describing people. Provide them with necessary skills and methods.3. Create various chances for students to describe the persons they're familiar with, such as classmates, family members, teachers, idols, etc.
Period 2 (3a----Section B 2c)Preview(Pre-task): Key points: What laAdd another information about their pen pals----their language on the cardnguage does she/he speak?She/He speaks....Does she/he have any brothers and sisters? Does she/he speak English?Preview(Pre-task): Add another information about their pen pals----their language on the cardKey points: What language does she/he speak?She/He speaks....Does she/he have any brothers and sisters? Does she/he speak English?Step 1 Revision1.Revisionand dictation of the new words 2.Revise the drills they learned yesterday.(by pairwork and grammar exercise)Step 2 Leading-inT has a conversation with one student. The conversation is following:---Do you have a pen pal?---Yes, I do.---What's your pen pal's name? ---His/Her name is....---Where is your pen pal from? ---He/She is from...---Where does he/she live? ---He/She lives in....---What language does he/she speak?He/She speaks...Write the new words on the Bb. They are following: EnglishChineseJapaneseFrenchStep 3 LearnLearn the new words with the whole class.Finish 3a with the students3b Pairwork T still does an example with one student Then the Ss practise in pairs. The example is following:--Curry Muray is my pen pal. He is from the United States.---What language does he speak?
教學(xué)過(guò)程Step 1: warming-up Sing a song---------“food and drink” Step 2: Revision1 Dictation2 Revise: What kind of noodles would you like?I’d like …What size bowl of noodles would you like?I’d like…Step 3: Presentation1 show pictures of food, ask students say the words.2 Students read the newspaper ad in 3a. Fill in blanks with words in the box. Then read the ad together, the teacher explains some difficult language points.3 Check the answers Step 4 PracticeAsk students to finish 3b in the same way according to 3a. Students read the short passage and fill in the blanks .At last, check the answers.Step 5 productionAsk students to write their own ad for dumplings, noodles, drinks, and other foods they know. Then ask students to read their partner’s ad. Then order food and drink from their partner.Step 6 Home workGroup work – make an ad about “food and drink”
2.1Match the country with the language.Step II Reading3a? let the students read the letter fast and answer the questions.? Let the students ask more questions about the letter as possible as the can.Step III Writing3b.Step IV. Pairwork2cStep V Listening2a, 2bStep V. HomeworkExercises book(1) P3Exercises book (2) P3Period FourStep I . Dictate the words and sentences in Unit1.Step II. Self-checkStep III. Check the answers for Exercises book in the unit.Step IV. Home workRevise and preparation for unit 2.教學(xué)反思:通過(guò)本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生基本可以談?wù)撊藗兊膰?guó)籍,居住城市及其所說(shuō)的語(yǔ)言,通過(guò)書(shū)信方式去介紹自己并尋找筆友。但在涉及到國(guó)外的一些城市時(shí),學(xué)生對(duì)這方面的知識(shí)相對(duì)欠缺,能介紹的城市并不多,也反應(yīng)出學(xué)生課前預(yù)習(xí)不充分,這跟學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)條件也有關(guān),大多數(shù)學(xué)生無(wú)法通過(guò)網(wǎng)絡(luò)獲取所需信息。因此,在以后的教學(xué)中要多指導(dǎo)學(xué)生通過(guò)計(jì)算機(jī)網(wǎng)絡(luò)獲取信息,拓寬知識(shí)面。
句型: Where did you go on vacation? I went to summer camp.Did she go to Central Park?Yes,she did.No, she didn’t語(yǔ)法:一般過(guò)去時(shí)特殊疑問(wèn)句、一般疑問(wèn)句及肯、否定回答。課時(shí)安排4課時(shí)第一課時(shí):Section A:la,1b,lc,2a,2b,2c 第二課時(shí):Section A:3a,3b,4第三課時(shí):Section B:1,2a,2b,2c第四課時(shí):Section B:3a,3b,3c,4 and Self Check第一課時(shí)教學(xué)目標(biāo)掌握描寫(xiě)假期生活的形容詞。假期里自己所做事情的簡(jiǎn)單表達(dá)。談?wù)摷倨谧龅氖虑榧爱?dāng)時(shí)情況。談?wù)摷倨跁r(shí)旅游的天氣,旅游者以及食物等。教學(xué)過(guò)程一、導(dǎo)入播放一首英文歌曲:Let’s travel 說(shuō)明:通過(guò)讓學(xué)生聽(tīng)節(jié)奏歡快迪斯尼英語(yǔ)歌曲Let’s travel.引入本節(jié)課談?wù)摰脑掝}vacation and travel. 讓歌曲使學(xué)生的思維活躍,增強(qiáng)課堂氣氛,激發(fā)學(xué)生提高學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的興趣。T:How is the trip ?Ss : It’s pretty good/ happy/exciting /relaxing/busy/dangerous/ fantastic說(shuō)明:這個(gè)問(wèn)題是為了操練形容詞。建議讓多個(gè)Ss作答。鼓勵(lì)他們用不同的形容詞。上述個(gè)別形容詞本應(yīng)在第二課時(shí)中出現(xiàn),但可以在warming-up中第一次非正式出現(xiàn)。這些形容詞也可在老師的評(píng)價(jià)語(yǔ)中適時(shí)出現(xiàn),以加深學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯的印象。
單元整體說(shuō)明(一)單元教材分析本單元的核心話題是描述動(dòng)物和表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好,以及句式why do you like…? Because…。這也是本單元的教學(xué)重點(diǎn)。通過(guò)本單元的學(xué)習(xí),學(xué)生應(yīng)能較流利地運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯和句型描述動(dòng)物,表達(dá)個(gè)人喜好。(二)單元知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)1.詞匯動(dòng)物名稱 tiger, elephant, koala, dolphin, etc.詞匯描述性形容詞: smart, cute, ugly, clever, shy, etc.國(guó)家名: Australia, South Africa2.句型Why do you like koala hears? Because they are cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(三)單元整體目標(biāo)1.Master the vocabulary2.Master and use: Why do you like koalas? Because they am cute.Where are pandas from? They're from China.What animals do you like? I like dolphins.(四)單元教學(xué)重難點(diǎn)一覽(五)單元學(xué)情分析學(xué)生此前已經(jīng)學(xué)過(guò)由why, where, what 引導(dǎo)的特殊疑問(wèn)句句型,具有了學(xué)習(xí)本單元知識(shí)的認(rèn)知前提。形形色色的動(dòng)物能激發(fā)學(xué)生的好奇心,產(chǎn)生了解它們的欲望,這有利于本單元知識(shí)的教學(xué)和學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)興趣的培養(yǎng)。
學(xué)生搜集中外重要節(jié)日及部分中外名人的生日所在的月份。教師準(zhǔn)備相關(guān)節(jié)日及部分中外名人的圖片或音像資料片。教師課前準(zhǔn)備Let’s find out2的配圖畫(huà)好春、夏、秋、冬四個(gè)方框。錄音:Listen and number。教學(xué)過(guò)程:Warm up (熱身)活動(dòng)一復(fù)習(xí)單詞教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:3分鐘(1)教師播放Let’s chant部分的歌謠,學(xué)生聽(tīng)一遍后跟唱。(2)出示帶有各個(gè)月份特征的單詞卡片。學(xué)生看圖說(shuō)出單詞,并一起拼讀其縮寫(xiě)形式。幫助學(xué)生在有節(jié)奏的說(shuō)唱中鞏固記憶單詞,為在后面活動(dòng)中學(xué)生能夠熟練應(yīng)用作鋪墊?;顒?dòng)二 復(fù)習(xí)句子教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:5分鐘(1)師生同唱Let’s chant部分歌謠“When Is Your Birthday?”。(2)教師引導(dǎo)學(xué)生看歌謠下面的翻滾過(guò)山車的動(dòng)畫(huà),師生進(jìn)行問(wèn)答,如:When is the rabbit’s birthday? It’s in May. 等。教師示范后請(qǐng)學(xué)生進(jìn)行Pair work,也可以展開(kāi)競(jìng)賽的形式進(jìn)行“連鎖問(wèn)答”。鞏固有關(guān)生日問(wèn)答的語(yǔ)句,為L(zhǎng)et’s find out1的活動(dòng)做準(zhǔn)備。
教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:2—3分鐘教師讓學(xué)生說(shuō)出幾個(gè)家庭成員名稱,如:father, mother, sister, brother, uncle等,自己或讓學(xué)生把單詞寫(xiě)在黑板的一側(cè),再讓學(xué)生說(shuō)出幾個(gè)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)的-ing形式,如:washing clothes, writing an e-mail, watching TV等,寫(xiě)到黑板的另一側(cè)。學(xué)生在家庭成員名稱和動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)中分別選三至四個(gè),自己編成一首歌謠。課后,可以讓學(xué)生將創(chuàng)作的歌謠進(jìn)行展示或舉行歌謠朗讀比賽。5、Consolidation and extension (擴(kuò)展活動(dòng))活動(dòng)十:知識(shí)擴(kuò)展教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:1—2 分鐘教師讓學(xué)生打開(kāi)書(shū)第54頁(yè)Good to know 部分,了解主要國(guó)家的緊急救助電話。如:美國(guó),英國(guó),加拿大,澳大利亞等。教師還幫助學(xué)生了解我國(guó)的緊急救助電話號(hào)碼。教師可以利用道具電話讓學(xué)生做游戲?;顒?dòng)十一:練一練教學(xué)參考時(shí)間:2—3 分鐘做本單元B Let’s talk部分的活動(dòng)手冊(cè)第37頁(yè)的配套練習(xí)。教師講解題目要求。教師播放錄音,做Listen and number 部分練習(xí)。要求按所聽(tīng)內(nèi)容在圖上寫(xiě)出序號(hào)。再次播放,讓學(xué)生按錄音內(nèi)容填空。鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生自己讀讀所寫(xiě)句子。
學(xué)生初步了解對(duì)話內(nèi)容,在描述中培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。(2)教師讓學(xué)生自己閱讀本部分對(duì)話,不理解的生詞和句子可以和同學(xué)或老師共同商討。(3)教師幫助學(xué)生理解句子:“The weather report says it’s going to rain tomorrow. I can’t play football in the rain. I can’t go hiking, either. Let’s watch TV together.”出示圖片:1) 晴天,Zoom在踢足球,圖下顯示:today;2)天在下雨,Zoom和Zip在屋里看電視,圖下顯示:tomorrow。與學(xué)生展開(kāi)對(duì)話T:What’s the weather like today? S:It’s fine/ sunny. T:What does the weather report say about tomorrow?S:It’s going to rain.T:The weather report says it’s going to rain tomorrow.(呈現(xiàn)句子)(學(xué)生重復(fù)句子The weather report says it’s going to rain tomorrow.,并說(shuō)出意思。)T:Can you play football in the rain?S:No,I can’t.T:Can you go hiking ?S:No,I can’t.T:In the rain, we can’t play football. We can’t go hiking, either. (呈現(xiàn):either)學(xué)生跟讀either,感悟單詞的用法,教師講解意思:(不......),也不...啟發(fā)學(xué)生用either說(shuō)兩句話:In the rain, I can’t ... I can’t ..., either,從而在應(yīng)用中鞏固單詞的讀音和用法。
Don’t fight. =You can’t fight. (板書(shū),教讀)教師把這些句子板書(shū)在黑板上,并請(qǐng)學(xué)生大聲整齊地讀祈使句和“can’t”句型,并讓學(xué)生注意兩種句型表達(dá)形式的不同和轉(zhuǎn)換,“Don’t …=You can’t…”;并對(duì)學(xué)生說(shuō):These are our school rules. (板書(shū),教讀) You can’t break the school rules. Don’t break the school rules.(板書(shū),教讀)步驟3 :Practicea. T: Now, each of the students is breaking one of these rules.Please finish 1a.學(xué)生看圖,完成1a的內(nèi)容,檢查答案并大聲朗讀校規(guī)。b. 聽(tīng)錄音,完成1b,選出四位學(xué)生都違反了哪條校規(guī);聽(tīng)之前,學(xué)生要讀會(huì)英文名。c. 請(qǐng)兩位學(xué)生朗讀1c部分的句型;要求學(xué)生兩人一組對(duì)話表演,SA扮演外校轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)新生,SB告知本校校規(guī)。(學(xué)生可經(jīng)過(guò)討論,多說(shuō)出他們想到的校規(guī),不必只限于書(shū)上;教師應(yīng)給予幫助)2) 第二課時(shí)(2a~4)步驟1 :warming up of revisionT: What are the rules at your school?學(xué)生使用“can”或祈使句表達(dá)各條校規(guī);其中老師可引出“eat in the cafeteria outside”的表達(dá)。步驟2 :Practicea.T: Christina is an exchange student. She doesn’t know the rules. Let’s listen, what activities they’re talking about?學(xué)生聽(tīng)第一遍時(shí),完成2a;第二遍時(shí),完成2b;b. 請(qǐng)學(xué)生領(lǐng)讀2c部分,看著2a完成的表格,理解2c活動(dòng)的要求;分成小組針對(duì)2a進(jìn)行問(wèn)答;
三、教學(xué)建議第一課時(shí):1. Lead in (Vocabulary)A) Before class, teacher should collect some pictures of working places. For example: Bank, TV Station, Restaurant, Police Station, Hospital ...B) In class, show students the pictures (PowerPoint, OHP). Ask students to tell the name of the working places and the name of the jobs.Shop assistant, doctor, actor, reporter, police office, waiter, bank clerk, studentC) Do exercise 1a and 3a.2. Bingo GameAsk groups of students to make up pairs of cards with a job on one and the related workplace on the other. For example, waiter / restaurant, teacher / school, doctor / hospital. Encourage students to use both the job / workplace combinations in the book and the ones that students came up during class discussions. Be sure they have twice as many sets of cards as there are students in the group. They can make two sets of cards for a single job / workplace, if necessary. Then have each group mix up its set of cards and hand their cards out in random order. Each time a student gets a pair of cards that match, he or she can lay these cards down. The goal is to have no cards in your hand at the end.3. Task OneA) Ask students to work in pairs and ask the partner what does he / she want to be in the future.e. g. :What do you / does he / does she want to be?I want to be a.Why?Because it's (adj).B) Vocabulary: Section B, 1a4. Homework 1.2.
1 Each group choose one place to describe and what you are doing in it Choose one place, and describe what they are doing 2 Move around the room and give suggestions Talk about it and write it down 3 Ask one to show their works and act it Choose one of each group to make a report 4 Evaluate the best group and the best reporter Choose the best one Homework Ask your friends their ideal place and write about it教學(xué)反思:新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中強(qiáng)調(diào)學(xué)生在課堂中的主體地位,在綜合課中他們的主體地位就更加突出。在各個(gè)活動(dòng)中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì),從而產(chǎn)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來(lái)輔助教學(xué),效果更好。同時(shí)讓了解其他國(guó)家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知知識(shí),實(shí)現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。教案點(diǎn)評(píng):采用任務(wù)型教學(xué)模式,在各個(gè)活動(dòng)中給不同程度的學(xué)生不同層次的任務(wù),讓各層面的學(xué)生都有表現(xiàn)發(fā)揮的機(jī)會(huì),從而產(chǎn)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)的興趣。使用照片圖片多媒體來(lái)輔助教學(xué),效果更好。讓了解其他國(guó)家風(fēng)景,風(fēng)俗的同學(xué)介紹ideal place,增加學(xué)生的背景知識(shí),實(shí)現(xiàn)跨學(xué)科交流的目的。
五、教學(xué)Section B-2c1. Pair work: What do you think of the belt/sunglasses/…? What does your father/mother/… think of your scarf/belt…?2. Group work(1). Teacher shows some different kinds of school uniforms (制服)and asks : “ What do you think of your school uniforms? If you have a chance to choose your school uniforms, what kind would you like to choose?”(2). Discuss in groups.(3).Get some Ss to report in class.說(shuō)明:這一步旨在讓學(xué)生運(yùn)用已有的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)談?wù)搶?duì)事物的看法和意見(jiàn),并簡(jiǎn)單闡明理由,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的主動(dòng)思維能力和運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)的能力。六、教學(xué)拓展調(diào)查電視節(jié)目的收視率任務(wù):調(diào)查你周圍的人對(duì)現(xiàn)在各種電視節(jié)目的反響?;顒?dòng)過(guò)程:1.教師布置任務(wù),讓學(xué)生調(diào)查周圍的人(包括他的親戚朋友和鄰居)喜歡收看哪方面的電視節(jié)目。2.學(xué)生進(jìn)行調(diào)查活動(dòng),運(yùn)用本單元所學(xué)的句型What do you think of….? (Why?)What's your favorite game shows?What do you think of talk show?I doesn’t mind it.I like it.I love it.I can’t stand it.3.記錄下排在前10位的TV Program,填寫(xiě)調(diào)查表,比較其收視率。
3.小組討論:詩(shī)人為我們呈現(xiàn)出了什么樣的人間四月天圖景?結(jié)合詩(shī)句分析。教師:把學(xué)生分為6至8個(gè)小組討論,最后每組選出代表回答,教師點(diǎn)評(píng)各組答案,最后指正。教師指正:詩(shī)人為我們呈現(xiàn)了一幅清新明麗、溫潤(rùn)豐美的人間四月天圖景。和煦的微風(fēng)在春光里飛舞,黃昏的云煙彌漫,繁星在夜空閃爍,細(xì)雨灑落在花前,百花鮮艷、婀娜,夜夜的月光皎潔明凈,草是鵝黃的,芽是嫩綠的,蓮是潔白的,繁花一樹(shù)樹(shù)綻放,春燕一雙雙呢喃。四、課堂小結(jié)1.這首詩(shī)歌我們已經(jīng)學(xué)習(xí)完了,下面請(qǐng)同學(xué)們概括歸納一下主題。教師:要求一至兩名學(xué)生歸納,最后教師指正。預(yù)設(shè):這首抒情詩(shī)中,詩(shī)人使用了描寫(xiě)和抒情的表達(dá)方式,極力抒寫(xiě)“你”是“人間的四月天”,表達(dá)了對(duì)愛(ài)的熱烈歌頌。2.分析明晰本詩(shī)寫(xiě)法,體會(huì)寫(xiě)作特色。(教師講解,學(xué)生記錄)
例如《你是山間的清泉》《你是天空的雄鷹》《你是三春暉》《你是燃燒的紅燭》等。先想好歌頌的對(duì)象,再展開(kāi)聯(lián)想、想象,結(jié)合事物的特點(diǎn),融入自己的情感。如要寫(xiě)“母親”,想想由母親的特質(zhì)可以聯(lián)想到什么具體形象,如從母親的勤勞想到老黃牛,從母親對(duì)孩子無(wú)私的愛(ài)和付出聯(lián)想到陽(yáng)光、雨露、蠟燭等。 范文引路:五、課后鞏固,布置作業(yè)(福建漳州)題目:守護(hù) (將題目補(bǔ)充完整,然后作文)要求:(1)文體不限,字?jǐn)?shù)不少于600字(詩(shī)歌不少于30行)。(2)不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名。(3)字跡工整,卷面整潔。 寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥:預(yù)設(shè):本題是半命題作文題,題目“守護(hù)”是一個(gè)動(dòng)詞后面可以跟賓主,如“快樂(lè)”“向往”“媽媽”“歌聲”等,或抽象或具體,都可以,還可以擬題“守護(hù)者”等?!笆刈o(hù)”分為幾個(gè)層面:誰(shuí)守護(hù)?守護(hù)什么?怎樣守護(hù)?守護(hù)結(jié)果如何?如此等等??梢宰プ∑渲幸粋€(gè)層面,寫(xiě)敘事詩(shī)、抒情詩(shī)、論辯色彩濃郁的詩(shī)等。從題目要求看,詩(shī)歌不少于30行,這么長(zhǎng)的詩(shī)歌適合分為幾個(gè),通過(guò)幾個(gè)片段、鏡頭、故事、感想等來(lái)表現(xiàn)主題。
分析是聯(lián)系論據(jù)與論點(diǎn)的橋梁,是豐富文章內(nèi)容的關(guān)鍵所在。有了分析,事例和論點(diǎn)就能成為有機(jī)的統(tǒng)一體;只有通過(guò)理性的分析,剖析出事例與論點(diǎn)之間的關(guān)系,才能讓文章?lián)碛辛钊诵欧倪壿嬃α?。總結(jié):運(yùn)用論據(jù)的時(shí)候,對(duì)論據(jù)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)淖兓?、概括、分析,要有重點(diǎn)、有意識(shí)地突出所述事實(shí)論據(jù)和觀點(diǎn)一致的地方,保證所述事實(shí)與觀點(diǎn)相對(duì)應(yīng)。可參照“分論點(diǎn)+事例+對(duì)事例進(jìn)行分析+結(jié)論(照應(yīng)分論點(diǎn))”這樣的格式來(lái)進(jìn)行論證。【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】以學(xué)生小組討論來(lái)得出運(yùn)用論據(jù)的三個(gè)方法 ,讓學(xué)生自己在交流討論中品味體驗(yàn)。通過(guò)“討論”“交流”等形式實(shí)現(xiàn)學(xué)生的自主學(xué)習(xí),達(dá)到培養(yǎng)學(xué)生獨(dú)立思考能力和寫(xiě)作表達(dá)能力的目的。五、品讀例文,評(píng)點(diǎn)“言之有據(jù)”1.根據(jù)文題,畫(huà)思維導(dǎo)圖課件出示:《論語(yǔ)·為政》中說(shuō):“人而無(wú)信,不知其可也?!闭\(chéng)信,自古以來(lái)就是一種美德。欺詐、造假等不講誠(chéng)信的現(xiàn)象歷來(lái)為人們所深惡痛絕。請(qǐng)以《談?wù)\信》為題,嘗試畫(huà)一個(gè)議論文的思維導(dǎo)圖。
我認(rèn)為這首詩(shī),一共三節(jié),每節(jié)句數(shù)、字?jǐn)?shù)相當(dāng),結(jié)構(gòu)工整,符合建筑美的特點(diǎn),同時(shí)也使詩(shī)歌具有了節(jié)奏感;另外這首詩(shī)音韻和諧,朗朗上口。我認(rèn)為這首詩(shī)相同句式回環(huán)往復(fù),給人留下深刻印象。我認(rèn)為此詩(shī)語(yǔ)言猶如清水出芙蓉,清麗淡雅,營(yíng)造了唯美純凈的世界。…………師:節(jié)奏把握這一技巧相對(duì)比較簡(jiǎn)單,大家的創(chuàng)作和點(diǎn)評(píng)都很有水準(zhǔn),很好。希望大家在以后課余的詩(shī)歌創(chuàng)作中能兼顧到我們現(xiàn)在所談的技巧。【設(shè)計(jì)意圖】講詩(shī)歌的創(chuàng)作技巧,既要講出最關(guān)鍵的技巧,也要結(jié)合實(shí)例,讓講解深入淺出,讓學(xué)生在理解的同時(shí)加以訓(xùn)練,使學(xué)生能夠加深對(duì)知識(shí)點(diǎn)的理解。三、課內(nèi)演練,鞏固技法 學(xué)習(xí)本節(jié)課的技法之后,請(qǐng)大家寫(xiě)一首詩(shī)或一個(gè)詩(shī)歌片段,要求運(yùn)用本節(jié)課所講的詩(shī)歌寫(xiě)作技巧。(學(xué)生思考創(chuàng)作并展示)